Penname: hershey_kisses [Contact]

Real name: Victoria

Member Since: July 03 2008

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I am a Mississippi born and raised woman.  I am a joyful sometime sarcastic person as my sister would say i love my family and have a deep love for reading, working on computers and just being around my loved ones on first meeting i come off quiet but once i feel comfortable it is on and popping because i love to laugh and make people laugh!!!!!




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In The Eyes of the Beholder by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80846
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Looks Can Be Deceiving

Just like i knew ithis story is just wonderful damn kids are so cruel and the grown people are no better you should teach your children that bullying is not right but those damn alley bats are just insufferiable especially that littl sassy mean ass jessica she is such an ugly person no matter what she looks like on the outside; love me some lei she is so sweel and little micah he such a shy child so happy that lei aunt was able to get micah removal surgery on his face.. ok what can i say about joe bob newton, he is such a wonderful husband and a great papa love candice tale on how she reel that man in and love her take charge sister!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks for the review.  I've had this story in my head for a couple weeks.  Why does society think that larger dark women are not attractive? I'm going to tackle that myth in this story.  

More will come next week.

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Oh my first let me say thank you for taking the time and giving us an update!!!!

The maggot ronald riley needs to take a slow walk off a cliff with the landing filled with razor blades dipped in vinegar.  that abussive piece of maggot sh*t slapped loreilie and looked at her with disgust when he is the digusting sight i am glad papa joe let his ass know that loreilie is his daughter and candance is his candy.  Loved the lookback in the past about the talk candy had with joe bob mother it was funny and straight to the point......



Author's Response:

The problem with Ronald Riley is that he has always gotten his way!  While it is true that he is an educated man, underneath he's just a controlling prick.  He hasn't given up and we haven't heard the last of him.  More to come soon!

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Date: October 03 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

whoo what an thankgiving that was oh my micah and lei are so adorable.... that damn teddy lee is something else especially with the flash back of his brother first telling him about candance and all the intimate things they did and how they were getting married.  love micah brothers they are also cute and sabrina and teddy lee it going to be some serious heat between those two and i am loving it when sabrina bent over and told teddy lee to kiss her wide ass then i was laughing my ass off on that one as always a wonderful update!!!!!Thank Youuuu.......................



Author's Response:

Yes, Teddy Lee and Sabrina are hot together and Micah loves himself some Lei even though she doesn't think that she deserves him.

 

More is a coming soon!

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Date: October 05 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Oh my Gosh this chapter had it all and then some whoo teddy lee and sabrina are just fire and gass ready to cause an explosion whoo i almost fainted when he said he wanted her to teach him how to eat chocolate i was like damnnn!!!!, ok Micah and lorelei are just beautiful, crazy inlove teens i hate that she has the insecure but i know with the love of her parents, aunt and micah that the self confidence will build up so high even a turd like jessica couldnt put a dent in it whoo i absolutly love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Sabrina has gotten into Teddy Lee's head and now has him wondering what it's really like.  LOL

 

He's going to find out real soon.

 

Thanks for the review.

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Date: October 06 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

oh my gosh i was sooo excited when i saw this update and hott damn it was all i dreamed wow that damn sexy ass teddy lee gettin all demanding and coming down to virginia to get his beanie was just romantic and all alpha male whoo and when he got educated and laid the pipe afterwards was just damnnnnnnnn!!!!ok and him witholding all that goodness until sabrina agreed to be engaged was hilarious cause he knew he had her hook so all she could do is agree!!!!!!!!!!!!oh my micah declaring his love for lorelei in front of the whole world was just beautiful and now hes a model i know it going be alot more insecure with lorelei whoo i am absolutly crazy for this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hershey Kiss:  Glad I was able to update. (Though I didn't get that much work done today) LOL.  I will have to do better on Monday!  I will try to update at least one more time this weekend, but I can't make any promises!  More is coming soon, however!

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Date: October 07 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Wow another superb update oohh teddy lee is firm on his beleif and i am loving it whoo he wore ms. sabrina down and they have finally set a date.  micah finally told that wrectch of a mean turd jessica to leave him and his lady love lei alone for that loose tramp to imply that lei had to be puttin out inorder for micah to be with lei and he put that scum bag useless implication to rest whoo i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Micah wants what Micah wants.  LOL   More is coming soon!!

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Date: October 10 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

uh that mrs. greenly was such a surley bi*ch for putting down someone elses child i was so glad that micah put the old uppity crow hag in her place and made friends with emily.......ok can you say cute with mrs sabrina newton waddling and sneaking off from teddy lee and him comin and huntin her down..... uh another scum bag leis sperm donor crawling back into leis face with the same critical and disgusting ways he had years ago i am so glad lei told him how she truly felt about him again after all this time whoo i absolutly love this story whoo cant wait for the next update!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Mrs. Greenly is a closet racist.  Lei is somewhat torn because she wants a relationship with her father, but she is afraid of him because of his anger issues.  Ronald Riley has not given up and he will be back!  More to come soon!

