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Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher.  The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.

*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Word count: 93337
Read Count: 116311
Published: October 30 2009
Updated: July 28 2012

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think Chris and Carmine are my favs. Although, I'm liking Luke also. Carmine is a freak and I loves my freak. And Chris is all ALPHA. Taya is about to break him down a bit. These men are fione.

I have really missed this story. Thank you for the updates. And they ALL have skills. damn!!!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2011

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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 167087
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Way to make DeLeon face up to wanting and loving you, Kendra. Telling him he's worth having something loving and good in his life. This chapter had me smiling from ear to ear.  This was an exremely powerful chapter. I had to read it 3 times.

"Wanna do it again?"

"Hell yes." She rushed forward and jumped up in his arms, causing him to bust out laughing as he stumbled back into his recliner, her lips all over his face.

uh oh, they may burn down the trailer!

I felt sad for DeLeon because he was so tortured. He will not be able to let her go now. No way in hell.  But, how can they be together? Is she willing to move to be with him? They seem at different class levels. There seems to be so much, on paper, that makes it hard to believe that they will end up together. But, romantic me sure as hell hopes that's what happens.

Chica, you are so gifted. You draw me into this story more and more with each chapter. Please let them have a little alone time for some hot butt nekkid lovemaking. OK, yeah, I just went all superficial, but I think DeLeon needs to make love to [not just have sex with] the woman he so clearly loves. Tis the Season!!! LOL

*off to read yet again*

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26 2010

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

omgee... Please don't let Kendra go home with Pa and the boys. This can't be good. but it's funny as hell... The description of Pa was damn funny. and all the pig references does remind one of Deliverance. Duelling Banjos, anyone? LMAO!!!

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Date: October 01 2010

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Dax actually noticed that there's something going on between DeLeon and Kendra. 'cause he seems a little simple sometimes.

Yep, I knew he still was in love with his ex.  Hopefully, he'll get to talk and resolve things with her soon.

And now Kendra's old life is about to collide with her new one. I have no idea how that will turn out. Will DeLeon retreat even further?

You know, the more I read, the more I want. Looking forward to your next post. Thanks for doing this over the holiday.

Author's Response: thank you so much for your kind words! i hope to update, maybe tomorrow. oh, snap, Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 24 2010

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Prince's mom is not to be f'd with. Whew, she's a woman after my own heart. And stepdad is no slouch either.

Kendra thinking Dax is adorable speaks volumes. Perfect description of a puppy. Her thoughts about DeLeon speaks volumes also and he's definitely not adorable.

I'm conflicted; because Prince seems a perfect fit for her. Too many men, too little time.

The punch to the face was so needed. I'm love with Prince, although my heart belongs to DeLeon. Wonder if he'll get to meet Chase? Would love to see Pa, Dax and DeLeon get their hands on the prick.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 10 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I've read some of your other stories and you're very gifted. This one looks to be a hoot. Grandpa is a trip. I can hear the banjo music as I read.

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Date: September 30 2010

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I'm from the deep South, so that kind language is not shocking to me.

That Cathleen seems like a right proper bitch. She could be quite dangerous to Kendra. I mean she looks like the type who would be right at home with good ole fashion lynching. But I think Kendra can more than handle this chick on a one on one basis.

The company DeLeonis keeping does not speak well of him. I'm interested to see how he and Kendra interact before I comment on their suitability. Dax just seems like a little puppy dog you want to pet and cuddle. Not someone you'd have intense feelings for. We'll see.

Errbody seems to be enamored with Miss Kendra. She's going to have numerous suitors. This is going to be too funny. 'Cause something tells me that DeLeon might be possessive in this case. :-)

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Date: October 10 2010

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Who put a bug up DeLeon's ass? This is going to be interesting. It's hard to fathom that there might be something between him and Kendra. But I'm sure you'll work it out. And it'll be most entertaining along the way. Or maybe she'll fall for Pa? good lawd, LOL.

Author's Response:

yeah, DeLeon's a bit of a dick, but all these characters will grow along the way. picture her falling for pa! Lmao!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 04 2010

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Even though this was short, it was very effective. Will Kendra be the one to make DeLeon confront his feelings? She's going to be really frustrated by his refusing to go there as long as he thinks Dax is interested, even though he really wants to be with her. I'm thinking Kendra will force the issue at some point.

Never knew that batter could be so sexy. LOL

I'm loving the tension between those two. And there's a lot of it. This dance that they're doing is really a joy to read. Something's or someone's going to blow. I'm really liking the pacing of their budding relationship. I can wait for them to get together, because you're making the lead-up to it so very interesting. So, give me more.

Dax still loves his ex-girlfriend. 

The pic of DeLeon is not what I saw in my head, but damn, I can get with that. *growl*

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Date: December 24 2010

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

how I've missed DeLeon. And yeah, the Sheriff oughta be dead.

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Date: January 23 2012

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

And so real life is about intrude on the new couple. *le sigh*

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Date: January 23 2011

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

ahh hell naw!!! Hope needs to die.

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Date: July 10 2011

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Kendra made a big mistake getting in the car with that lunatic.

Coraline is about to become a widow. That sheriff has lost his damn mind. DeLeon is going to lose his shit on that fool.

I so love this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 20 2011

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

IT!!! I'm ecstatic right now. An update! Woohoo!

DeLeon and Kendra, what can I say, theirs is a deep connection. I could feel it. And I'm with DeLeon. I felt like decking that Prince. True, he was worried beyond measure, but he sounded like a spoiled ass brat. Making this all about HIM! Hell, Kendra could've DIED, you prick!

