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Lucas Spaulding waited three years before he could claim his woman his mother brought into their privilaged home. She swore that she would never leave, now it looks like she needs to be reminded who she belongs to. she's on notice. Lucas is on the hunt and he doesn't intend to play fair.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: The Alphas of Spaulding Inc.
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 41598
Read Count: 71799
Published: August 17 2011
Updated: July 26 2012


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, Gabe, Luke, and Mama Spaulding have all failed to understand who Mina is to one degree or another. But I suspicion that they're about to find out. My major fear is that Christina has unleashed something that will hurt Mina more than Luke could ever do so. I hope Randall finds out about his wife's activities. It's clear she's seeing things thru a warped prism. She's actually not seeing Mina at all, but herself. How could she not see that Luke has been quite honorable in regards to Mina? If he finds out that his own mother is behind the shit storm that's coming. Christina will be in a world of hurt. I wonder if Papa Spaulding is a DOM, since it seems all of the boys are. hmm

Loving this. Well done, Chica.

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Date: April 28 2012

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 135725
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me

I don't think I'll look at a jar of chocolate the same way again. :)

Julian is going home and taking Mari with him. That says a lot. My hope is that he and his father will resolve things between them. On some level, I think Mari is picking up on this tension and that may play into her fears.

Tam and Daniel, wow! Daniel is all Alpha. Tam has more than met her match. Who would've thunk. I really like how raw their relationship is.

Great chapters, Chica.

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Date: August 31 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

Daniel is something else. DAMN! He set Miss Tam straight.

Marri creases me up with all her names for Daniel. LMAO

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Date: September 08 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11 There Really Is No Place Like Home II

Yeah, Daniel is good at blackmail. I love his form of blackmail. I hope he survives the attack.

I can understand his father being wary of Tam. He's only seen a certain side of her and has formed his opinion accordingly. I hope during the time of Daniel's recuperation *hopefully* that he'll get to know the other side of her and realize how much she loves his son.

You are rocking this story.



Author's Response:

Jun will come around.  And you are right about him forming his opinion based on her past.  Jun is old school and a woman who sees a lot of men...well you know what he thinks about that!  Thanks for the review.  More is on the way soon!

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Date: September 12 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Julian is more man than those three combined.

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Date: August 22 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

I have to say, I'm with Tam on this one. Julian is about to have Mari screaming such that only dogs will be able to hear her. Can't wait.

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Date: August 22 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 Learning You All Over Again

Damn if Marri didn't channel my girl, Tam. LMAO

Tam is learning the hard way that your reputation is something to be guarded. Daniel needs to dial it back a little. It's obvious he doesn't trust her and how can they have a real relationship if he's always going to question her honesty. They do need to maybe take it slower to see if they can get over this. meanwhile, she's got a pork bun in the oven. ;)

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Date: September 04 2011

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

I fear that Seleah will be a drain on Demaris once he becomes successful. She's a user and will use any and everyone that will let her.

Jun has seen who Tam really is. Glad he's come around. I hope Daniel gets his mojo back... at least his oral skills are still pretty impressive.  *snerk*

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Date: September 18 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4 Sinking in Deep and Liking It

Wow. Julian. Daniel. Wow

The poems were so romantic. 

Hope Julian doesn't start to question where Marri learned how to make his eyes roll back in his head.

I really like both of these couples. They really mesh.

Great chapter.

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Date: August 25 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3 Seeing the Real You

Damn if Julian isn't something else. He was very clear as to what he wants to do with Marri. Wow. I can see how she would be scared. And Julian is just as scared. They have a lot in common. And then we have Tam, who is a trip, but just as scared. The only one in that bunch who doesn't seem to be scared, is Daniel. I can see both Daniel and Julian rocking my girls in very different ways. This should be good.

The fact that Julian finally wants to get rid of some baggage speaks to how intense his feelings are for Amaris. 

Really enjoying this story, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2011

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Never would have thought that you could make me like Seleah, but you have. I'm stunned. I'm actually becoming invested in her and Joseph. I really like the new pic of Joe.

Will Seleah be truthful with Dem? I hope so, because this is not going away. I like how you weave the next story into the current one. It makes for a seamless transition to get to know the characters for the next story. A really good technique that benefits the readers. I thank you kindly, chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Some people get irritated with me because my mind can be all over the place.  I never forget the original characters, but I do tend to wander...LOL.

Thanks for the review.  More is coming soon!

