Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

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Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 166721
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 9: Hachi (8)

I love he Sara is working my nerve, I know that Yuki offered but I would have declined.  Yuki is man that left her because she wasn't good enough to marry and you have a raised your by yourself, now why would she think her parents would want anything to do with him.  Love Darren Percy, they are cool parents!!  Yuki is jealous of Kamir, what a punk.  Yuki has a lot to make up for, and Darren Percy ain't feeling him.  Loved this chapter!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 08 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Sichi (7)

This is good, please tell that Karous and Kamir will fall for each othere allowing for Yuki and Sara to reunited.  I can't wait for the her parents to make an appearance.



Author's Response:

Kamir definitely caught Kaoru's eye, no? Thanks! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 05 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Kyu (9)

Kamir is pushing Yuki's buttons on purpose,  I realize that Yuki has been married to Karou for eight years, but he doesn not love her.  Why would you stay with a man who doesn't love you?  More please!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 15 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Actors & Actresses

I so need an update of this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: October 30 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Actors & Actresses

Please  finish this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: February 04 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Actors & Actresses

Please cone back and finish this story?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: January 17 2021

Title: Chapter 16: Jyuu go (15)

Awesome, Shouda is the balm to melt the ice encased heart of his Mrs. U.  I am glad that talking with Shouda helped to realize the error of her ways and prompted an apology to Yuki.  I wonder will Yuki tell Shouda that he and Karou are getting a divorce.  Maybe Shouda and Yuki can conspire against Sara on wininning heart, although he never lost her heart or her love.  This story is so sweet!!  Yuki is so fine and I need Yuki (Daniel) in my life!!



Author's Response:

Indeed, indeed, children often are. They make us see things through their innocence. Yes, what Yuki will do with the information still remains to be seen. I wonder if Shouda could really grasp the meaning of his words if he told him. A conspiracy would be nice, yes.

But...step away fromt he Henney

|D

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Date: March 26 2012

Title: Chapter 13: Jyuu ni (12)

Wow, Karou you a ho!!!  You may not be in love with Yuki, but he has treated you with nothing but respect!!  That was bogus and I thought that he as feeling Sara, Kamir you are nothing but horndog!!!    It would be funny if Karou got pregnant after her night with Kamir.  I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

Trip. Me. Up.

:}

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Date: December 31 2011

Title: Chapter 20: Jyuu kyu (19)

More please!!!

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Date: June 30 2012

Title: Chapter 19: Jyuu hachi (18)

It is really bothering me that Yuki has yet to tell Sara about his impending divorce. Yuki can't stake his claim on her heart until he does. Not to mention he needs to apologize for dumping like she meant nothing. Yuki has alot to make up for snd his parents should apoligize to him as well. They ruined so many lives! Love the Darren/Percy and Kenji. Yuki's momma is starting to grow on my like moss on a tree. Yuki open your heart to Sara and let her where she stands. Wonderful, just winderful!



Author's Response:

Alright then! I think Yuki is still getting it together. Men are simple creatures are then not? They are also rather slow. So Yuki fits that opinion, however, I think he has heard your pleas. Great comment about Izumi by the way. Thanks! :)

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Date: April 27 2012

Title: Chapter 18: Jyuu sichi (17)

This chapter has not changed my opinion of Kamir, he is ho with no respect for Sara.  Sure he apologized but was it sincere?  I don't think that it was, he still wants a chance with Sara but he does realize that Sara does not love him.  I am so happy that Karou is using Kamir for a good time and that she realizes that Kamir is not the man for Sara. 

Kamir is definitely a dog, Yuki is a good man who allowed his parents to control him.  Meeting and becoming a father is every sense of the word as helped him to develop a spine.  Although he has not right to be upset with Sara, but he is coming to all of the wrong conclusions about Sara's and Kamir's relationship.  Why hasn't he told Sara yet that he and Karou are divorcing?  What in the hell is he waiting for?

I have a bad feeling about the mothers, it can't be good with both of their head together!!  Yuki needs to talk to  Sara fast before the mothers get involved and ruin any chance that Yuki has of winning back Sara's heart.  He has quite a bit to overcome and could the assistance of his son. Great update!!!



Author's Response:

You are right on point on many things. Kamir, Kaoru, Yuki. It all seems to be tangled up right now. But I have to say that I like Kamir in all his arrogant, childish glory and I'm not quite sure why. So I guess that makes me like Kaoru.

