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Summary:

Struggling med student Aspen Hale makes an extreme decision that will send her into the underground world of elite escorting. She convinces herself that this wll be a one time thing, but what happens when a dangerous Wolfe makes her an offer she can't refuse?

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4893
Read Count: 7210
Published: July 30 2013
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Derek, yum...



Author's Response:

haha my thoughts exactly! 

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Date: July 31 2013

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



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Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
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Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
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Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Perfect Stranger

HA!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Diva

Aurora is the BOSS. This gave me LIFE. So Ethan, you're going to hook up with a chick who can't be bothered with your child when you have your child over, especially if you marry this chick. Smart, Bro, real Smart.

This was worth the wait, Chica.



Author's Response:

Yes, Aurora is the Boss. She had to be shady boots towards Ethan. 

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Date: September 20 2016

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Simone Alexander was not adventurous by nature but she was a go-getter. When an unbelievable opportunity comes her way, she does not hesitate to seize it. Now, she finds herself half way around the world immersed in a culture completely different from her own. Here she faces challenges that push her grow in every aspect of her life; the most unexpected of them all......love.

 



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Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
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Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
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Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 38379
Read Count: 34598
Published: November 11 2013
Updated: June 28 2017


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Well now Ryu, enraged is something for you to wonder about. Why such a reaction? hmmm

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Date: December 13 2015

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - I Will But I Won't

Nat?”

I lifted listless eyes to his.

“Is everything alright?”

No, you officious fucker. How in the hell could he think that this was remotely a good idea. He might think this was romantic, but alls I see is someone that is tone deaf to what's going on around him and seems to only be concerned with what he wants. gah. It took me a minute to be pissed, but now, I want to take his balls and put it in a wood chipper.

And as for that dumbass, lying, should be paying attention to her own dam life, sister of hers, that wood chipper is ready and fired waiting for her stupid ass.

And why in the f*ck did he take Medusa's word for how Nat was feeling? Cause he wanted to. Medusa is not the only one full of shit. Jamison is right there in the pile with her.  And him wanting her to wear the engagement ring is LYING and he's OK with that. And all that bullshit about it being "a symbol of our commitment to not give up on us" is just that. I don't believe that is the purpose of an engagement ring, but then things could've changed since I went to bed. Hell, if you want to be committed, do a blood oath. No one will start wanting to throw parties for your ass in that situation. Oh yeah, this is going to work out real good for them.

*takes deep breath*

But at least she told him, so there's some progress.

If what she wants is to be in love with him, I hope she gets what she want. I just hope she's sure when it does happen.

Hope Anthony can move on with his life and find the right one for him as well. I just don't see those two getting together. But, who knows.

Good Update, Chica.



Author's Response:

LOL @ the officious fucker, the wood chipper, and this entire review.  

And you're right, Jamison hears what he wants to hear.  The ring is more about what his family will think and how hurt he'll be if she takes if off.  The "symbol of our commitment" bit was probably an attempt at lessening the severity of the lie.  It was a fail, but he tried.

Nat is making progress.  It's slow going, but she'll get there.  Whether she gets what she wants and exactly what that is remains to be seen. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, BellaChica!

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Date: January 14 2015

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Please don't let her keep this from him.



Author's Response:

I wish I could.  : /  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: March 01 2015

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

I was screaming. WHO GIVES A FUCK ABOUT MERCEDES! NAT IS MISSING. FUCK THESE FOLKS. GET TO NAT AND QUICK. RICHARD NEEDS HIS ASS BEAT. I WANT RICH TO FIND OUT WHAT HIS SPERM DONOR DID TO NAT. HE'LL BEAT THAT ASS FOR SURE.

Yeah, this was the worst way for Ant to find out about his "father" and for Rich to be the one to swing the knife is heartbreaking. Oh Rich, you lost it didn't you. But you seemed to be more concerned about Nat than Ant did. I was like WTF?   But after all, Rich considers her to be his sister now and it seems he will protect her to the death. I hope at some point Ant will be able to forgive Rich.

That frickin' "family" is VILE. I mean there are no redeeming traits that I can see in any of those vipers. Gah.

Brilliant update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks BellaChica! So glad you enjoyed it.