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Date: October 13 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Nooo dont let lei insecurities about ruin her and micah relationship i know that they deeply love each other lei just need to work on her self doubt.; whoo i got to go continue paiting but damn do i love and adore this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Hershey!  Lei has her insecurities and she hasn't been honest with Micah or herself.  The door slam was a wake up call!  More to come soon!

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Date: October 16 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Oh my gosh i have never laughed soo much when reading a chapter of a story but oh my first i screamed when i saw the update and when i was reading it was freakingfunny ass hell when lei went to the mall with her the church ladies and her grandmother i mean those women were something else and they gave lei the confidence she needed and showed her how to drive men and micah insane whoo just absolutly loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hershey:  Glad I made your day.  I'm trying to update the other story...but I don't think I'm going to make it. 

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Date: October 17 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Oh my I was looking at this story yesterday and said to my sister this very morning that I am waiting for Brenda to update one of her stories and dang it not two hours has pass and I see the alert that you have update you talking about happiness when I saw which story had been updated/finished and boy did you end it on a beautiful note thank you whoo you rock!!!!!

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Date: June 15 2012
Life in High School by NaeNae1495
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Dijnae Anderson is a full-figured high school junior. She's dealing with crazy best friends, a protective brother, her insecurities, and her attraction to the Co-Captain of the Football team. No one said high school was easy and she's definitely being put to the test.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 15199
Read Count: 15493
Published: October 16 2011
Updated: February 02 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn i am on this train whoo already loving the first chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: October 16 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Cast Pics

damn the pics just solified why i chose this story as a favorite after just reading one chapter absolutly wonderful pics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: October 16 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

another great chapter keep cranking them out fast please really enjoying this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm trying. LOL. Glad you're liking the story.

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Date: October 18 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Whoo this was another great update thank you for taking the time out and gifting us with it loved when djina danced and love that song y u mad!!!!!!

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Date: December 05 2011
A Perfect Fit by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 245]
Summary:

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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39376
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow so that why stephen held so much anger and mistrust of maxie intentions toward his mother wow the secret of his father being unfaithful to his mother was a heavy burden stephen sr. put on his son i am soo happy that maxie and stephen had a talk and came to an understanding whoo such a wonderful update ohh i am  over the moon that selma is keeping the baby and is getting married whooo hoo she deserves the happiness and so does wonderful maxie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: November 14 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Whoo another wonderful update wow maxie put it on selma ass and it was hoot that man is just wonderful... Glad russel had the talk with maxie it was great!!!!!Can't wait for much more...........



Author's Response:

Hey Hershey:  Yes, Maxie is the man.  Now he has to have that talk with Selma and see what's really bothering her.  More is coming soon!

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Date: November 19 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh my damn you go kelly whoo russ ass will be grinning his ass off from now on that darn jennifer is a trip oan wow such a small world for the girl that russ lusted after in high school is the mother of the daughter that is his son girlfriend just woo i am loving this story!!!!!ps mrs.kelly had that freaky streak along i mean jen talk helped her release because she took charge of russ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol



Author's Response:

Hey there Hershey!  LOL Kelly laid it on him after her pep talk from Jen.  Russell will never be the same!  More to come soon!

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Date: November 17 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh snap i know maxie is about to blow his top after seeing the abortion  info this is not going to be pretty for selma whoo i love this story sooooo much oh and p.s. have maxie fire that trick ren she is useless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I have a feeling that Maxie is going to cancel that next appointment....  

LOL Renley!  You can't get good help these days it seems!

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Date: November 13 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Whoo hell yeah me and my sister was discussing you wwriting a one shot and man we was like nooo dont let become a habit because we love you in depth stories they are beyond beautiful soo whoo muse hold the brain hostage a litlle longer maybe we can get a full monty out of this wonderful story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: November 11 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Additional Cast

nice pics of the family uh stephen needs a couple of more slaps for being sooo disrespectful and harsh towards his mother and maxie!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: November 11 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

damn now that was one hell of a one shot whoo just hott!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

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Date: November 10 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue: Three Years Later...

Wonderful ending wow selma and max has three little ones!!!!!

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Date: April 20 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

another wonderful chapter but as always a beautiful tended lawn get dog crap in it every once in awhile and looks like selma lawn has gotten some in the form of trilfling disgusting stanley but damn if maxie didnt handle his ass cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Hershey:  We all have those relatives we'd rather not see in our family.  Selma is no exception.  More is coming!

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Date: November 22 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OH my the wedding finally came and it was just wonderful loved how selma kids go along with their new addition grand parents that was just wow and of course maxie gave selma one hell of merry christmas!!!!!!!!!!!whoo i just loveeeeeeeee this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: December 05 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Whooo another wondeful update i am soo glad maxie put his foot down and let hormonal crazy selma know who wore the pants oh wow twins can i say i was shocked but extremely happy all up until some screwball bitch came up to maxie and implying that his children are not his because their are not light skinned damn where will the ignorance come to an end uh that trick needs to worry about the missing baby daddy in her daughter life instead of a complete stranger anywhoo love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: December 13 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.