Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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Member Since: December 26 2009

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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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[Reviews - 359]
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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99741
Read Count: 96996
Published: March 08 2012
Updated: January 31 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Feeling the Fire

fabulous. I'm liking Charlie and Inga. This should be good.Hope Moms is not a problem.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2012

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Summary:

Inspired by Brenda 1257's Take Me Please! challenge



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5313
Read Count: 3479
Published: March 15 2012
Updated: March 19 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

poor Sam. Hope in the next chapter, I'm yelling, YAY SAM!



Author's Response:

I know. I'll yell with you, YAY SAM!!!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 19 2012

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Marisol Smith left in the wee hours of the morning but her heart and mind won't let her move beyond the time she spent with Grady James Halpern. Part two in Mari and Bear's sorta kinda love story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Southern Gents
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 9583
Read Count: 17929
Published: March 16 2012
Updated: May 01 2012


Title: Chapter 9: Love Actually

Montague is a mess. He is hilarious. Finally, Bear gets off his butt and makes it to Mari. And Mari, what a way to announce a pregnancy. This was a great chapter to read. I really like this story and how you're telling it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 01 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Intro ~ The Hardest Part of Goodbye

"...she had every intention of being halfway home."

The operative is is intention. Will Mari be able to leave him? I'm on pins and needles. His method of persuasion was, ahem, shall we say, very convincing. I don't see how she can leave all of that. I have to read this again. Bear is a real quick study.

And if she does leave him, will she be able to stay away? I think not.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Gone Baby Gone

So far, I like Mari. And I actually like Paul David. Mari is in denial. The fact that Bear had persuaded her to stay says a lot. Homegirl was rearranging her life for him! She won't be able to stay away from him. Especially, if there's a little Bear in the oven.

I really want to see more of Paul David. And if he lets Bear know that he had a run-in with Mari, he might lose the family jewels. I don't think you want to miss a pissed off Bear.

Gurl, you best update soon and often. I'm really liking this one.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 18 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Music and Lyrics

Too bad she can't snap it off.

Can't wait to see Bear's reaction to all the goings on. And yep, he's made a mighty fine impression on Miss Marisol. Still think she's carrying a little Bear. That boy was much too eager and prolly much too fertile. And I don't think they used a condom, not. one. damn. time.   So yeah, preggers.  :)

Great story, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 20 2012

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Jane Flowers loved her accounting job at the prestigious firm of Greene and Associates. She had a specific plan on how her life would evolve, and it did not include the loud and bold cowboy millionaire Carter Thorne.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Opposites Attract
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 45166
Read Count: 76165
Published: March 20 2012
Updated: April 07 2016


Title: Chapter 3: {Three}

this trick is crazy. Carter is not going to be pleased.

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Date: May 02 2012

Title: Chapter 2: {Two} {revised-new text added}

animals sense the true nature of a person, don't they? hee

Trina is a delusional fool. Conrad it scary. And Jane ain't having either one of these idiots.

So, now Carter will be up close and personal. This is about to get interesting.

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Date: March 23 2012

Title: Chapter 1: {One}

Jane is my kind of woman. Straight no chaser. Saw a problem and dealt with it. Her eyes said, "I don't want to have this conversation again". Trina best recognize

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Date: March 22 2012

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[Reviews - 593]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90186
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

Love Adam Levine. Love this story. Want to read more.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 01 2012

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 76347
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 3: {Three}

Glenna needs to learn not to mess in grown folks' business. And this is grown folks. What a git. Will is going to destroy Glenna. Richly deserved, I might add.

I really love that this is a mature relationship. Love Elle and Will's father/daughter relationship. And Ana is still young enough to have another youngun, right?

I'll be glad when Will and Ana get some alone time. Elle is a sweetheart, but I'm with Gretchen, shut up!

Will is so tender with Ana. They have a natural rhythm.

Everytime I see Glenna, I think of the Wizard of Oz, but of the evil witch.

