Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

Membership status: Member

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I just love to read.




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Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78789
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016


Title: To Last a Lifetime

You update, thank you so much!!  Mark is a asshoke and Molliere is to nice to nitice his feelings for her. Yes, Simon tagged Cooper in his dace, priceless.

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Date: May 01 2016

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Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 50615
Published: March 29 2011
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Charly is completely by herself, she needs some serious prayer!!!  How can Regine call herself her friend, that is so wrong.  Charly has to realize that there is no where she can go that he can't find her, except a church.  I hope that thought comes to her mind.. Maybe her love can change Nic, he's in love already but he can't admit it to himself.  Love is being in the presence of God's light so he wants to be as far apart from that as possible.  Excellent chapter!!1

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 21 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Charly ain't going to take well.  Hell, I am salty for her as he just had the nerve enough to tell him that he is her master!!  Charly needs Jesus and I mean with a quickness!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 06 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Charly has lost her ever loving mind!!  Who wants her Laz or Nic?  They are both hot though!!  Great start.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: March 29 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Thanks for the update it has been awhile.  I really want Charly to save her soul, this is the first story where I didn't want HEA where the two lead charactes end up together.  THe HEA I want is her soul being saved!!

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Date: September 04 2013

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You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 80202
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Putting The Plan Into Action

Sam and Stacey deserve each other, why is still with a little girl that no one in his family cares for.  Stacey is bad news, I wwouldn't put it past to get pregnant to keep him.  Justin had better keep his eyes open, boy are you to stupid.



Author's Response:

LMBO! Hmmm its like your inside my mind.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: September 17 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Flirting With Temptation

You are awesome,, I love this story!!  Krista and Becca crack me up.  When is someone going to tell Jalena that Sam use to date the Hoacey?  She shouldn't trust Sam and I hope that she can sense that.



Author's Response:

Thank youuuu! Soo much! I am so glad your enjoying this story... Sam Kind of hinted to her that he use to date her. Dont worry Jalena has her head on straight She know's whats up with Sam It's Justin who needs to be kicked in the head.. lol! Thanks again my faithful reviewer 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: September 17 2011

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 I Want You

That was sweet, they both have it bad.  Justin, you are not in love with Hoacey.  Please kick her to the curb, she is psycho!!! Nuff said.



Author's Response:

pmgayles...lol you have me laughing with Hoacey! that is hilarious! I love it... thanks so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: September 17 2011

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Friday

I am so glad that all of Justin's and Jalena's friend want them together,  Justin you are so stupid no one likes Stacey.  Wake up dufus!!!  Stacey is not the girl for you she a psychotic ho, she's a vampire who will suck the life right out of you. Run, Justin, run!!   You and Stacey are not like peas and carrots!!!  What is this Zack's involvment in Sam's revenge plot?  This is getting so good!!  I love how Justin is so drawn to Jalena.  Why does he still that he's in love in Hoacey? (Ho-Stacey, Hoacey that is her characters new name in case you didn't know)  I know I just renamed your character!



Author's Response:

LMBO!!! Zack is just Sam's best friend Krista just wants to use him.... And yes that Hoacey is something else!. I love writing the tension between J&J its so steamy.... :)

Thanks again for reviewing and being one of my faithful reviewers don't know if I've told you I really appreciate the support. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: September 17 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Putting The Plan Into Action

I really want something to happen to that little ho Stacey, and I want it be painful as well humiliating.  Why is Justin pushing away his feelings for Jalena?  I would really love if Jalena got a chance to showcase her martial arts skill on Stacey and it would be deserving!!!  I love this story!!1



Author's Response:

LMBO! You are too funny! Just give it some time and you will get your wish....

Justin feels needs to be a better guy to his girlfriends than his dad was But Jalena is making it real hard for him to be that better guy we have to see how long he can fight this temptation.... Thank you so much for reviewing!

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Date: June 21 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Tender Kisses

Me likey, I am glad that he kissed Jalena.  I can't stand Stacie, she is a *itch!!!  I love the other characters they are absolutely hilarious.



Author's Response:

LOL yeah Stacey is a what you said.. hehe but she is good at hiding it from Justin... the crew of characters are a fun bunch. All the things they say have me cracking up laughing when I write it. I'm so glad you like the story thank you for your review...

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 16 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Tender Kisses

Yes, he kissed Jalena!!  Wonderful!!!



Author's Response:

Oh yes! he did.. glad that made you happy!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 29 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Butter Voice On The Phone!

