Penname: hershey_kisses [Contact]

Real name: Victoria

Member Since: July 03 2008

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am a Mississippi born and raised woman.  I am a joyful sometime sarcastic person as my sister would say i love my family and have a deep love for reading, working on computers and just being around my loved ones on first meeting i come off quiet but once i feel comfortable it is on and popping because i love to laugh and make people laugh!!!!!




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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99741
Read Count: 100864
Published: March 08 2012
Updated: January 31 2013


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 Facing Reality

Wow i am sooo happy the dinner went great Jared declaring in front of his family that lucinda is going to be his wife and Charlie doing the same with his lady love Inga just was wonderful whoo loved how jared laid it out for lucinda about his love for her whoo and damn if i didnt Loveeeee i mean loveeee Charlie proposal technique whoo the man has skillz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Love this story soooo much Thank You for the update........



Author's Response:

When love hits those Peterson men, they know it's the real deal.  Yes, Charlie knows how to keep Inga in line.  LOL

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Date: April 02 2012

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 New Experiences

Oh my gosh you delivered i mean inga and charlie was mind blowing i was like damnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! ooooh and jared putting that no account for a man crayton in his place i just love the more mature jared it is soooo wonderful and i mean he did a little claiming on his own to his woman lucinda whoo i just love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Hershey.  She wanted it, now she got it but can she handle it?  Hmmm.  I think Inga's going to start ducking Charlie a little bit.  LOL

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Date: March 20 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

oh my the worst possible place to leave a simmering cliff hanger whoo inga finally bared the truth of her love for charlie oh my i am soooo happy!!!,,,, ok now that sorry sob getting off free then pressing charges on jared really mad me angry but i got a feeling that the slimey slug is getting whats coming to him very very soon i just feel it!!!! loved the new grown jared now he needs these bogus charges off him asap also loving the budding romance between him and lucinda even if she dont beleive it i know that theirs romance between the two whoo i just love this story sooo much Yock Rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry Hershey, but more is coming.  Charlie is going to get what's coming to him.  Hee hee and so will Inga.

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Date: March 19 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

Oh yeah whoo i am loving this whoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: March 08 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

oh forgot to leave this it is really heartbreaking how charlies mother expected him to take an adult role after the father walked out that was very irresponisible of her and then how do she repay him by babying and giving all her attention to the problem child and completly ignoring the twins and charlie i mean when will her ass get a clue when charlie finally makes the move and leave her trifling butt ohh just upset me how a parent favors one child over the other ones anywhoo enough of the ranting i absolutly love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Hershey:  Charlie didn't mind helping his mother because he didn't want his family to end up in foster care after his father deserted them.  Mom was working a lot and needed Charlie's help with his siblings.  However, there is no excuse for her favoring and babying Jared.  I don't like parents who do that , but I had to throw some drama in there. LOL  More is coming soon.

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Date: March 08 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Change of Plans

Wow another wonderful update oh my inga had such a troubled childhood surrounded by illegal drugs and drug use and sex and fighting it is a wonder why she didnt leave home earlier oh my gosh did her mother clue the sadistic trash jermaine where inga was staying because it seems mighty convient for him to show up out the blue and attacking her whoo i am sooo glad charliee heard her scream and made it over there befor the sick bastard jermaine could rape her ugh just disgusting and what a horrifying moment for inga ugh i hope the scum rots in jail!!!!Thank you for the wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

It wasn't Inga's mother that leaked the information.  She was the one who told Inga not to let any man hit her.   It'll all come out in the update.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: March 09 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Feeling the Fire

Oh my gosh i laughed so loud when inga said she was dreaming about a icecream cone my niece rushed in to see why i was so loud oh my gosh just priceless....I am so happy that the scum got what he deserved and it was great that her mother came out to support inga during the trial of that dirt bag; wow the story about inga father was just wow; loved how charlie came to try to claim inga and she told him that he got to court her whoo i am just absolutly loving this story thank youuuuu sooo much for another wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: March 10 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Love and Life According to Charlie

Another excellent update the memory about how the shitty father left and his reason why was heartbreaking and when charlie mama stood up and put dead beat son jared in his place i was like whoo hoo now that a strong woman even if she broke down after he ran off screaming his hate for her... Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: March 11 2012

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 Growing Pains

another great chapter that poor girl lindsay needs some serious help it is really sick and disgusting what happen to her at the hands of her own father he should have been castrated and bleed to death ugh why do these type of sickos get jail time i will never understand glad the twins realized what a big mistake they were headed to if they were have done the deed with her even though it went pretty far glad one was strong enough to stop the other before he made a mistake he will regret oan cant wait for the family dinner oh and i am sooo happy jared is not going to jail and he is finallly realizing his worth as a young productive male whoo i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: March 31 2012

