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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


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Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 83581
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Ichi (1)

Yeah, I'm thinking I could do with MORE. :)

Author's Response:

Okay then...

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 06 2011

Title: Chapter 4: San (3)

I really liked the latter part of this chapter. I'm so glad the wife has not been demonized so far. I feel bad for her. She really has no one to talk to. poor thing... and to be trapped in the same household as that mother-in-law of hers, I wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy.



Author's Response:

Yes, the exchange between Kaoru and Sara was very nice. I kind of surprised myself with that one. But when I found myself going in that direction, my own feelings got mixed up in there.

Thank you!

Hasta pronto!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 12 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Go (5)

I didn't realize that there were more chapters. What a treat. I almost missed that damn smackdown. But something tells me that Yuki's mother let that go in one ear and out the other. She is so used to getting her way that she won't take Sara seriously. I felt like knocking hell of her myself.

As to pairings, I really am intrigued by Kamir. Yuki, not so much. However, I have to see more of Kamir to see if he might be good for Sara. I have a deep fondness for Kaoru and hope she's not hurt by this. I know I don't want to see Sara in an affair with Yuki. It would harken back to him having his cake... He's not someone that I think highly up right now.



Author's Response:

Gotta keep up! Ha! I think many share your feelings for the mother. Wanting to do her physical harm is a common theme. Well, lets find out more about Kamir then, shall we? Poor Yuki, he gets no love.

Thank You!!!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 24 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Teresa has to spend her weekend completing her assignments for her Major British Writer’s class. What happens when stress, wine, and sleep deprivation are mixed together? Nothing good…

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2464
Read Count: 1593
Published: April 27 2011
Updated: April 27 2011


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Who knew that the classics could be so stimulating and hilarious. This was inspired. Well done.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 28 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 426]
Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 88228
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 12

Ellie, do what's best for you, girl. When she needed Nick the most, all he could do was ask her to get rid of their child. I hope he understands what that really did to her, especially since she lost the baby. That is a life changing event and not something one can just "get over".

Love the story. You're doing a fine job with it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 10 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 10 pt 2

Surprised that Nick is doing drugs. He's really taking Ellie's leaving badly. I agree with Ellie that she should've talked things through with Nick before leaving. I'm not sure going back on his home turf is a good idea. It would be best for Ellie for them to meet on neutral grounds AWAY from his family, especially his mother. Moms has now gotten it into her head that Nick needs Ellie and she'll do her best to deliver Ellie to him, Ellie be damned.

I hope that Ellie is strong enough to withstand the onslaught she's about to encounter when she goes back. Marta seems the type to do things BY ANY MEANS NECESSARY. Hopefully, Nick nor Elllie will fall for her machinations. I think whatever Marta comes up with will test who both Nick and Ellie are as people and as a couple.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 19 2011

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 11

Bianca needs to dial it back a bit. She doesn't know everything and needs to stay outta grown folks business.

Nick is coming off like a spoiled brat. Ellie is really handling herself quite well, so far. What are the odds that Marta has sent Ellie's bags to the family home? Ellie in the midst of vipers' nest. Poor thing. She needs to set these folks straight. If they can't behave, she should get the hell outta there.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 22 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 pt 1

I'm sorry, but the adage that to get over someone is get under someone does not necessarily work. Nick is spinning or has spun out of control. And Ellie is no better off. I feel bad for them both, particularly Ellie.

Short, but really packs a punch.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 17 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 8

uh oh. Will they be able to survive this? Nick shocked me with the abortion idea. Ellie might want to re-think this marriage thing, but will they let her go with what she knows. Complicated and scary.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 11 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9

I thought she would leave him. Now the question is who will give in first? At least I get a sense that he really loves her. What will his reaction be once he's over the shock?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 14 2011

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 13

And Ellie is there, why? Delia is right. Ellie needs to leave with the quickness. And you know damn well, Nick knew Ellie could hear him and his girlfriend gettin' down and didn't care one bit. He's hurt her so many times, she doesn't owe him squat.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 11 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

A one night stand many years ago is still on the mind of Chase DuPont.  Will he ever see her again??

 

Passionate Encounters



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 1529
Read Count: 10918
Published: June 12 2011
Updated: March 13 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1-Remember

So..umm...like... WOW.  At least he had the presence of mind to pull out. And it ain't the ex-wife's bidness who Chanelle is. This chick is going to be trouble for Chase. Chase might need to put a lock on "no so little" Chase. hee

Can't wait to hear more about his time with Chanelle. 'cause she sure as hell has made an impression on him. And he has made an impression on me. :-)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 14 2011

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Summary:

For married author Dove Morgan, the trip to the big city was the first in a series of things she never thought she'd do. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 44246
Read Count: 28248
Published: July 27 2011
Updated: April 08 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This should be a journey of discovery for Dove. There are so many people in her life that are takers. She is the ultimate giver. It's time for her to teach these folks how to treat her.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 part 1

Ok, the scene between Dove, Barnes, and Xavier had all kinds of undercurrents going on. What flashed in my mind was the three of them together. Amazing.  There is so much to Dove that I don't see why she hasn't gone nuts repressing herself. It would be a full-time job. Hopefully, she'll do what's needed for her own sanity after this is over.