Yeah, Ant allowed his anger toward Richard and his soft spot for his mother to distract him (don't have to worry about the latter happening again).  Mercede is a mess, but she is his mother and the only parent to show him love. 

Rich seemed more concerned about Nat because, at the moment, she was his only concern.  Then Mercede popped off at the mouth and, well you know how it all went down.  Both brothers let their despicable family and their emotions get the better of them because both have a lot of issues surrounding family and feelings of betrayal.  It will take some time, but Ant will find a way to let Rich back in, at least part of the way. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks BellaChica! So glad you enjoyed it.

Yeah, Ant allowed his anger toward Richard and his soft spot for his mother to distract him (don't have to worry about the latter happening again).  Mercede is a mess, but she is his mother and the only parent to show him love. 

Rich seemed more concerned about Nat because, at the moment, she was his only concern.  Then Mercede popped off at the mouth and, well you know how it all went down.  Both brothers let their despicable family and their emotions get the better of them because both have a lot of issues surrounding family and feelings of betrayal.  It will take some time, but Ant will find a way to let Rich back in, at least part of the way. 

 

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Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Richard, Sr is a sack of shit and will always be a sack of shit. He still wants to protray himself as the f'in victim. That fucker has some big ass balls. GAH

I must admit that when I saw him at Rich's, I felt betrayed. Like WTF, Rich, why do you have that SOS in your apartment? Yeah, if Ant can't forgive Rich, I can see why. But they need to talk. Of all the Talericos, Rich and Ant need to get to a place where they can be brothers again. Rich loves Ant and no matter what Ant feels right now, Ant loves Rich.

As for that viper "family" of his, I wouldn't trust any of the fuckers as far as I can throw them. They're the ones who let the SOS throw Nat around like she was some f'in rag doll.

What the SOS and the ho did to Ant was child abuse. YEARS of it. They really don't need to be in his life. Sure, eventually, he'll need to forgive, for himself, but that doesn't mean that he'll EVAH need to associate with these fuckers again. As for Mercede, just because she birthed him, doesn't mean a damn thing. Animals give birth, and they treat their young better than she ever treated Ant, no matter how much snot she produces. f*ck her.

When Nat made that slip, I was screaming, SOMEONE'S GOING TO JAIL, TO-DAY! But alas, Rich didn't tumble to what Nat was about to say. 'cause, it would've been nothing left but for CSI to inspect the crime scene, scrape up that SOS and cart poor Rich off to the hoosegow.

The brief interlude where Nat allowed herself to hope was touching. When the baby (or babies) start to move more, she will start to enjoy. She'll love having a boy and a girl. I claim it and know that it is true. hee

Wonderful update Chica. Hope to see the talk that Rich and Ant need so desperately.

 

 



Author's Response:

Rich not turning his father away was sort of understandable (at least in my mind) in light of the fact that Richard is foul but still his father.  And it doesn't help that Rich is suffering in Anthony's absence.  It was a definite mistake on Rich's part, but not a fatal one.  You're right, Rich and Ant love each other and will eventually find a way to work it out.

Quite a few of the Talericos aren't worth the skin they're printed on--namely the ones who watched Richard attack Nat then took their turn doing the same.  But not all of them are bad.  There were those who stood by Anthony that night and continue to.  Whether he'll accept their support remains to be seen.

LOL @ the fourth, fifth. and sixth paragraph.  Priceless.

Thanks for this exceedingly entertaining review, BellaChica!!!

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11 2015

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

Vile, just vile... Richard and Mercedes... inhuman is what they are. Especially, Mercedes. But at least she told Ant about his father. How I wish he could meet him.



Author's Response:

That would be wonderful for Anthony, however unlikely it is.  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: April 04 2015

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

YASSSSSSSSSSSS! alls you have to do is claim it.



Author's Response:

Lol.  Amen.  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Lamb of Sacrifice

Yep, this ended so well for both of them. Hell, Ray, Stevie and Helen could see this shitstorm coming a mile away, yet Jamison was stunned? I'm hard hearted, 'cause I can't dredge up one iota of sympathy for him. He might want to continue to see a therapist, 'cause he's got some real shit to work through. Like, oh I don't know, wanting to live in a Magic Kingdom instead of the real world. The question is, will he talk himself into believing that Nat just had a bad day and she didn't mean it?