DeLeon is not the one to f with. Somehow, I don't think Prince has really accpeted Kendra's decisions. He'd better think long and hard before he gets in between DeLeon and Kendra.He could lose her friendship and that is the relationship that they have. There seems to some personal issues that Prince needs to address before he goes proclaiming that he  loves someone. And that's just it, he said he loves her, not that he's in love with her.

I was more than overjoyed with Kendra's decisions; because I was so afraid for DeLeon. He was working himself up to losing her and we started to see him revert back to what he was before Kendra came into his life. It would probably be worse, actually, since he's had a taste of a love that he hadn't experienced before.

It was only towards the end that I could breathe easily. I'm off to re-read this. I so love this story. Thank you so much for updating and a fine update it is.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2011

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

*walks in*

*peers around*

*no new update*


*slowly backs out, sobbing*

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 13 2011

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

IT, regarding the negative nelly, just brush it off. This story IS different and I'm loving every frickin minute of it.

Author's Response: thank you so much for the encouraging words.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14 2010

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

What about me, Kendra?

Yeah Kendra, could you answer that one for us? You know you want him. Glad she said exactly what we've all been saying.  She put it all out there for him. Now what will DeLeon do?

OK, Coraline needs her ass handed to her. She's willing to kill Kendra. Un-frickin-believable!!!

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Date: December 13 2010

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Dax and Pa had me laughing my ass off. Pa wants a grandbaby boy from Kendra and DeLeon. I'm thinking that's a real possiblity. I'm hoping they'll be given at least one more day of bliss before the shitz hits the fan.

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Date: January 10 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

DeLeon is willing to give Dax a chance with Kendra. That's a brother's love, 'cause Kendra has DeLeon all kinds of twisted. I feel bad for him. There is so much anger and pain in him. I love that Kendra doesn't take any crap from him. She's even got him not being able to "perform". He's whipped. Dax is still that little puppy. I don't think he can handle Kendra. What will happen when she gets her memory back? How can she realistically end up with either DeLeon or Dax. Although I would love for her and DeLeon to get a little something going. I think she would be able to soothe his spirit amongst other things. ;)

This story is one of my favs. It is so well written.  It makes me laugh, sad and angry [with those evil ass women plotting against Kendra]. I'm really enjoying this a lot.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08 2010

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

yep, I swooned at this chapter. A glimpse into a happy DeLeon. yummy. It would be a crime if he ended up alone.

That Cat and her damn mother need a good ass whuppin. And they'll have an ally in Mrs. Hope. Just because her crazy ass husband fantasized he was banging Kendra while in bed with HER. What an idiot. He's about to cause all kinds of problems for Kendra, who hasn't actively tried to entice any of these men, except, maybe DeLeon.

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Date: December 13 2010

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

ITM, you should know that I'm glad you updated *hell, I bugged you enough about it :)*

Kenny is not yet ready to invite her past into her current just yet. 

 I really loved this chapter. One, because it's been soooo long since my hit and I'm a slut for this story. Two, but more important, is that this is a tale that I connect to on a very emotional level. The characters seem like real people and I'm totally invested in what happens to them.

My heart hurts for DeLeon and the heartbreak that he sees in his future and is so afraid of. I'm not sure how he will handle it if she goes back to her life. Maybe, she does need to do that to make sure that he is what she wants. Will he do something to make her do that, since he's convinced that she wants to go back to her life? I can see him doing it, thinking it's best for her.

He made slow, sweet love to her as if it was the very last time he'd ever have the chance.

This, I fear, is what will happen very soon. *sigh*

I'm off to read this again. I read it in haste the first time. It's like you've been in the desert for a long time without water and when you do get some, you greedily gulp it down. And once you sated that initial thirst, you then can sip slowly and get your fill. That is what this chapter is for me. So, off I go, to sip slowly.

Thanks so much for the update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2011

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

So glad you updated. DeLeon makes my heart hurt. He loves her so. And now Prince is talking about his love?!?!? This can't be good.

Loved her convo with Amy and the good advice that Amy gave her.

They've had a few times without protection. Sistagirl is going to end of preggers. Can't help but. I'm thinking DeLeon is pretty damn potent.

Chica, you make me want more each time you post. I simply think you are the bestest!!!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2011

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

DeLeon wore my girl out!!! He is so happy right now. I shouldn't anticpate the hurt that's coming, so I won't. I'll just enjoy his joy as he does.

THe best friend likes Kendra, the dog likes Kendra, what more could you ask for? :)

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Date: January 05 2011

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Yay!!! They have christened the trailer. And it only takes one time to get preggers. LOL

Happy New Year! Thanks for the post. I was jsut wondering where this was. I'm addicted. Have a safe New Year, Chica.

Author's Response: thanks, boo! i have pretty much the rest of the entire story mapped out, just about finding the time to write them. there's a lot more than i thought too! thank you for sticking with the story and giving such encouraging reviews.

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Date: January 01 2011

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Kendra, the dog whisperer! LOL

Well the two women in DeLeon's life have met and really like each other. 

Dax and Kendra are friends. Hopefully, he will come to see that. I don't think DeLeon will make a move unless that gets cleared up. Or he can't help himself, which will further piss him off.

I feel so sad for DeLeon. He is stuck in the anger phase of grief and it doesn't look as if he's going to leave it any time soon. I sure would like to see Kendra be the one to ease some of his pain. Poor baby. I'm liking him so much, even though he's being a jackass to Kendra.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 12 2010

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