Penname: KeiKei [Contact]

Real name: Keiondra Sanders

Member Since: March 03 2015

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Chance. I don't believe in it. Everything that happens in our life happens for a reason. I've always believed that. But, it's funny. Who would have thought a night of clubbing could result in my marriage to the tattooed quarterback for the San Francisco 49ers?    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 88367
Read Count: 172463
Published: March 16 2013
Updated: March 14 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Mother?

That is sad. You didn't want him as a child and now that he is famous you want to be apart of his life? It's too late now. You don't get to just swoop in and enjoy the benefits of his hard work. It doesn't work like that. And why doesn't she want to tell him about his birth father? The least you could do is that. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Title: Chapter 2: The Morning After

Oh wow!!! So not  only did you get drunk like you said you wouldn't but you got married to Colin! This is interesting. Who is at the door? Is he going to get the marriage annulled.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Room Service

Who is this chick?!! And look at the newlyweds hitting it off like that. Aww!!! I love it!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Changes and Firsts {Part 1} {Fixed}

Maya was screwing a teacher?!!! Woah. Is that why she is soo cut off now. Or she was towards Derrick? 

 

Girl!! Update soon!! 



Author's Response:

Girl....can I just say how much my co-author and I freaking L O V E you?! Your reviews on literally every single chapter honestly made our lives, not days, lives. That is honestly so kind and sincere and sweet of you! I feel like you literally are SO into this story as if it's a television series that you can hardly stand to wait for to see the next episode. As a writer, that makes me feel amazing and so humbled that my work can have that sort of effect on people. You are literally the best reader ever and words can't describe how thankful we are for you. 

 

Geez. I'm getting emotional now. Lmfaooo. These next few chapters are so dedicated to you hun. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 21: Birthdays and Letting Go

Darrius is disgusting!!!! Fucking pervert!!!!!! That just truly upset me. I think I know why she gave up Aria now. She didn't want him to get his hands on her and do horrendous things to her. I don't blame her for making that choice. He is a fiflthy pig. Kay is pregnant!! This is definitely not good. Who is the father? Was she sleeping with Xavior too? I hope not. Either way, she is in school and working and all of that. I only think that Maya told Colin and Derrick that stuff so that he can understand the severity of the situation and what could potentially happen. So he understands why she goes soo hard for her. I would too if my friend was going through all of that right under my nose. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 19: The Morning After

LOl. Haha that was the funniest thing I have read today. Truly epic. I thought she had sex with him. Although I enjoy reading the sex scenes, this created mystery for me. I was allowed to let my imagination tell me what happened. I like that too. I guess we will see what happens with that. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 20: Stadiums and Photographs

Oh gosh!!! Is this man a stalker? A private detective? Her father?? She is about to shut down. I just know it. What is this letter Maya and Kay read? From her birth mother? Trying to come back into her life after news of her marriage to Colin came out no less. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Interviews and Meetings {Part 1}

Sorry to hear about you and your friend. I know the feeling all too well. 

 

I'm glad that they were able to get through the interview without any problems. I know those can be difficult to deal with. I don't blame Aria, I hate spiders too. He shouldn't play games like that. I can cause him to get seriously hurt. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Forgiveness

Girl it is a mistake. Any man hitting you is wrong period. Feel bad for his aunt's situation but that doesn't mean get back with his ass. That's a totally different story. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Good Times

That was a good day. I really want to know what is up with this sister in law of his. I truly dont understand why she is acting that way. She has no damn reason to, you married his brother!! I absolutely love how Aria checked that chick at the party. Much respect. Don't cause a negative scene but school a bitch at the same time. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Yes or No

Yes!!! They are getting somewhere. I'm glad that she at least told him that because she was starting to get on my nerves with the way she was acting. And did Colin eat the box!!!! Yesssssss Colin. Do that!!!!!!! Hehe

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Discussions

Maya and Kay are a hilarious pair. LOl. Two sides of the spectrum. She is meeting the family!! I wonder how they will feel. I absoutely love Colin. I am down for a Disney and Superhero marathon any day!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Title: Chapter 24: Game Nights {Part 1}