:)

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Date: April 25 2012

Title: Chapter 20: Jyuu kyu (19)

I really would love an update wo this wonderful story!!

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Date: November 07 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Jyuu (10)

Yuki's momma has a problem and Sara needs to put her foot down and tell Yuki that his parents contact with her son will be limited until his momma acts like she got some sense.  I love Darren and Percy they are some cool people!!



Author's Response:

I like Darren Percy too. They are some of my favorite characters. Thanks!

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Date: November 21 2011

Title: Chapter 15: Jyuu yon (14)

Yuki to the rescue!!  He's my hero and his daddy knows that he wants Sara back.  I really want to Karou to tell Sara about her dalliance with Kamir becasue Sara has been very kind to you.  I so want Kamir out of the picture he really makes my teeth itch!!!  Thank you for such a wonderful update!!



Author's Response:

Teeth itch, that is a new concept for me. Very hilarious! Thanks! :]

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Date: March 24 2012

Title: Chapter 12: Jyuu ichi (11)

 Sara and Yuki still are in love with each other,  I am still trying to understand why Yuki is still married to woman that he does not love.   Karou deservers to be loved by a man who will love her with his whole heart.  Sara deserves to hear from his lips why he to live a lie as instead of loving her.  Kamir although fine, I don't know how I  feel about him.    I do beleive that he now he truly understands that her heart will never be his.  I am waiting for my HEA!!!  I love this story and I am waiting patiently for another update.



Author's Response:

So true! I feel for Yuki though. He's got a lot going on, at least in my mind. He's been trying to pull it together. As to Kaoru, she is on a mission and Kamir...he is too, ehem. Thanks!

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Date: December 11 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Jyuu san (13)

My story is finally back, I have Yuki so!!!  I have loaned you my husband to be in your story.  Karou has become bold since meeting Sara.  As far as Kamir goes I hope his reaction to Sara business situation ends that farce.  Since Kamir really only wants to sleep with Sara.  Come on Yuki make your intentions known.  Karoua I am so proud of you for speaking up and asking for an divorce. 



Author's Response:

Sorry lady, but Yuki is taken! No really, Sara will beat you down and Kaoru might throw in a chop or two.

thanks! ;p

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Date: February 27 2012

Title: Chapter 17: Jyuu roku (16)

I don't know how I feel about Kaoru and Kamir, Kamir only wanted to sex up Sara while Kaoru just wanted to feel something.  It would be great if Kaoru used Kamir for sex and he developed feelings and got hurt.  I am a fan of Kamir, but Kaoru deserves to find love.  She knew when they got engage Yuki didn't love her, hell she didn't love Yuki.  Her hurt and anger were her own and she choose to not to love.  Yuki just let his momma treat Kaoru any old way.  Becoming a father with the only woman that he ever loved iniated that his change.  It would be cool if Yuki told Shouda how he feels about his momma and that he wants another chance.  Then they could plot together on how to woo Sara!!! 

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Date: April 01 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Actors & Actresses

I meant that I was not a fan of Kamir!  Sorry for the mistake.  I love this story and I am so grateful for the regular updates!!

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Date: April 01 2012

Title: Chapter 20: Jyuu kyu (19)

Thank you so much for this update, I truly love this story!!!  I am patiently waiting for Yuki to tell Sara that he and Karou are divorcing.  I hope that Sara gives Yuki a chance and doesn't shut him down because of the past.  Sara please allow the man to earn your trust back because he did do you wrong in the past.  Yuki a suffered because of his lack of backbone and so have you.  I love this story!!!

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Date: June 27 2012

Title: Chapter 20: Jyuu kyu (19)

I need an update please!!

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Date: November 09 2012

Title: Chapter 20: Jyuu kyu (19)

Please update this story!!

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Date: December 09 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Actors & Actresses

Please update, I really miss this story!!!

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Date: March 03 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Jyuu kyu (19)

I would love an update,

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Date: May 23 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37537
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014


Title: Deal With it

Good luck in school.  I am eagerly awaiting to this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks...  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: August 27 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Everyone Lies

Shenai is pushing Jeremy away, but he is such a punk.  Why are you marrying Jade?  She is not what she claims to be, she is just as racist as his father was.  Please don't let him marry that not uterus having lying ho!!!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 08 2011

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