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Date: September 25 2011

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Call me cold-blooded, but good riddance. Too bad Moms doesn't drop dead. Now we see where Kayla got her scary craziness from.

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Date: October 18 2011

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

Seleah has come a long way. Looking forward to them getting married.

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Date: February 06 2012

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In the Sedetian Empire a Dashenka male rules with absolute power. While the female is taught submission and obeisance. And humans are nothing more than slaves. It is within this society that half-breed Aria Skal is born and must learn to accept if she has any hope surviving.  But survival seems nearly impossible when she discovers that her Vadar has sold her to the highest bidder, the son of the Ruling Male.

Oren Di-Lor is a cruel and overbearing male who hates the very air Aria breathes. He is her newly acquired mate and the bane of her existence. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 41889
Read Count: 31500
Published: August 23 2011
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Aria don't play when she gets pissed. I hope you update soon.

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Date: October 13 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I know Safian is Ren's friend, but if Ren's reaction to the healer touching Aria was any indication, he might not like his friend being friendly with Aria.

This interlude between Ren and Aria was intensely intimate. I want more of that. Evidently Ren has never been in love and is swimming in unknown waters. Aria is swimming in those same waters. Can't wait until they swim together. ;)

Enjoying this a lot, Chica.

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Date: October 19 2011

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Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 126645
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: ME&U

um...yeah...wow

Havanna, you best say yes to that man. Hell, I would've been saying, si, oui, Naam, Ja, HIja', or click-click, or anything he wanted as soon as he drop trou. Either you say it now or from the hospital bed after Mal has "persuaded" you as only he can. Girl, I'll come visit ya' and bring something for those body shakes.

E, I made the mistake of reading this chapter just before going to work. I would burst out laughing throughout the day just thinking about this. You got folks thinking I'm "special".

Yeah, sex scenes are really hard to write well, but my dear, you have done a masterful job. I was completely drawn in by the vivid picture you painted. I was 'wore out" after reading it. I can only imagine how CoCoBean felt. Talk about walking funny, that's if she can walk and I just can't see that happening anytime soon. The elephant leg was in full effect. DAMN!

Well done, Chica, well done.

I must go back and re-read this and the prior chapter. Purely for the literary value. ;)



Author's Response:

Your reveiw made my day when I first read it. Mal was putting in some serious work on his CoCobean. So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

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Date: May 02 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

The minute that bitch uncle of hers hit CoCo, I was like, Mal is gonna beat your ass. And there was Mal, and I was screaming, kill the summbitch. I have not enjoyed a scene so much as Mal beating the hell outta this fool. My question is, why is this prick allowed to family functions with that diseased wife of his? He knows what he's got on his arm but he insists on downgrading CoCo. The question is why? It can't be just because that ho-wife of his has told him tales of Cayenne? Is he that dim? Mal needs to beat that ass EVERYTIME he sees this fool.

Mal had me all dreamy-eyed at him sticking up for his CoCobean. There's nothing like a man going full-on protective mode for the love of his life. And that's what Havanna is. I must say while Mal was in the shower, washing and "fixin" himself, my first thought was, all that tasty goodness going down the drain. *ducks head at such thoughts*

Chica, I can only say this was a masterfully done chapter.



Author's Response:

I was screaming the same thing!! Mal did the damn thing!!....Now to the shower scene....tasty goodness, huh? naughty chica...Thanks for reading!

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Date: September 05 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

DAMN! Samuel is pissed and crazy. But is he crazy enough to step to Mal? Ummm, evidently. Bad mistake, hombre.

Yessss, CoCo, fist...connects to ALB's piehole... Good Times.

And you're right, here comes the crazy. Can't wait.



Author's Response:

lol...ain't Samuel crazy?! Now is he crazy enough to step to Mal? We will have to see...I can't wait till that mess pop off. CoCo...my girl. She tried to keep her promise. Thanks for reading!!

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Date: September 03 2011

Title: ME&U

"I was very close to snatching this story."

This sent icy shivers up my spine, I mean, literally. I look forward hungrily for an update of ME&U and the idea that you were going to stop sent me into a tailspin. Don't ever underestimate that folks are not digging this story. And if you hit a roadblock, just chill for a bit and remember there are people who have become invested in the story and the characters that you've introduced to us. I know I'm not a writer, but I am a avid reader and have a very selfish reason for trying to give you advice. I want this story to continue and I want you to do it.

