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Real name: Keiondra Sanders

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Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103482
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Chapter 3: Rise and Shine

That's amazing. I'm glad that he continued to go to check on her. Seems like every post thus far as made me like Macy less and less. Anyone who throws around the N word is a piece of shit in my book. Black or white. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 21 2016

Title: Chapter 2: The End

Macy is a bitch. How can you say that? Any decent person would at least try to check on that person out of genuine concern for their well being. You would want someone to do that for you  if they almost kill you with their car. How rude. I like Brian, you can tell he has a big heart. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 21 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Working Girl

That's adorable. I must say, she did a damn good job on her first day working. Yes, he did work her like a slave but she killed it! I'm sure Darren will have no problems keeping her around. I feel like it was just a test anyway, to see if she could truly handle working for him. I'm glad that she didn't allow him to kiss her, there is already enough tension in the house from Macy to add that to it. I'm surprised she wasn't lurking around the corner watching them anyway. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 11: The Pier

She is an evil manipulating biotch!!! She is the abolsute worst! Using a fake baby to keep a man. If you can't keep him on your own then you don't deserve him and a baby is never going to change that. I can't believe she pushed Kelly down the stairs! I would have kicked her ass after my wrist got better. She needs to tell Brain what that woman is doing to her! You don't deserve to be abused, you didn't ask for this to happen. Y'all hit her! The hell!!! Maybe this PI will be able to help Kelly find out about her past too. It may not be bad but I know Macy will use it to cause her harm. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 12: Confessions

Damn!!!! So that's how Zoey/Kelly got into the mess she was in. That's fucked up, you sell your wife to your drug dealer to save yourself! You don't deserve her and whe she regains her memory, I hope she divorces your ass. You don't deserve to get over that. Now I'm not sure I want Kelly to regain her memory, that's horrible. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 13: Dinner

Lol. How shitty you must feel to know that the man you are supposed to marry's parents don't like you but love the woman you think is intruding on your life. Haha!!!!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 14: Strange Behavior

I wonder what Macy is going to do when Brian doesn't let up on getting that doctor's info. It's going to blow up in her face. I hope he isn't screwing her without a condom now because she is 'pregnant'. I can't wait for him to find out, maybe that will put the last nail in the coffin and he will leave her ass! That is horrible. Her husband used to treat her like that. Dang near forcing her to have sex with you so you would stop beating her! That's still rape dude!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 15: A Break In the Case

I'm glad to know that Harvey at least felt like she was more than a job. I don't want him to tell Macy anything. Especially the news of her past, its going to be used to destroy Zoey/Kelly and that's not cool at all. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 16: Closer

Wow... He should be ashamed. While I do not like you're fiance, she still is that. Respect that notion. If you want to be with Kelly then break things off with Macy and keep it moving. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 17: Trust Your Gut

I'm glad that Brian isn't completely oblivious to what is happening with that fiance of his. I love his dad's idea though. If she refuses then you know what's up. A pregnant woman would not object to seeing her child with the father if he was as excited about it as she was. I hope that with this newfound information, the PI decides not to tell Macy rather go directly to Kelly and tell her about her own life. Don't allow Macy to throw that in her face. It would not be good. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 18: Looking for Answers

Yessssss!!!! FINALLY!!! Brian get your life back baby!!!! I'm soo glad that he did this because had she faked a miscarriage then she would have his behind completely. She doesn't deserve him at all. It's sad that his brother was killed like that and now it makes sense why he did all that for Kelly. I'm sure it's what he wishes he could have done for his brother. Awww.... 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 19: Night Out

I see Mr. Darren is catching feelings for D. He has met his match and now she is giving him a dose of his own damn medicine. That's what he gets. I think they would be cute together!!! I wonder what info Harvey did give that witch or if she will even use it now that things are already broken off. I don't know what it is but something about Adam has me off... Can't put my finger on it but something about him is off to me. 

