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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 126645
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: ME&U

As I first started reading the restaurant scene, it hit me, Cayenne! That caused me to read each word with dread as the person who sent the DVD was revealed. Brillant!

Samuel has already done some dumb-ass sh!t so why not go whole hog and get involved in Cayenne's plans. Let the chips fall where they may. He deserves EVERYTHING he gets. And Cayenne will find to her dismay that that "ridiculously rich playboy" is much more than meets the eye. *gleefully rolling my hands together*

Linny is a hoot. She and CoCo are a real pair. Love their interactions.

Dah hell! I'm suprised Jefferson hasn't met with some unfortunate accident and that "mother", damn! Just when I think no one can outdo Cayenne...

I was wondering if George was going to call and tell someone about going on. This just got more and more interesting.

My list of who should die has just gotten a little bit longer. :)

And ah, yeah... that hood action... ah, yeah. speechless!!!

Really missed this story, but so worth the wait, Chica. Mal is all kinds of tasty.



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it and I'm happy it was worth the wait! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11 2012

Title: ME&U

"Mal is a man...a real damn supreme alpha being of glorified testosterone all wrapped up nicely in 10 thousand dollar suits and shoes. A sly wolf in designer sheep's clothing. "

Yep, that's Mal.

"The one's whose neck look like a puppy's teething toy." that cracked me up.

While I LOVE the Elephant Leg Mal. I ADORE the tender Mal with him and his CoCoBean just being. This was all kinds of sweet.

The fact Mal could smell the scent means something. Havana, don't let that man go. And yeah, you can tell something wicked this way comes.

And let the ass whuppin' begin. Go Mary!

Good update, Chica.



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it. If i had a Mal in my life...ummmhmmm. I love the Tender Mal bout as much as I love Elephant Leg Mal and Hulk-Smash Mal. I just love him. I think that Grandma Havanna sees that Mal is the one for CoCo and that's why he could smell her presence. I got my money on Mary. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 10 2012

Title: ME&U

I love these characters. <3

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Date: July 22 2013

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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80404
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 I See the Monster You've Become

You know, even if Ronald Riley became the poster child for good mental health, I would not be able to have a relationship with him as his daughter, except for a long distance one. It takes more than a sperm donation to be a father/daddy and he ain't it. Joe Bob is. And that won't change. Ronald Riley sets my teeth on edge everytime he opens his pie hole.

Glad that Micah is OK. good chapter.



Author's Response:

Ronald Riley is in deep denial.  What will it take for him to realize that he has a problem?  It's coming up real soon....

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 How Do You See Me Now?

Brenda, you have me hooked. This story has so many layers. But, that's to be expected when you put pen to "paper".

Yeah, Joe Bob might be a "hick", but he's more of a man than the Lorilei's bio-unit will EVER be. And Lorilei is one smart cookie.

Miriam's convo with Candace creased me up. To have to tell your future mother-in-law your sexual secrets regarding her son, priceless! But it worked out.

I really like Aunt Beanie and hope she gets some lovin' in this. She's been a real positive influence on LoriLei. As has Lori's Papa.  To be taunted as a child can do some major damage to one's self estem unless you have a good support system and Lori seems to have that.

That ex-husband needs a good ass kicking. In due time, in due time.

Looking forward to the next update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Miriam didn't know what to think when Joe Bob brought Candace to meet her.  LOL.  I think Candace finally got through to her and gave her mother in law an answer that satisfied her worries!  More to come soon!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Do You See What I See?

This...

You don’t know this woman well enough to be putting your mouth on her like that! It’s disgusting!”

and this ...

you just don’t do that kind of thing with any old woman!  I’ve never done it, not even with Jill for god sake! I certainly wouldn’t do it with some strange woman!”

 

Teddy Lee is going to eat those words, so to speak. *snerk*

And Miriam is about to start plotting. I love this story.

 



Author's Response:

Ha Ha!  Teddy Lee is going to eat those words...and a lot more!  LOL.  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.  My muse is flowing!  More t come soon.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 06 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 I Can See Your Fear and Pain!

Teddy Lee is ready to learn. Sabrina better jump on that. Aunt and niece have some of the same insecurities stemming from different issues. I hope Sabrina will give Teddy Lee a chance. At some point, the alpha is going to rear his head.

And Micah, he's turning into a right proper alpha. Lei needs to be careful about continually pushing him away. I knew that little witch Jessica would start sniffing after Micah, now that he's "acceptable". I'd be really disappointed in Micah if he fell for that wench. He seems to see her for the horrible creature she is. Let's hope it stays that way.

I so enjoy when you update.



Author's Response:

Don't worry.  Micah don't want no Jessica!  She was one of his main torturers when he was little and he hasn't forgotten it.  No matter how good she looks, she'll always be ugly in his eyes, hence the title of this story!  LOL.   More is coming...

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 See the Man That I Am

that skinny-azz b!tch still don't get it, and probably never will. Micah really has his head screwed on right. Teddy Lee, Teddy Lee, Beanie didn't stand a chance.



Author's Response:

No, Jessica doesn't get it and she probably never will.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 I See, I Learn, I Feel

I'm so impressed at how insightful Micah is. Lei better get her act together. Micah has been so understanding, but it's draining on a person to have to constantly reassure someone.

Brenda, this is a wonderful story and you should tell it in however you want. I enjoy your fleshing out of all of the characters. It makes for a more enriching story. Great job, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thaks so much for our review.  Micah is horny and frustrated.  What's wrong with that girl? She's known him since they were five! She doesn't want to lose him, so she'd better get her act together.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 I Learn, I Feel, I See

Miriam and her "girls" are a mess. I cracked up when Amy Lee told Lei to stop the madness girlfriend. And when Miriam said that Micah was an ass man, I was just through.

