Penname: KeiKei [Contact]

Real name: Keiondra Sanders

Member Since: March 03 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 99]
Summary:

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Could she not comprehend that he had a reckoning to deliver?

The Fire Rises



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 39404
Read Count: 34837
Published: April 09 2013
Updated: August 26 2016


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So is there someting wrong with his heart and the venom is keeping him alive? Barsad is upset because he liked you dummy! Now he knows that's not going to happen or he will die trying to get at you.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: December 31 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So this Batman is a fake... Interesting. Why is he after Bane then? Why did he drop her off there? That's just cruel.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: December 31 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Damn, I thought Bane had gotten there in time. So who has her now? What in the world is going on. How did this Valley guy find Nem and Bruce needs to come off the location of the bastard. He is, afterall, pretending to be you while he kills people.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 01 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What in the holy fuck. How did they know to get to her in time? Now she has to deal with this. How did she know about all of this with both Orders? At least she was truthful about who Bane really is. She isn't completely dick whipped. LOl. Really Lee? I truly want your dumb ass to die.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 01 2016

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Damn, she is no joke. Don't mess with the scientist!!! Did this damn girl inject herself with the venom??? Oh Lord

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 01 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I don't know whether to be happy or questionable. I'm glad that she is improving but why did she do that for Nem? She made it very clear that she didn't like her. So why even go to those lengths to help her? Or is it her own selfish way of protecting herself and getting back into her brother's good graces?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 01 2016

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Not unnecessary Bane. You still need to get those answers from the Nurse. She will crack. I have no doubt that his sister did this for her own selfish reasons.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 01 2016

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh shit... What in the world did that damn child do now? I told you to get those answers Bane. Talk to the Nurse and then talk to your so called sister. She just needs to be killed. She is a complete waste of time. You spend more time fixing the shit she messes up than working on whatever you planned.. Like seriously!

Update soon!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 01 2016

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow... I'm still not sure about how to feel about this voice in her head. It doesn't seem normal at all. I feel like that voice is going to cause some bad things to happen sooner or later. I think that Bane isn't asking enough questions and it's going to kick him in the ass in the end. He still needs to kill his so-called sister. I don't trust her at all. 

Update soon. I almost forgot what was going on in this story. Keep it up

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 27 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

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Troubled FBI Special Agent Michael Wolfe knows his fair share of loss and pain.  As a criminal profiler within the Behavioural Analyst Unit, he has seen many horrors. But none more haunting than witnessing the death of his wife. Consumed with grief and guilt Michael drowns himself in work.  His partner Special Agent Patrick Kepler suggests a very unconventional form of therapy.  Will he take it?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3656
Read Count: 12939
Published: June 06 2013
Updated: October 14 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Xanax

Wow... That's an interesting beginning. I wonder how and why she died. I would be traumatized if my husband died in front of me too.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Lithium

What does he mean no was never an option? I don't like how that sounds.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: October 20 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40859
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

That's adorable. I know this conversation about Hanna is not going to be good but Mila deserves to know the truth. It will set you both free. She is stronger than you think and she can handle knowing this. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 08 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I'm glad that her father is making her work. It won't be hard, hell she's working for her own damn company. There's that spoiled attitude, he's being professional. What do you expect him to say? I'm glad I didn't sleep with you the other night because you're the boss' daughter? Be real. You do have a degree after all. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 07 2016

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Yay!!!! They both confessed and are going to be together now. Totally awesome. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 08 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Well... Now that that's over. Let's get down to business. Because having sex is in no shape, form, or fashion resing. LOl. I can't believe it was Paul. Why though? That's the question. And who was the other guy in this lil gang. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 08 2016

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

That's because you are trying to convince yourself homie! You want that girl. Stop fighting it, it's just going to hurt you and her in the end. You are no better than Hanna, playing with that girl's emotions. You can't make love to her and then tell her it's a mistake hours later. That junk is not okay. Just be real with the damn girl and see what happens. She might surprise you. Sidenote... Who is Oliver? I feel like I've seen that name before. Was he in book 1? Why does Oliver want to stop the Roberts company soo bad? Who is Carlos? Does he work for Mr. Roberts too? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 08 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I'm soooo glad this story continues from journey 1. I was worried that it wouldn't since it was focused on someone else. Yay!!! 

Elise shouldn't be ashamed of who she is. Everyone, whether or not they will admit it wishes they had the luxuries she does. They might not react to it the way she does but we all want riches and the good life. I commend her for still being a great friend, it's hard to find people like that these days. I commend Lukas for stepping up and being a single father. Mila's biological mother is fucked up for abandoning her like that but in the end it's going to be her that misses out on her life. I can not understand how any parent can just abandon their child like that. Just ungrateful for the chance to bring a new life into this world. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 07 2016

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I'm glad that Elise got to go out and just hang. It's great that she got set up for someone else. LOl. She's probably not used to being in the wing man position. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 08 2016

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I really want to know what this Oliver character is up to and why. I hope Elise gets the relief she needs and Lukas gets the guidance he needs too. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 08 2016

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I don't know how I would feel about my friend doing that honestly. I know it was done with good intentions but still. IDK. At least he realizes how he feels now. Hopefully he can get it together before it's too late. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 08 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Damn.. I want a kiss to bring me that. But I think I would be scared shitless. LOl. I wonder who he is calling? Mila's maternal family maybe? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 07 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Wow..... I'm glad that he got that off his chest though. She needed to hear that, this is not a game. It's people's lives and I don't think she fully gets that. Maybe she was starting to but she has yet to completely understand the magnitude her actions can have. Thank goodness he wasn't too far away because that could have been extremely bad for Elise. She could have been seriously injured or died. I wonder how the metal was loose in the first place. I'm sure that it's someone's job to make sure that those things are secure for those exact reasons. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 07 2016

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I hope everything is okay with his family in Germany and his daughter. Lord, this girl has put herself in harm's way again for this man. At least he didn't have to save her this time. LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 07 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Hell no she can't. She belongs to Lukas. Sorry, tall, dark and handsome. Funny how the past always comes back when you least expect it. Hopefully she doesn't try to make things work with Keith just to not think about Lukas, that is not going to help anything but will make everything worse. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 07 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Lol. I can see why he doesn't feel lucky. Why would this girl show up to a construction site in a short fitted skirt? She really has no clue. At least wear a fitted pants suit. Do you plan to screw Lukas in the trailer? No, so come to work prepared to work. I bet she has on heels too. Smh. LOl. I wonder what's going on with Kori? She seems to have been hiding something since the first book. 



Author's Response:

Lol...I adore your reviews....Kori's life will be covered fully in book 3

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 07 2016

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