At least Nat finally was able to say what needed to be said. She also needs to continue to see a therapist. And if Jamison has a key to her place, either get it back or have that shit re-keyed.

Rich is a jackass, but I like that jackass. At least he says what he thinks.

As for Medusa, where is a sword when you need one? And once beheaded, would buring it keep it from turning folks to stone or would you have to burn that b? I so hope that she comes to understand that what she did was evil. Yeah, they may be sisters, but sometimes you have to love from afar.  And Nat and Medusa shouldn't even be on the same continent. Gah, I think I'd have to drag that ass just once.

I like Rita. I think her motives are more about getting Anthony and Nat together than apart. She knows her son and I think she knows that he really loved Nat. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. *lalala...*

Now, let's see how Nat progresses. She's made a good start.

Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Well done, Chica.



Author's Response:

Lol.  Not the Magic Kingdom.  Jamison has a real aversion to emotional pain, so chances are he won't be approaching the epicenter of it right now.  Then again...

I like Rich, too.  He's got his own special set of issues and definitely isn't immune to engaging in some foolishness, but he loves his brother and is unabashedly himself.

Nat would be more than happy if Medusa kept her distance, but we all know she won't.  She'll be back and as welcome as a bad case of hemorrhoids.

Since you're "lalala"-ing on the role Rita's trying to play in Nat and Ant's relationship, I'll save my breath and neither agree nor disagree.

More on how Nat copes and recovers coming up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, BellaChica!

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Date: January 17 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - In His Shoes

Ant is so tore up. And poor Rich, I couldn't help but laugh at “If getting fucked is earning your keep, then I guess she has me on that one.

But damn if Ant didn't almost kill Rich. Rich may be an ass, but he was speaking the truth in his own "tactless" way. I think he came at Ant that way to shock him into admitting that he's just merely existing and hasn't dealt with the whole thing with Nat.

In regards to Sabrina, Ant, two words... Molly Maid... they'll keep your house clean and you won't have to pretend that you care about them. Think about it, bro.

As always, good update, Chica.



Author's Response:

I have to agree with you on the reasons for Rich's less than sensitive approach.  Some people you can't just sit down and have a "come to Jesus" type conversation.  However harsh it was, Rich's approach made Anthony acknowledge the fact that he really hadn't dealt with his feelings as well as he thougth he had. 

Lol @ the Molly Maids.  If cleaning was all he wanted, I think a maid would suffice.  But that damn Sabrina was smart enough to diversify her offerings.  Question is, will that be enough to keep him?

Thanks for reading and reviewing, BellaChica!

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Date: January 21 2015

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - "No Thanks" Giving

You warned us.

This is a clusterf*ck. I am so done with Anthony right now. He's complaining about his life and circumstance when it is he who has put himself in this position. He's lost his balls if he ever had any. Stringing that chick along. Will he be so passive as to actually "fall" into marriage with her? He deserves every frickin' bit of heartache if he does.I can't dredge up one iota of sympathy for the maroon.

Nat really needs to be shed of all things Talerico. Father and son are both fuckers. I mean, really. I am so pissed with the son right now. And I can't believe anything that comes out of Fucker, Sr. mouth. At least Nat isn't buying what he's trying to sell. Good onya, Nat. I'm pushing for you, girl. Get on with your life. Grieve for your baby, grieve for the lost of Anthony and then get on with your life. Become a whole person before you give your trust to another. Because the two that you gave some of your trust to, did not deserve it.

Really good update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Lol.  You're ready to unleash the Kracken on poor Ant.  He has f*cked up royally and seems content to wallow in it, but there's always hope--as long as he doesn't put a ring on Sabrina's finger or a baby in her belly.  Question is, will he?

Nat is doing her best to move forward, but you know Richard is going to fight her every step of the way.  He's determined to get her back, by any means necessary. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, BellaChica!

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Date: January 31 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - While the Cat's Away...

"With Rich, information was like his dick: he couldn’t wait to share it."

I almost choked when I read this.

