Penname: KeiKei [Contact]

Real name: Keiondra Sanders

Member Since: March 03 2015

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Journey (Book 1 - Devyn's Journey) by kwajeraspen
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104078
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014

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Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26

That's right Mama Bear Get your family right and protect it from those bitches. They done messed up now! I feel bad for Chris and Jason's relationship. I hope they are able to fix it. I feel like some of his anger is mis-directed. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27

I must say, I'm proud of daddy Westmore for doing that. I hope he is ready for the task ahead because Christopher will not be a small feat. He is going to take a lot of work. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 28

Damn..... Daddy Westmore doesn't play any games. But I'm overjoyed. That family gets exactly what they deserve and more. Hehe

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29

OMG... That chick is that crazy over her 'status' that she tried to kill Jason?! I'm glad that his dad protected him like a father should though. Thank God that his surgery was successful and that he's going to be alright. Trust me Jason, she knows that now.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30

Yay... I'm sooo glad that everything worked out. Now I did not see her being pregnant at the end even though I know they were having sex unprotected. I'm happy all the same! Great story. 



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Again thank you for reading...I am overjoyed.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016
Mother of the Heir by Asia Ralaia Schiegoh
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

mother of the heir

 

"My ascension to Hell is far from what you're after; the birth of the End of Days is hardly suited for the faint of heart. Even if it was my fate from a life before this one. No one teahes you how to trust yourself in times of uncertainty. Nor do they warn you about the power of your own vulnerability. The worst part is knowing too late that you're never whole until a vampire has consumed you into the absolute darkness."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Horror
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 73939
Read Count: 19273
Published: January 27 2012
Updated: May 11 2018

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Title: Chapter 2: Prologue I : 30 B.C.E.

Wow. What happened to her? So he is a vampire and he didn't turn his wife into one? Okay

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 14 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Prologue II : 28 BCE

Aw man she died! How crazy. I was wondering how she was able to get pregnant by a vampire but she isn't one herself. So when she comes back she will be a vampire or a human?

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 14 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Prologue III : Present Day

So she is having a miscarriage. That's so sad. Why do they hate each other soo much? They were in love!

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 14 2015
Title: Chapter 5: ONE : Church of Chains

Interesting. She didn't remember him until he bit her. She was just too willing to take those pills. Is he going to take her now?

Update soon

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 15 2015
Title: Chapter 6: TWO : Dismal Discourse

Is that a warning? Is he trying to tell her that she will die if she doesn't follow the rules or something?

Update soon

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 15 2015
Title: Chapter 7: THREE : The Union of Us

Interesting. So this Demys character is planning something against the vampires. He must be a hunter. I know this is going to be a shit show if their plan works. They are trying to kill all the old people of the families. Can't continue on the traditions and whatnot without them. 

UPdate soon

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 13 2016
Title: Chapter 8: FOUR : The Fallacy of Fear

Wow... Why won't he turn her? If it's that much of a problem within your society? That way, you don't have to search for her again. She will always be there with you. I don't blame them for saying no though, why should I call you the Empress of vampires if you aren't even one yourself? What sense does that make? 

You are right, there is a lot of dialogue in this chapter. Some more background information would be nice. If even about the setting and atmosphere sorrounding the dialogue would be good. I think it would give us a fuller picture of what is going on. Might allow us to see the story come alive in our minds more. I hope I made sense. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 16 2017
Title: Chapter 9: FIVE : The Greensleeve Gamble

The right memories?! Are there bad memories you don't want her to have? Soo Lycans are like Wolves? Is the dude that's the snitch a vampire too or do he just work for them? I hope the royal family survives. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 17 2017
Title: Chapter 10: SIX : Under The Umbrage

Are you freaking serious? Why in the hell would they give Marc to those horrid things? As a means to get Nef I'm sure. That's jacked up. I can't believe Olie attacked his sister like that. I mean, yeah she betrayed the family but she still is family you ass! I wonder why her family is working with the lycans? I mean, wouldn't they hunt them too? They can't just hunt vampires. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 20 2017
Title: Chapter 11: SEVEN : Minds in Motion

That love scene was intense. She has to beg to cum?! I don't think so! And did those people just bite Marc!!! What are they putting inside him? Are they making him one of them? Oh Lord, they know she is going to trust Marc no questions and he might attempt to kill her without even knowing. Dang!!!!

Update soon! 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 20 2017
Born to sin by sweetrst1
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Kylie and her best friend samantha uncover a secret about their families that they would have rather not known. After reaching the age where their curse is activated they will no longer be able to face the world as human beings. Instead they will have to learn to deal with the fact that they were dark creatures and meant to live a life of sin but Kylie has other things in mind.

 

This story may shock and surprise you and will contain twisted violence as well as odd sexual exploits. though it is graphic contains heavy christian spiritualiity. Just warning you!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:No
Word count: 29218
Read Count: 14699
Published: October 14 2012
Updated: July 16 2017

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

What in the world is going on?!! I'm soo confused. But I'm extremely intrigued as well.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 4

Wow... So be a killing whore or live a life on the run. What a decision. Lol

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 5

Oh no! Sam is going to be killing whore!! That's horrible. So each one has a special power or something? What are Sam's and Kye's powers going to be? Will they have to fight each other?

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 5

Oh no! Sam is going to be killing whore!! That's horrible. So each one has a special power or something? What are Sam's and Kye's powers going to be? Will they have to fight each other?

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh crap! Where in the world is the uncle??? Is Kianna okay? What does this damn girl have to do to accept their bond? She's messing everything up. What if they kill him? Kill any of them? I hope she remembers her training.

Update soon!!!

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 3

Wow... So they don't age and they live forever. So how old is Kye's sister actually? This is sooo interesting.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Aww, it must hurt to have your mate tell you that. They know you are supposed to be together but I'm going to fight it anyway.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

She definitely needs to learn that trick. I'm glad she isn't a dark creature anymore

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Girl you are stuck with his fine ass!!! Not a bad life though. LOl. I loved that history lesson. It's sad that the African American race has fallen into that mindset and that we as a people still live in that cage.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016
Title: Chapter 18: note

I think your story is great so far. I would maybe add more detail. So that we understand everything that's happening. Maybe more background of how these different lives work or something.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: January 15 2016

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