Penname: Marmus [Contact]

Real name: Marcelle

Member Since: September 15 2015

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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78662
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

The way i have invested in this story is so ridiculous. I was late for work because i couldnt stop reading...why do you drop such catastrophic bombs like that. But... Thank you for sharing your brilliant writing skills. If i had been watching this on t.v. i would thrown the remote at Brandon. Better still if i were Diya, i would have backhanded Brandon into the middle of next week for pulling such nonsense.
What i dont get is how he is untruthful about his past, yet Diya has been nothing but an open book. How he is infuriated when Manny is mentioned yet Diya has to live with the fact that his first love is still in the picture. Now i am even questioning the paternity of the 3Ms.
I dont know how he is going to get out of this one but an apology wont suffice. Diya needs to get away and clear her head from all the family and Brandon drama. She deserves a whole better than this.
Anticipating the next update...please dont make us wait!

Author's Response:

Yeah, an apology ain't gone cut it.  The secret-keeping and Mannie double standard warrant an explanation.  Brandon has one; I just don't know how good it'll be as far as Diya's concerned (or you, the readers, for that matter).

Sorry I made you late for work with my foolishness, Marmus.  But I'm uber happy you're so invested.  It makes my little writing-addicted heart happy : )

Reviewer: Marmus Signed
Date: March 11 2019

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

I would love to have seen everybody's reaction to those last words in chapter 29.

Why Brandon? Why?



Author's Response:

Lol!  Me too.

Reviewer: Marmus Signed
Date: March 15 2019

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