This was too funny. I'm glad Lei got to see a different side of her grandmother.



Author's Response:

LOL  Those ladies were a trip!  Lei got some good advice though.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 17 2011

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 None Are So Blind as Those Who Refuse to See

I can't say that I'm sad for him. I am sad for Lei's grief.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 26 2011

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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 112664
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Born To Give My Love To You

Tyler is impulsive in a controlled kind of way, if that makes sense. :)

He is so going over to see Kayla. What will happen, there's no telling. The way he's feeling and the way she's feeling, ANYTHING, and I do ANYTHING can happen. I just want to be there to see it. great story and great storytelling, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Blame it on the Snow

ooooh, there's going to be trouble. No protection?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

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Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life
Which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

A story about what it is to love that which you cannot keep.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 32843
Read Count: 42753
Published: November 17 2011
Updated: June 13 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Proposition

Andrew might want to think about why he got so pissed with convo with Rafe. Interesting. Very.

Author''s Response:

lol i agree,  althoug rafael is a jerk :P Thank you Bella!

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Me likey! More please.



Author''s Response:

Hope you enjoy the next update then, thank you baha!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Flock of Birds

The Prologue has peaked my interest and I have somany questions. Just gonna sit back and watch this unfold. Hope you update often. *look at me, you just got started and I'm already demanding*

Author's Response: I'm glad you are being demanding, Im going to need it so I can stay on track. Thank you Bella!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 23 2011

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Summary:

Eve and A.J. Winters had a life most people dreamed of and a love only a handful ever experienced. But one seeming mistake will test everything they hold dear. Can love truly survive on Broken Vows?

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All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are all MINE. I am is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10759
Read Count: 9409
Published: November 22 2011
Updated: February 23 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

This smells like a set-up. He knew Eve was coming, so either he's dumb as a stump or that skank orchestrated this. I'm going with the latter.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 23 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

At least they're talking. But dang, not enough. I'm suspicioning that we haven't seen the last of Eric. Wonder if what he's done has anything to do with Eve?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 26 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 60]
Summary:

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 15877
Read Count: 12084
Published: December 04 2011
Updated: August 02 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

There's a bit of melancholy that I feel when reading about Janet. It makes wish for a better life for her. I hope she finds someone that will be her support system. Even though she has family, it just seems asif she's all alone in the world and that just makes me sad. You've drawn me into the story, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

I'm glad I drew you in. Hopefully the next chapter doesn't disappoint! :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 12 2011

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Summary:

"Give me your panties." What the hell was he thinking? "You do realize that I hate you right?" He shrugged his shoulders and I wanted to hit him. "I never said anything about making love...we're going to make intense hate." I threw my panties at his head....



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60783
Read Count: 68518
Published: December 09 2011
Updated: January 20 2012


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19.2

“I’d already lost so much and you took the one thing from me, which would have made everything better.”

This says it all, doesn't it? Aiden needed Blu but the thought that her father caused the death of his mother kept him "hating" her. So, while they thought they were doing the best for all involved, that turned out not to be the case. Aiden still wanted Blu but hated her and himself for still feeling that way. what a waste.

I must say that you make me "feel" what's going on with Aiden. Well done, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18 2011

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2011

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I suspicioned it was Aiden who caused the accident. And now he knows. What will he do? And what will Blu's reaction be when she finds out. I hope Phillip can help him.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 15 2011

Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

I really fell in love with Aiden and his journey with Lucky to where they are today. This story was gut wrenching in places and very uplifting in others. Thank you for writing it. I enjoyed it immensely.



Author's Response:

Gracias Chica! I love him too. He's my Manga Boy. It was sad for me to end them. Thank you for reading and your reviews!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

All is fair in love and war?

That's the way the story goes until Nita Floyd's promotion is handed to the son of her firm's managing partner. Fifteen years on the job, two failed marriages, and a son and daughter who hate her more than life itself, what's Nita's next move. How far will she go to right the wrong especially when her rival re-acquaints her with a little thing called fun.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 11731
Read Count: 28334
Published: December 12 2011
Updated: March 05 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Introduction - Russ the Glutton for Punishment

Damn if this ain't the funniest. Nita will eat him alive. Chica, you had me rolling. I can't wait to see how these two very disimilar people get together, if they do.



Author's Response:

It's definitely going to be a challenge...a definite challenge and so far oh so fun to write...more characters to introduce with quirks and funny personalities of his own

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 13 2011

Title: Chapter 4: The Apple Doesn't Fall Too Far...

Oh, this should be interesting. Deja is a "mini" Nita. She's just getting back what she put her floks thru. I like her brother. At least the kids are being watched by family.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 15 2011

Title: Chapter 9: A Step Forward...A Mile Back

I really don't know what to say about Nita. All I can do is shake my head. Russ is really going to need a healthy ego on this one. She runs hot and cold. And when she's cold, she's damn cold. If Russ continues to hang around her, he'll need brass balls, 'cause ole girl is going to have them in a vise grip. I feel bad for him. Nita, on the other hand, I vascilate. One minute I feel a bit sorry for her and at other times, I want to hit her in the throat. Her latest whiplash with Russ made me want to knock her ass into next week. There's really no excuse in mistreating another human being, no matter how screwed up you are. And my girl Nita is one f*cked up chica. Nita, get thee to a therapist and quick.

SS, I'm enjoying the hell out of this one. Good job.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.