That is something. At least she somewhat opened up to Colin about what happened to her. That is progress. I wonder what Kat is going to do about her situation. Or when she will tell her best friends at least. This game night is going to be hilarious.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 13 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Changes and Firsts {Part 2}

Damn, so he raped her. That is horrible. What kind of friend has sex with her best friends man and then pushes her to give it to him? Do they know about the abuse? They can't because I know Maya wouldn't push her to do it. That's crazy.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 13 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Game Nights {Part 2}

Wow. How cute that they both told their best friends about their lil episode. Lol. I love that the girls played them in their sports. No shame, they are professional athletes after all. You have to get ahead somehow. Come on Derrick, why would you ruin a moment like that?! ARE YOU SERIOUS!!! You got that damn girl pregnant. You better pray that baby isn't yours. I highly doubt Maya goes for that crap. Weren't y'all together when that happened? The only couple not dealing with babies is Ari and Colin. But their situation is just as bad. Why wouldn't he tell her that. As his wife you have to respect her opinion whether you like it or not. She has every right to be upset but she needs to tell Colin why she is upset. Don't just be mad, let him know why you feel that wat towards some of his family members. I hope they don't come trying to check on her. Its nust going to start aroblem and put Colon in a position where he will have to choose. I feel bad that she is still traumatized by her ex beating on her. I'm sure Colin would never hit her but I can definitely understand why she reacted that way. Now my question is, where in the hell did Colin go? And why would you leave at this time? She needs you now more than ever.



Author's Response:

Girl I swear your comments make my freaking day! I love how thorough they are! Derrick is an idiot, but he brings comic relief! lol Yeah, I think we've established Arianna needs a lot of help and is still battling demons from her past. Girl, I promise you won't be mad at Colin! You'll see why he left in this next update! lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 15 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Reconciliation

Wait?!!!! So the rich man is her dad? The dude she was serving at the restaurant leaving her hundreds as a tip? Holy crap. I know I need to read about this. That receptionist was a bitch and should be fired!! Whore. Why did Colin show up like that? His ass should have showed up a week ago. But he came nonetheless. I'm glad that they are talking again.

Update soon!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 05 2015

Title: Chapter 27: Date Night

I know dog gone well that is not her ex Kendell? Oh gosh! This is about to get really bad. Why would someone want to hurt Aria? What could she have possibly done to them? She seems so innocent. That's just fucked up. I hope Colin and Aria survive what's to come... I know Aria is going to be knocked back a few steps. I wonder when Kay will tell someone she is pregnant. The signs are all there. They just aren't paying enough attention to notice them.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 30 2015

Title: Chapter 28: Secrets

Wait.... why can't she have kids? What happened that she can't have kids? Is this some choice or is she fareal. That's going to cause a seriousroblem in their relationship

Update soon



Author's Response:

Don't worry chica! You'll get your answers soon! ;)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: March 14 2016

Title: Chapter 29: Sensual Seduction

Sooooo I've been gone forever and 10 lifetimes. Good to be back though. On that note....

She finally gave up the goods!!!!! Soo excited. He rocked her damn world, its hilarious that she didn't even think to look around the house to see if he was there before she calls her girls and starts talking crap. Kendall was in jail? Probably for raping and/or abusing someone else. This is not going to be good. It definitely answers who that was at the club and what they have planned for Ari. I hope she doesn't completely shut down and lose she shit over this. 

Update soon!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: July 12 2016

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Summary:

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Could she not comprehend that he had a reckoning to deliver?

The Fire Rises



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 39404
Read Count: 34837
Published: April 09 2013
Updated: August 26 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting... What about her residency? What plan is she apart of?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: December 31 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh wow... Why was she creating venom? And she was a mistress. Shame.

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Date: December 31 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow... Why does Bane even need the venom anyway? It is keeping him alive or something?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: December 31 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh Jesus. Why? Let it go

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: December 31 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Lol. Why did he just kiss her like that? And she let him! Hell he still kidnapped you girl! Why is he mad? They were just training. There's nothing wrong with that, unless the only thing he saw was them on the wall. LOl. Uh oh

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: December 31 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Now that's how you apologize to a lady. LOl.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: December 31 2015

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