Penname: Raqi_jay [Contact]

Real name: Raquel

Member Since: September 16 2015

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Summary:

This story is a follow up to Lost Girl, so if you haven't read it yet, please do, as this is the sequl to that story. To those who have already read Lost Girl, yes, I know the title is unimaginative and sorta lame, but It's just a working title, so it won't be permament. :P

To all of my readers who have been following this series since the beginning of Lost Girl, I would like to welcome you back. And thank you for your continued interest in these characters and the storyline!!

I hope you enjoy the first chapter, and thank you so much in advance for reading and reviewing!!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 37
Completed:No
Word count: 264913
Read Count: 48613
Published: December 22 2014
Updated: October 16 2019


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

It's in the works, they are going to break up and reunite years later. There are too many obstacles in their path. One of three things will happen: They both cheat on each other (Tristan with Shauna, that's after she calla him on his obvious attraction to her; and she tells Claudia or drops hints. Claudia with Lucas or someone else). Two Claudia gets pregnant for her rapist, and Tristan will not support her decision on what she wants, thus going their separate ways. Three: Tristan will want to give his daughter a two parent family and decide to give it a go with Shauna; or Claudia herself pushes for that and they go their separate ways. They my find each other years later after they have their own families and lived a completely different life away from each other.

I could be wrong, but that's my take on this story. 

Reviewer: Raqi_jay Signed
Date: November 11 2015

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Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18450
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This entire situation is at a standstill. As mentioned by Hattie they need to get some professional help. Alec's anger towards Sean whilst understandable is not acceptable. Sean is not his spouse. It was not his responsibilty to tell him where his wife was. Sean did not owe Alec that. Charlie made the choice to stay away. (She willingly chose that road , no one made her do it). Unless her life was in danger or she was physically and or mentally incapable of contacting her husband and children. Was she responsible for what happened during her depression? No. After she got help and treatment? Absolutely. She should have contacted Alec. She chose not to. It was not Sean's job to do so.

Charlie is still childlike in many of the ways in her thinking. Like a child she thinks an apology. good behaviou nad being agreeable will solve the problem and make the person like you again. (Her actions with Jamie also portrays this).

Truth be told she was not ready to have a family at the time she did. (She was after all nineteen or twenty when had Ollie. In a lot of ways she never got the chance to young and carefree. Which is why when she did have a chance, she took it). There were issues that needed to be addressed at the time and they still do (Abandonment, insecurity etc).

Charlie would do just about anything for Alec and to make him happy, since they kids. He was her world. Her leaving was a shock to his system.... maybe he really wasn't.

Therapy can help them unload their feelings towards each other and the situation in a healthy productive manner, as well as rebuilding a stronger and healthier marriage, friendship and family.

Reviewer: Raqi_jay Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: August 09 2016

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