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Well worth the wait whooo let me tell you those brothers charlie and jared really know how to leave their ladies panting for more wow no other words for those two and look like mama Val on her way to some companionship love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: June 26 2012

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Blame it on the Rain

Well worth the wait whooo let me tell you those brothers charlie and jared really know how to leave their ladies panting for more wow no other words for those two and look like mama Val on her way to some companionship love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: June 26 2012

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 An Obsession Called Inga

Thanks for another wonderful addition to this magnificant story whoo just love it!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: September 04 2012

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Summary:

Pretty rich boy Nikki Vera is bored of having everything he wants. When his friends dare him to sleep with Sam Rutherford, suddenly his life starts to become interesting. 

Sam Rutherford is mannish, rude, and violent. It's said that she's a gang member who's spent some time in juvie. Rumors true or not, she's not the type of girl to be messed with. Sam is more likely to break Nikki's jaw than give him the time of day. 

It's going to take all of Nikki's charm and even some help from fate for this to have a happy ending. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 689
Read Count: 3800
Published: March 11 2012
Updated: March 11 2012


Title: Chapter 1: The Bet

ha ha hell you must update soon and hey dont be stingy with the lenght neither need it please to be extra long pleasssessssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: March 11 2012

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Summary:

 

Marisol Smith left in the wee hours of the morning but her heart and mind won't let her move beyond the time she spent with Grady James Halpern. Part two in Mari and Bear's sorta kinda love story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Southern Gents
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 9583
Read Count: 18352
Published: March 16 2012
Updated: May 01 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Intro ~ The Hardest Part of Goodbye

Oh my gosh you have made my evening i mean hott dogg the wonderful tale has been continued o my just wow loving it already!!!

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Date: March 16 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Gone Baby Gone

Wow you left one hell of a heart ache cliff hanger whoo i am loving it because hell whats a good tale without a few twist and turns!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: March 18 2012

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Summary:

Henry McDermont had been determined to win the affection of his long lost daughter and his college sweetheart, Vanessa.  For the last four months he had done everything he knew how to show them that he cared, but will Henrietta be so easily won over?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15815
Read Count: 5693
Published: April 05 2012
Updated: April 10 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Henry's Interrogation

Whoo that was sooo emotional poor henrrietta and damn that big mouth fool lamount!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: April 08 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Vanessa's Visit

A baby all i can say is wow loved the visit with minnie she already had a feeling that a bundle of joy was on the way and whoo a proposal too i am loving the continuation of this story thank you for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Vanessa knows that her daughter will have reservations about all of the changes that are happening so quickly.  Will Henny be upset? Maybe.  LOL  MOre is coming...

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Date: April 05 2012

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Summary:

 

 

 

This is a Scandal 'one shot' that had been rolling around in my head.  Enjoy!



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2573
Read Count: 5947
Published: May 08 2012
Updated: May 08 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Baby

Love it dare I say I would love more chapters too but anywhoo thank-you!!!



Author's Response:

Maybe Thursday will inspire me.  LOL

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Date: May 08 2012

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Summary:

Just another day in the GLEE Rehearsal Room or is it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Mercedes Jones
Classification: Drabbles , General, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 16668
Read Count: 12932
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: January 28 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my read like samcedes but you shocked me with it being Finn but hey I can rock with yah on this can't wait for more!!!!

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Date: June 08 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ok I am samcedes. All the way but damn I got to give Finn a 2% based on this chapter alone whoo just hott!!!

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Date: June 24 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Damn to hott whoo making me see Finn in a whole new light

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Date: September 02 2012

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Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 81062
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Wooow your back with a new one and i must say that i am loving this whoo cant wait til she tell stephen about baby josiah and also the two new additions whoo!

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Date: August 07 2012

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Summary:

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Based on 90's show, NewsRadio.

After Joe and Catherine are kidnapped, they are put into a situation that brings all of the feelings they have for each other into the light.

Catherine doesnt want to admit it so she leaves the first chance she gets to London, taking something with her.

But, she is pulled back almost as quickly as she leaves, forced to bring that something with her.

She can try to deny it all she wants but love is never wrong.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8732
Read Count: 3195
Published: August 12 2012
Updated: August 18 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Part 1: The Love that Hurts

ugh why cant demons like jay be castrated and hands and legs cut off so they can never destroy another child innocence ugh just why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! another great chapter i am loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: August 14 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Part 2: Hate That I Love You

oh my gosh a baby oh my cathy why oh why would you keep it from joe when yall both love each other i know this stay and london wont be for the long haul and whe cathy returns with a extra passenger all hell will break loose whoo i cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Date: August 14 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

wow i am blown away by this first chapter!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: August 14 2012

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