Update soon! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 14 2017

Title: Chapter 20: Jealous

How freaking bitter do you have to be to do that to somebody. Seriously?? You drench everything in bleach?! You don't deserve all the shit Brain brought for you either but no one is complaining!! I'm just glad she didn't find the journal, I'm sure that would have been destroyed too or even worse. Now Brain is getting a small dose of what Kelly felt seeing you and your ex fiance. 

Update soon.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 20 2017

Title: Chapter 21: Adulting

Darren is right, he better get with the program and get Kelly before ol boy does. They are soo right for each other but they both need to stop fighting it. And why is he tripping about Danica not wanting more than sex? Isn't that what he was complaining about weeks ago? You got exactly what you asked for. Don't trip now! 

UPdate soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 21 2017

Title: Chapter 23: Revenge

Such a tease!!! I do not like Macy with everything in me. I can't believe she reached out to her ex husband and father. I'm glad that she will find her father but I know finding out about her past and how she ended up in Chicago is going to crush her, I just don't think she is emotionally ready for that. But she does deserve to know. I just wish the private investigator would have reached out to her and told her what he found and how he was able to find it.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: June 20 2017

Title: Chapter 24: Games

I'm surprised. I don't think I would have let that go on for a whole week without jumping his bones (literally)!! But I can see where it makes the sex that much better. You are anticipating it more and more so it's like the big bang. Lol. I'm proud of her though! 

Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Right! She did good by not running away. LOL Brian was really showing out.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: June 20 2017

Title: Chapter 26: Uninvited Pt. 2

I hope her damn memories await her. She needs to remember her father and the scum that she married. She needs to remember that he sold her to the said drug dealer, the one she dreamed about raping her. I'm glad that Brian is going to go with her, she is truly going to need the support when she gets her memories back. And she's going to need him to beat Henry's behind up and down ATL. 

Update soon! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 12 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

Based on the events of Thor: The Dark World. Loki thought he could get away with hiding Odin, and Thor is done giving him chances to redeem himself. He then makes a deal with Surtur to marry his daughter, Senta. Senta is the warrior princess of Muspelheim, she has to find away to get her father back to rule over Muspelheim. That's when she meets the silver-tongued god. Loki doesn't know what he's up against when he encounters the fiesty princess, but he knows he wants her to be his.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Laufeyson and Surturdottir
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 24865
Read Count: 10940
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: November 29 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great picture of Asmund. He looks like an ass in that picture. LOl. I wonder how this is going to play out. Is she going to try and get at Thor or will she fall in love with Loki and will he ever change? 



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks for reading and enjoying! I can't tell you too much, but Thor is just a side character, and Loki is the main love interest. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 07 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Thor so I had to read this. LOl. Men and their damn ideals sometimes. Miss me with that crap. She could have possibly saved all of your lives and your upset because she gave him what he wanted? Seriously? Who wouldn't want to marry Thor? LOl. One fine Asgardian. Why would marrying Loki get them both out of prison? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 07 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Dang Bani is just as mean as his damn mama. Bitter ass woman. I wonder how they are going to play this with child business. How do they plan on getting her father out of prison? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 08 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow. Just that damn fast and he is out of prison. I can't believe that crap. Now her brothers are coming to get her right? I want Loki to die. Seriously. I feel bad for Senta, she is just an innocent girl who wants to impress her father and explore with universe. Now she is caught up in this drama. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 08 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Interesting.... Is he really interested in her? So now that she knows that he is a Frost Giant will she start to like him because he is different??? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 08 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh wow. So now the brothers and that ass are going to come to Asgard and start another war. This sucks ass! She is stuck no matter where she goes. I hope Odin wakes up. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 08 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow. She attacked that scum. I'm glad. Look at Loki attacking her brother for her. I think they will fall for each other because of all the crap around them. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 08 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Senta is beautiful. I'm glad that they finally got together, I think she may have some affect on him. Make him better, I know he won't be good but better is great too. LOl. I wonder if Odin is going to find out if she is really with child. She lost her virginity to Loki!! Dang Thor, just walking in like that. Rude!!! LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: May 08 2015

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