You really want me to murder Anthony, right? He can not, I repeat, can not come at Nat unless he separate his dick from that placeholder. What good does him sniffing around Nat do, but cause her more pain. He's really spiraling.

Now what in the hell does Rich want? For some reason I get a brother/sister vibe between him and Nat. So, I hope all he needs is a shoulder to cry on. He doesn't seem to be handling his divorce well.  I know Nat is like Brooke from Bold and the Beautiful, but Rich ain't Thorne, so no mattress mambo for them.

I can not wait for the next update. It should be a hoot. And if Ant finds out that Rich went to see Nat, there's no one on this earth that will prevent him from choking him out. And I like Rich, so I don't want to see him hurt anymore. Hell, he prolly can barely speak after the last choking.  hee



Author's Response:

You might wanna go ahead and murder Anthony, because when he finds out about Rich creeping over to Nat's...

LMAO @ Brooke and Thorne!  I'm too through.  Nat and Rich would make a dynamic brother/sister duo, but Rich may very well have something else in mind on this particular visit.  Stay tuned...

Thanks for reading and reviewing, BellaChica!!!

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Date: February 02 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Impatience is a Virtue

I love Rich, I do, but he need that ass beat. He is one funny sly mofo. That's what I call brotherly love. I can not believe he did all of that for Ant.

So, I forgive both Nat and Ant. Let's see what Fucker, Sr says about this. I'm afraid to get too happy about these turn of events. However, with Rich on the case, things might just work out. Can you imagine them having a little Rich? That would be hilar.

I hope there is love in Rich's future. He does sound like he's one drink away from a heart attack. He needs someone. *raises hand enthusiastically. pick me, pick me!*

You had some really golden nuggets in this chapter. I died.



Author's Response:

Rich is generally a reprobate, but there's nothing he wouldn't do for his baby brother.  And seeing Ant and Nat raise a miniature version of him would most definitely be gut-busting.

Lol @ you volunteering to take on the challenge that is Rich.  Right now, he's far too in love with the bottle and fornicating with random women to settle down, but you never know when that might change.

You can breath easy for a minute.  The next chapter is relatively angst-free.  But don't get too comfortable with the calm.  ; )  It never lasts.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, BellaChica!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07 2015

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

I was all for her telling Ant. But with this chapter, I'm conflicted.  I think Rich may be right. And while he and Ant are not blood, as far as he's concerned, they are. I think Ant will be more upset with the news that Rich, Nat and Thomas knew and didn't tell him. What a quandary.



Author's Response:

Yes it is.  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: March 02 2015

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Friends and Foes

The ending was sad. But damn, the rest.

That funeral is going to be interesting.

Rich is a mess and a ho. I like him and Takara and he must be real good to get at her on first meet. Damn. I'm have to marinate on the fineness that is Rich. I love the relationship between him and Ant. It's hilar but so touching to see the love between those two.

I'm also loving how Nat and Ant are progressing. I hope they can withstand what's about to jump off, 'cause you know that family of his is gone act natural fools when they go home for the funeral.

There are no words for Barabra. Oh yeah there is, restraining order. She is truly vile. I mean, really vile. How has Nat put up with this for all these years. Sister, my ass, I would stay away if not for my mental health. Sometimes, family is not something you want in your life and Barbara is a diseased individual. Someone needs to disappear her.



Author's Response:

Lol!  Yeah, Barb really does need to go bye-bye.  Nat has no intention of allowing her back into her life, but you know Barb is going to try her best to weasal her way back in. 

Rich and Takara are a challenge I'm tempted to answer.  I'll have to see how my other projects are looking when this story is done.

Nat and Ant and Rich are all building stronger connections, but they are sure to be tested once the truth comes out about her marriage to Richard and Richard's paternity. Stay tuned...

Thanks for reading and reviewing, BellaChica!

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Date: March 04 2015

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Burying the Dead

Seriously? Seriously? Hoes never learn.

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Date: March 16 2015

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

what a fucker.

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Date: March 16 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

What an ending. Wow! Best Epilogue I've EVAH read! Simply, Brilliant!

