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Real name: Keiondra Sanders

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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215304
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I commend him for looking for his daughter even though his family was completely against it. A good man. Now this co parenting thing... Interesing. Look at him, getting a hard on lol. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 01 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Aww she adopted her. This meeting is going to be interesting... Since she is black and he may not be a Klansman but he was raised to be one... 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 01 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Wow.... She is better than me. I would have slapped her. She is completely disrespectful and she has no right to. Is she jelous of her or something. Where did that come from? I understand her being cautious because of who he is and his family name but she over stepped her boundaries. If the Rev accepted him into the church then she should just deal with it or leave. Plain and simple. She is just as bad as the whites who cling to the Klan mentality. All whites aren't bad just like all blacks aren't bad. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 01 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

Aww how has he been hurt? Besides losing the mother of his child and his family basically disowning him? They are already attracted to each other. LOl. One big happy family

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 01 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

I like your approach. It's not just about them, even though I can't stand his family or the Klan. These people are so narrow minded. Putting petty beliefs before their own family. At the end of the day, family is all you have, not sadistic and egotistical ideals. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 01 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Oh okay... I read that wrong.. I thought she was half black. My b. Now his mother is a straight up bitch. That is your flesh and blood and you want to disown him because he doesna't want to be a Klansman? In what world is is frowned upon to step up and be a father to the children you create??? I wouldn't want to be apart of any family like that.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 01 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hope you update soon!!! 

 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 15 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Sorry, I had to add my reviews again. I had no idea I was signed out. LOol I was too interested in reading to even check. Haha

 

Update soon!!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 34

Awww man... This is not going to be good when they do get back. I wonder what they are going to do. Burn the house down? Wait for them to get back and be hidden in the woods? In the house? Oh God. This is not going to be good. 

 

I'm glad I caught up though. I can't wait for the next add!!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 31

I'm glad that he went home with them. Camille is right, they need to leave there. I hope those bastards to get put in jail for abusing him. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 32

I can't believe this crap!! If you care for your son's whereabouts so much report it to the police!! That dick hungry birtch Debbie is lower than scum. They all are

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 33

I'm really glad that they found the Kellers. Now Savvy can really be connected to her birth mother. I hope they get out, I just know something is about to happen. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 29

I woder if he will share this information with his family. Shatter their perfect little life. Aww she said her first word!!! That is one of the greatest moments of parenthood. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 30

I can't believe that they are doing that to poor little Steven. I hope that he doesn't have to go back home with them. Hiram and Camille should take him with them. But at the same time, he needs to go to school. They all need to run off to New York

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 28

Oh Lord, I know that Savvy will be alright. Now I want to know where this Black in her comes from. Tell me now!! LOL

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 26

Now that's how you start the new year!!! LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 27

That trick is soo desperate it is absolutely ridiculous. Her mother is right, let it go. She is going to get people killed and herself killed over a man that does not want her. She has already gotten a man killed and Hiram put in jail over ther obsession. How far will this go. 

 

I feel soo bad for Steven. How could they treat him like that? He is a child, why would anyone want to destroy his innocence like that? He can't have friends now? If he doesn't want to live that way then fine. Shit, kids don't always turn out the way parents want, that's apart of life. Beating him senseless isn't going to change anything. I hope he gets away and finds Hiram

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 29: Secound Act

I'm loving this plotline. Can't wait to get the juice!!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

It's crazy to think that your own family and close friends will turn on you in the blink of an eye. I would have tried to kill them all, it was either that or they hang you like they would anyone else. But of course he was arrested. At least it was just that. The police could have just delivered him to the Klan or something like that. I hope they get out, I know that bitch is still looking for him.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

This was great. What a Christmas gift that is!!! Haha. LOl.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

I can't believe they actually said those things to her face. Their entire family is a peice of shit and will be dealt with accordingly. That is simply horrible. A damn reputation over your own flesh and blood. All she did was come into this world looking different. I wonder how many Baxters there were out there whose skin was a lil darker than what they expected. Her dark skin had to come from somewhere.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 37

Yay!!! I'm glad that its over. I know they are going to get custody of lil Stevie and Savannah is just too cute. They are going to get married! I'm super excited. I wouldn't have cared if the police killed Ruth. That lady is absolutely crazy. The truth is staring you in the face and you still can't accept it? Seriously?? Get a damn grip, its over and your honorable husband was a piece of shit.

Update soon!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 13 2015

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Damn... I wouldn't want parent like that at all. A child is a blessing that should never be taken for granted. I can't believe that they would just abandon and act like she didn't exist. Now it's like Hiram's family is doing that to him. Truly sad. Can't imagine how that would feel

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 01 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Supporting Cast 1

Look at TD Jakes!! LOl 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 01 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12

Aww man. This trick here is about to cause all kinds of uproar over somebody who doesn't want her and never did. Desperate ass females. I figured someone would see them at the store but did it have to be her of all people. Geesh! They are too cute together, I'm mad the doctor walked in before Hiram could get his flirt on. LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 01 2015

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