As always, Chica, you blow me away with your use of words to evoke a world that is full of intensity.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 part 2

ummm, yeah... this chapter was stunning. Dove took Xavier in hand, so to speak. Bet Xavier has never met anyone like her. Now what will he do? Betray her? or re-think what they have planned?

We're getting a glimpse of the real Dove and damn, what a woman. There's no way that her husband could handle who she really is. How can she stand not living life as her authentic self?

Each update leaves me wanting to read the next one. 

Brillant writing.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Your ability to use words to evoke such sensuality is beyond brillant. Stunningly, so.

And poor Dove, shouldn't you be able to be as open and honest with the person who is supposedly the closest person to you, your husband? Dove has repressed who she is and that will eventually make her either leave her husband or slowly go insane.

If I could give you 20 stars, I would. Thanks, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Xav was not ready for Dove by any means. She's got him all twisted. A little oral stimulation has rocked his world. Can you imagine what will happen if and when they sleep together. She'll have him stuttering.

Wonder if he'll come clean with her soon? Or will he be too afraid in the fear that she'll leave him hanging, so to speak.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

well, damn! ummm...yeah, this was...yeah...Xav, yeah, I enjoyed this chapter. *purely for the literary value :)*

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Xav, still lying to yourself, huh. Hope Dove doesn't find out about the deal from someone else before Xav can tell her.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 11 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 108189
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Family

Ahh, the father doesn't seem to live what he preaches. Will he learn something from this? Aura seems to be a strong person and Jeremy has his own mind. Here's hoping they can withstand the attitude of the dad. Wonder what the ladies in the family think.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 31 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

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Shy loner white nerd developes caring and complex relationship with popular black girl at school.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 40411
Read Count: 24592
Published: August 02 2011
Updated: April 02 2017


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

She didn't lose Rick. She threw him away. Marva is so self-centered and really not a nice person at all.

It's time for Rick to be a little selfish. So glad he didn't open the door. He really needs to safeguard himself from her. She will take and take and never give anything in return.  Let's see if Marva learns anything from this.

Sabrina gave Rick some very good advice.

Rick is not as much of a loser as Marva thinks. He's able to go on without her even though he's hurt. He's got a life to live and he's going to do it. What will Marva do with her life? She seems adrift.

So glad you had a backup. what a narrow escape. I'd hate not to be able to read this story. Good chapter, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thank you. The thing Marva needs to learn is that you can't treat people any kind of way and expect them to forgive you like it was nothing. She has to learn to GAIN people's respect because she's been so used to people just giving it to her.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well now... Rick is venturing into getting a little experience. While this won't change what he feels for Marva, it's good for him to get to know different kinds of women. I like the convo between him and Sam. Hopefully, it continues to be an honest relationship. Sam will be able to teach him some things about woman, whereas, Marva was still a girl. I'm really interested in seeing what has transpired in Marva's life in the mean time. I like that you're showing what's going on with Rick. This is his story as much as it is Marva's. Love this.

Really glad you updated. I was missing this story. Now, I want more. *yeah, I'm greedy*

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2011

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Rick famous... wonder if Marva will read the book and see what effect she's had on him?

Glad this one is back. Missed it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 10 2012

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[Reviews - 306]
Summary:

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Lucas Spaulding waited three years before he could claim his woman his mother brought into their privilaged home. She swore that she would never leave, now it looks like she needs to be reminded who she belongs to. she's on notice. Lucas is on the hunt and he doesn't intend to play fair.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: The Alphas of Spaulding Inc.
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 41598
Read Count: 71799
Published: August 17 2011
Updated: July 26 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really like Luke. He knew that Mina was it for him but he also knew that the time was not right. He's respectful of the age difference and has done everything he can to remove the temptation by moving to the guest house. Now that she's 18, all bets are off. At least he knows and Mina knows that Luke is serious about her. He could've had her on the beach, but he's waited 3 years and is in no rush, which shows quite a bit of restraint.

I like Mina, who seems to be much more mature than her 18 years. She still has a lot to learn, but she's a smart cookie and knows her own mind. She did have me kinda worried when she wanted to use Rick to get a bit of "experience", but was smart enough to know that Rick would just be a substitute for who she really wants.

Luke is clear in his long-term goal, does Mina understand that Luke sees her as his future wife? Will she be ready for that? Or does she need to go out and see the world before she settles down with him? Will Luke be able to let her do that? Will he be the one to see that she might need to do that, even if she doesn't?

This could go in so many directions. I'm along for the ride. I trust your judgment in where this is going. You've really caught my attention with some very strong writing. I was all caught up in the tale. Brillant, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

"Sometimes people who are very smart do very dumb things.  He couldn’t believe she called.  He doubted that she even realized the full extent of what she had done.  The danger.  After years of just waiting patiently, the lamb was being presented to the lion.

And the lion would without hesitation devour her."

He had expected more of a fight, but perhaps she hadn’t truly understood the consequences that reaching out would entail.  This was going to be interesting.  Entertaining.  But no matter how it happened, it would finally end.  There was no turning back now.

 

Now what makes me think this is in response to Christina's call and not Mina's?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 29 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.