As per usual, this update was well worth the wait. Mal is the one for Cocobean. I've never encountered a man who would move heaven and earh for a woman like Mal does and will for Coco. We have yet to see the extent he'll go to to do just that.

Chica, I love this story. well done.



Author's Response:

I was thinking seriously of snatching ME&U for the past few months, that was mainly the reason for the very long breaks in between the last couple of updates. Nothing was going right and it was a very rough time.

I'm just elated that so many people are TeamMal lovers and are rooting for the crazy couple and I didn't want to let Mal & his CoCobean's fans down. Like I said in the update, ME&U's muse is slowly and surely gaining speed and I'm determine to see it thru to the end for all of y'all and for Mal & CoCo. Their story deserves to be told.

You are right we haven't seen the full extent of what Mal will do for his CoCobean...Mal going Hulk SMASH is just the tip of the iceberg. Just wait and see. Thanks so much for reading!

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Date: April 07 2012

Title: ME&U

"Mal got him some CoCobean."

That... is an understatement.

Actually, Cal needs to realize that Havanna needs to know if not just to be prepared.

"I can take care of myself."

Aww, but baby, you caannn't. *doing my best Betty Davis impression in "Whatever Happened to Baby Jane"*

And poor CoCo, I suspicion that Mal has more tricks up his sleeve and you've just sampled the appetizer. The main entree has yet to come. Pardon the pun.

And yeah, Tony needs to get his head outta his ass and be real. Cal needs to know. And why would Cal do a complete 180 and get with Princess? She's confused. Initially, I thought Princess was someone that was about to be hurt by Calise's experimentation. Now, I'm not so sure? Wonder if she got with Cal for nefarious reasons or was she strong-armed after they met? I'm sure you'll enlighten us soon.

You're setting the stage perfectly.



Author's Response:

So glad that you are enjoying it. Tony and Cal have a long road ahead of them. A whole lot of fuckups and misunderstandings. Thanks for reading.

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Date: June 03 2012

Title: ME&U

Asses will be whooped? I have something to live for. *rolling on the floor in hysterics*

Cayenne is one delusional, over confident, simple ho. Dismiss who Mal really is, will you? Yeah, you'll regret that, you twit.



Author's Response:

Yep...asses will be whooped. Thanks for reading.

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Date: April 13 2012

Title: ME&U

"I been bad, sis."

Yes. Yes you have *laughin' my ass off*

"...why in the hell do they look like booty cheeks?"

'cause they are *still on the floor laughin'*

"That glorious event earlier will be the first and only time a piece of prophylactic come between me and the heaven between your thighs..."

*DEAD*

"She could have sworn her pussy gasped in awe..."

Yeah, I could see that. *sweating bullets now*

He was going to fuck her to sleep.

um, no words. *mouth agape*

He leaned forward and ran his tongue over her gasping mouth and continued his slaying of her senses.

Mal is a killer in more ways than one. *where's my Mal?*

We see how much Mal and his CocoBean have in common. They are both survivors. And he is always in her corner. Havanna is no longer alone. He will there, come hell or high water. *swoons*

This was a very satisfying chapter, Chica.

Brillant!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Your reveiw has made my day BellaChica. I think that I laughed for minutes on end. So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 24 2012

Title: ME&U

This Malcolm is just an ordinary man, nothing more, nothing special..

Oh Samuel, you are so going to find out differently.

Cayenne won't stop until someone put a bullet thru her brain.



Author's Response:

Haha...Mal is defintely more than just an ordinary man...I have been preaching that to y'all everysince I intoduced him in Full Bloom. He's my hot-boy...just stay tuned. Cayenne really does need a bullet. Thanks for reading!

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Date: October 03 2011

Title: ME&U

yep, I was digging the update.



Author's Response:

So glad that you digged it. Thanks for reading!

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Date: October 16 2011

Title: ME&U

That British Bastard... I fall more in love with him in each chapter. Havanna has one strong advocate in Mal.

Jethro and Mal are of the same mind.

Darren is stoopid. He deserves whatever comes his way. Somebody needs to put Francis six feet under. That bitch never learns. And that dumbass brother of hers has the same familial affliction. Can't wait until someone (Mal or his emissary) beats that ass.

Surely Princess saw Cal's reaction to Tony. And Cal needs to stop. She wants Tony.

And finally, Grayson... yum.



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it! I fall more in love with Mal with each chapter too. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.