Loved the update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 07 2012

Title: Chapter 4: {Four}

"Once he saw Ana all his problems would end."

No dude, your problems are just beginning. Freddy is one sick f*ck. But, Will is someone ole Freddy Boy is going to rue the day their paths ever crossed. Ana is well protected.

Thank you so much for the update. A very fine read indeed, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2012

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21 year old Tatyana Dragovich has been an honorary member of the Aleksandrov crime family since childhood. Known as the Aleksandrov Princess, her life as an under ground street racer was perfect with Nikolai and Mikhail, the current heads of the family. What happens when a super sexy cop moves in next door and Tatyana finds herself in bed with law enforcement AND the mob? HELP!



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 41094
Read Count: 77718
Published: April 04 2012
Updated: April 17 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Foot On the Gas.....

Oh yeah, I definitely like it. And I REALLY like Mikhail. There's just something about that man. And if he's not the love interest, I'm putting a bid in for him to get his own story. Yeah, I like him that much. :)

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Date: April 19 2012

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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Henry McDermont had been determined to win the affection of his long lost daughter and his college sweetheart, Vanessa.  For the last four months he had done everything he knew how to show them that he cared, but will Henrietta be so easily won over?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15815
Read Count: 5468
Published: April 05 2012
Updated: April 10 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Henrietta's Frustration

Oh Will, she still has her training wheels on. Is Henny ready for someone mature? She really needs to grow up. And yeah, Cass was the one to tell her about herself. Will sounds mighty yummy.

This was a pleasure to read. The beginning was tense with emotions, but the ending was so much fun.  I don't know if I can wait until Memorial Day, Ms Brenda. :)



Author's Response:

Well I say Memorial day because I want to try to update the other stories.  More will come though!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Vanessa's Visit

I knew Henny was going to react that way. She's running on emotions and intense ones at that. Her reactions are that of a young child and undrestandable. No matter how old she is, she is still Vanessa's CHILD and dealing with past hurt as a CHILD. Hence the child-like reactions. Yeah, Henry and Vanessa probably should've taken things more slowly. But the reality is, they didn't. A baby is on the way and they want to be together. They shouldn't have to wait until everyone around them comes around before they do what they feel they need to do. Either folks except Henry and Vanessa's decisions or they don't. Henny will have to deal with it on her own terms and in her own time. The same way that her mother and father have to deal with things on their own terms and time. It's not all about Vanessa and Henry and it's not all about Henny, either. They're all being a bit self-involved. But that's normal.

Anyhoo, I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to whether Henny will realize that her mother can love her and her father and the new baby. Henny has been spoiled by having her mother all to herself for twenty some odd years and now she'll have to share. That's really hard to do.



Author's Response:

You hit the nail on the head Bella.  Henny has had Vanessa all to herself all her life.  She had Henry at her beck and call because she knew that he wanted a relationship with her.  Now she feels all that has been snatched from her, though it really hasn't.  More is coming, probably Memorial Day.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2012

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[Reviews - 154]
Summary:

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Carey Collins is Nashville's most eligible bachelor. His love em and leave em style have made him notorious on the Nashville dating scene. Can the beautiful and kind Bianca Releford make the self proclaimed "King of bachelordom" finally eat his words and commit to being a husband like his older brothers? Will the Challenges of Love prove to be too much for this couple to handle?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 18716
Read Count: 31412
Published: April 06 2012
Updated: June 06 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Private Rodeos.

well now. Carey is, if nothing, but direct. A month, huh? Yeah, we'll see what he'll do to keep her in his life. Yee haw is right. :)



Author's Response:

A whole month..... Our boy is gonna feel it....

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 13 2012

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Summary:

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Nothing says I love you like insults and threats.

 

A gift fic for my sister in the fight intellectual titmouse.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2004
Read Count: 4821
Published: April 12 2012
Updated: May 01 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Love Lockdown

"Was it worth it...the bubbly laughter...the bashful glances...the fluttering lashes..." He moved closer, his finger connected with the top button of her blouse, "Losing me...was it worth it?"