That waas sweet, I have not like Stacey since this story first began.  They are in high school and much too young to know what the forever kind of love is.  I do want him to give his feeling Jalena a chance to grow.  Justin and Jalena that is so cute!! Get rid of Stacey please she is not good enough for Justin!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! well we will just have to see what happens huh? Stacey is something speacial..lol ;) the tension, temptaion is strong between these too J J that is... Nobody and I mean nobody understands love well except God... but I believe that in all kinds of ways it could happen to people weather they are young or old.... they both have their thoughts of what love is but are not ready to yet... they will take their time I promise you....

thanks so much for reading and reviwing again. next chapter will be up tonight!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 29 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Lunch Time Disasters

Justin is falling hard for Jalena and Jalena is feeling him the same way.  He should break up Stacy, who doesn't deserve him any way.  I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! yeah loads of tension between them too I agree he should break up with Stacey but he has his reasons for sticking with the stick.. lol:)

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Date: June 04 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Donkey's Ass Fighting Temptation

I can't wait to see how Jalena gets back at the ho-bag Stacie, it should be funny!!!



Author's Response:

oh yeah let the fun begin!..... thanks for reviewing

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Date: June 13 2011

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Party

When is Justin going to kick that ho Stacie to the curb?  She is so beneath you and your whole family doesn't like her.  If you family and friends don't like your mate there is something wrong with them.  I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

I know right? LOL! Thank you pmgayles for reviewing.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: September 26 2011

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Justin, I want to slap. When is going to break up with that ho?  You are not in love with Stacey if you were you wouldn't be attracted to Jalena.  Not to mention neither your family nor your friends like that ho!!  Dump her cliggy, stupid ass!!!  Jalena ignore Justin, he is not worth your time.  Don't give Sam any attention either as he is not into you for the right reasons.  He wants to use you to get back Justin for the ho.  I love this story!!



Author's Response:

LOL! I love your reviews you sound like Krista go get um girl! I could just picture cussing the computer out! lol thank you so much for reviewing again I love hearing form you! I see I got make Just pay don't worry he will... see you next chapter.. :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: October 15 2011

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Full Moon

I have missed this story!! Justin is going to be so hurt when she finally tells, Jalena you are being a punk! Long distance relationships rarely work and you are a teenager it never works. Jalena put on your big girl thongs and tell the boy about your audition.  Loved the new chapter! 



Author's Response:

pmgayles you always crack me up! Thank you so much for your continued support. I love your reviews! 

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Date: November 16 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Consequences Of Bad Choice

Justin, you are a dingle berry!!!  It is obvious that you are not in love the that little ho Stacey.  You need to let that troll go, she is not good enough for you.  Jalena please forget about the ahole, he is not worth your tears.  He does not know what he wants, he will end up hurting Stacey more pretending that he still loves her. I was hoping that this eveing would work out in her favor.  I love this story!!



Author's Response:

LOL! dingle berry I love it... Yes he is being one he has to get his issues straight with hostacey. I am Loving that you love this story thank you so much for sticking with me. It's nice to see the same names pop on my reviews I really appreciate the support... thanks again and for the rating too. :) Update will be up tonight!

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Date: October 29 2011

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Tempers Fly

I am still trying to understand why Justin is dating a girl that no one in his family likes also that none of his friends like.  The little girl doesn't seem to really love or care about you, she cared more about the those than the injury to your face.  Stacey or as I like to call Hocey is a selfish little girl, you need to rid of the zero and get with Jalena is more woman now then Stacey will ever be.  I can't to chapter 22, you rock!!

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Date: November 13 2011

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Let HIm Go

I love this story,  I love Alex Pettifer he is so hot!!!!  When is Justin going to wise up and break up with the ho?  I mean come on , your family doesn't like her, your friends don't like, hell you don't really like her!!!  Justin you are being selfish and you are hurting Jalena.  The girl told you that when she wished upon a star she wish for you, that should be going clue to drop the ho!!  More please!!



Author's Response:

Yes! I so agree thats why he was picked. pmgayles I lust love hearing from you thanks for the support I'm so happy to your reviews everytime. So for the next chapter I wonder if Justin will finally get his sh$t together??? we shall see. thanks again girl xoxox meme :)

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Date: February 08 2012

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Love Sucks

YOu had Jalena called Stacey Hocey in the story, I love it!!!  This as a nice long update and you covered alot.  I am dying for Justin to wake up with his fine self.  Justin, come on your hates Hocey and they love Jalena.  Hamony loves Jalena, wake up baby!!!  Justin you are fine but stupid!!  More please!!!

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Date: March 07 2012

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 You And Me And All Other People

When is Justin going to wake up and dump the ho?  Jalena is showing some strenght and I love it.  Becca cracks me up and am so glad that she kicked that ho's ass!!!  I am waiting for Jalena to kick her ass!!!



Author's Response:

yes its coming!

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Date: June 02 2012

Title: Eyes For Only You

I am glad that it happened like and I so loved that Sam got his ass handed to him.  I am glad that Justin decided to drop the ho, but he needs to formally break it off with Hoacey before he and Jalena do the do.  He should have himself tested as that ho was shagging Sam as well.  Ladies, can you say Nasty?  LOL  Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! Yeah he did now its Staceys turn ;) Thanks for the review and the raiting woot woot!!!! 

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Date: October 17 2012

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 The Showdown

That was awesome!  That ho Stacey got treated!   Finally Justin is with the right girl, Helena.

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Date: May 04 2013

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