As I was reading and Abraham was talking, I was, wait a sec, he never said that David was dead. And he continued, and I stopped breathing. And then when he kept saying we, I was like, could it BE?!? And then when he looked over Ant's shoulders, I was like, DAMN! It's DAVID! And the reunion was soooo worth the wait. It was kinda sad, I realized that Ant had never had a man claim him as his son in any meaningful way. Crushes the soul or would have a lesser man. It says a lot about Ant that he perserved in the face of being raised by that viper and being subjected to the emotional abuse heaped upon him by that viper's husband.

Speaking of the viper, she's worst than I thought. Just when you think it couldn't get any worse, you learn more of the truly evil things she's done. Who does that? Did she really love Ant? I can only see him being a possession, one that she didn't want his real father to have. And Asshole, Sr only wanted to use Ant as a surrogate for his rage against the viper's infidelity.

Barb, no words. That lizard will never change and now she's been banned. Hopefully, for life. She's probably somewhere spreading her venom polluting someone else's world. Someone needs to beat that azz.

Rich, see he can change. I just love how much he loves his brother. Just because he's not his bio-brother means nothing when it comes to having love for someone that you grew up as siblings and always having each other's back. Unc has two little ones to corrupt. It's going to be a hoot. So, interesting that Rich seems to be enamored with someone of the female persuasion. At least we know that Nat knows her. Wonder if it's her BFF? I can't wait for his story.

This story has been a rollercoaster. I can so remember in the beginning being stabby with how Nat was acting. Then Ant pissed me off. Then they both started slowly acting like adults and all was forgiven. I think I grew along with them. A story in the hands of a lesser writer could've been a nightmare. JJ, in your hands, it was a tale well crafted that brought the reader right along with the characters and made for a really enjoyable story. A job well done, Chica.



Author's Response:

To be honest, I think Mercede may love Anthony, but not as selflessly as a mother should.  Her and Richard's happiness is and has always been more important than Anthony's.  Thankfully, Anthony had Pop-Pop and an innate sense of integrity that survived Richard's and Mercede's foolishness.

Lol.  Yeah, Bitter Bear Barb is ruined for life.  Poor Kline.

Unc does have a serious crush, and it is for someone Nat knows.  But like Nat, I'm not at liberty to say whether or not it's Takara.  (I'm awful. I know).  I will say that Takara will play a part in Rich's story.  A big one.

I'm so glad you were willing to bear with Anthony and Natalia through their growing pains, and that you stuck with the story.  Thanks so much for sharing your insight and for this amazing review, BellaChica!  

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Date: May 03 2015

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Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11210
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Damn, Hudson. Just, Damn. and YUM.

Travis is Porter's, I take it. But where does Hudson fit in?

Porter and Jess just seem so COLD. Has he really thought this through?



Author's Response:

Hudson has a huge role and what happened with Porter and Avery. It's all going to come out soon ^.^

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Date: April 08 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I'm liking the flashbacks. In fact, I'm liking the whole thing. Love how you're giving such depth to the characters and the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was really hoping they'd beef up the history and help support the main thread. I've been having fun with them and can't wait to do a few more ^.^

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Date: April 11 2016

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Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40859
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Wonder what his daughter and his Dad are up to.

I read this so fast the first time because I was scared he wouldn't get there in this chapter. But he did and they connected. This Chapter was wonderful. You did a really good job, Chica.

So sorry about your loved one. I pray you that you have support needed to weather this hurt in your life.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and the prayer...my family and I are getting through this one day at a time. I realized after some time had passed I needed a place to channel these emotions and writing had always provided me that.

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Date: April 03 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I have missed this so much. And yeah, I fear I know who Oliver is after. Why else would he want to destroy Everett.

Lukas should be up front with Elise and stop this push pull. She is more vulnerable than he thinks. My girl is in love for the very first time and doesn't know what to do with herself. I wish she would talk to Devyn or her mother. Or I wonder will Dad be the one. He's noticed something and is on the hunt now. I can not wait to see when Lukas' mom sees the two together. She will know. Definitely.

A well written update, Chica. One that I have been jonesing for. Please don't be a stranger. :)

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Date: September 13 2015

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I'm so glad she confided in Kori. She needed someone. Kori really gave it to Lukas.

I have really missed this and am so glad of the update. Worth the wait, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2015

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