 

whoa. deep. looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 02 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Intro - Make It A Great Day

all right now. :)

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Date: April 13 2012

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[Reviews - 85]
Summary:

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Victoria and Brian Collins are planning to start their dream family, but someone else has other plans...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1861
Read Count: 3425
Published: April 17 2012
Updated: April 17 2012


Title: Chapter 2: One

“Yeah, well his job was to do me last night.”

This had me rolling.

You mean he couldn't take an hour for some baby makin'?  Oh wait, he's too busy sticking "litle" Brian where he shouldn't.  Brian is a damn fool and I can't wait for Victoria to find out and dump his ass. He has proven he can't be trusted. That chick didn't force him to drop trou. And all that deep sighing on his part doesn't make me feel a lick of sympathy for his ass.  He has a supposed committment to his wife, that chick doesn't. yeah, she's a ho, but nobody made his ass sleep with her and now he's so chicken shit that he'll continue because he supposedly has so much to lose. Funny how cheaters only think about what they have to lose after the fact. gah.

I can tell I'm going to enjoy this immensely, even though I want to knock the hell out of Brian. Poor Vicky.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2012

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Leaving well enough alone should've been a saying Darren Hayes lived by. Unfortunately for him, her leaving him was never an option.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Me Iím Crazy
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12451
Read Count: 16973
Published: April 26 2012
Updated: June 02 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Yep, Fallon is crazy as a sh*thouse rat. Darren is oblivious and Janice might be in a world of danger if Darren ever leaves Fallon.

This is deliciously disturbing and I love it. :)



Author's Response:

lol! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 27 2012

Title: Chapter 7: No Turning Back...

Darren brought this craziness on himself. I just hope Janice doesn't have to suffer because of his stupidity. What an idiot. Next time, pay attention to those little hints that something might be off.

Perfect story for the challenge, 'cause sista girrl is coo coo



Author's Response:

beyond coo coo. thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 16 2012

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Summary:

All Kenneth Squire wanted to do was save his sister from her over-zealous boss, James Norden. So asking Secret Agent Nick Viking to be Morgan's boyfriend was the most logical step.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 20104
Read Count: 35463
Published: May 05 2012
Updated: December 09 2017


Title: Chapter 3: {Mother knew best}

I want to marry this story.

You had me rolling with the snappy dialog. Brillant.

Nick is a tasty badass.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2012

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Shonti Brown, Chicago socialite and events/party blogger, is stuck in Hohenwald, TN due to her late grandfather’s, a man she barely knew, unusual stipulation of her having to stay two weeks on her newly inherited farm if she wanted to keep the farm in the family or the other partner, Richard Vaughn, would get full ownership of the farm.  Shonti goes through an emotional roller coaster as she tries to cope with living in the shadow of her late grandfather and falling in love, reluctantly, with Richard.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 39734
Read Count: 66963
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: June 25 2018


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is bound to happen again no matter how much regret. The interesting thing will be how long they're be able to resist.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 03 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

yep, it'll happen again. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 08 2012

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make it nasty

 

Emery Johnson has been crushing on her older brothers best friend for years, too bad in his eyes, she will only ever be recognized as 'Darrell's sister'. Ready to change that, Emery enlists the help of a single book to snare her dream man, but along the way someone else steps into the picture, shaking up the feelings that Emery thought were tightly secured and forever stable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 116446
Read Count: 83858
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Emery is playing with fire, but I'm really interested in this story. The more the merrier.

Emery has a crush on Logan and it goes back to way before he got fine. The flashback about the paper heart might provide a clue as to how Logan feels about her.  I think the only reason he doesn't pursue her is because of his relationship with Darrell. She might not be in love with him, but he is her first crush and she sees him every day and that has not died down. Maybe, she does need a distraction as he seems to be the only guy she's ever thought about.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 10 2012

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