Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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Member Since: December 26 2009

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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Just another day in the GLEE Rehearsal Room or is it?



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Mercedes Jones
Classification: Drabbles , General, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 16668
Read Count: 12619
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: January 28 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I never liked Finn on the show, but I'm loving this Finn. A LOT

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 21 2012

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Summary:

 

Esther Hendrickson has loved teaching young children, mainly because she cannot have children of her own. What was once society's trophy wife, her abusive past has led her deep into dementia, but the love of hardened FBI agent A.J. Thomas may be just what she needs to heal her torn heart.

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 46765
Read Count: 72983
Published: June 14 2012
Updated: January 03 2015


Title: Chapter 6: C is for Compromise

Your wirting is so real. You're making me feel what Esther is experiencing. You make me want her to become whole. Those parents of hers are completely toxic, no wonder the poor woman's internal dialogue is so soul destroying. She needs A. J. and badly.

Keep up the good work, Chica.

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Date: July 02 2012

Title: Chapter 7: D is for Determination

A.J., DAMN! He had my mouth on the floor. He is all MAN. And Esther has already gone there in her mind. I don't think she'll be able to resist him. Glad he's come into her life.

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Date: July 03 2012

Title: Chapter 8: E is for Eager

That was one helluva filler chapter as you call it.  A. J. is quite blunt, but I think Esther needs that. She really does live too much in her head. It is quite clear that she has never experience any passion. But she's about to get it with A. J. and in spades.

This

"...made him want to drop to his knees right in this alley and give her a licking she’d never forget"

and this

"...but I will certainly turn you over my knee and spank your hot little ass red."

had me rolling. You really know how to turn a phrase.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 05 2012

Title: Chapter 9: F is for Family

Esther is broken because of the woman that birthed her. gah, what a bitch who never should've had one child. She's f'd them all up. Some more than others.

I'd like to see what you can do with Avery next. She seems the one most under her bio-unit's control. Esther and Rosario both left, even though Mommie Dearest is causing havoc in their lives, at least they've gone. Avery is probably seething with unexpressed anger. And that so-called "man" she married screams all kind of drama.

I'm loving A. J. I didn't realize that Esther was still married. A. J. will not like that.

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Date: July 08 2012

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Widowed Army Nurse, Caitlyn “Lyn” Masino life was turned upside the night she witnessed a drug cartel hit in the parking garage at her part-time job.  With a hit being place on her life and the local police department leaking information her and her son were place under Federal protection.  Will she be safe or will her past come to bite her in the butt (literally if her “Protector” has a say in it)?

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126663
Read Count: 68553
Published: June 16 2012
Updated: July 17 2012


Title: Someone to Watch Over Me

"Don’t test me old man

That's my girl. I love this.

Lyn "you must not know 'bout me" Cabini is STONED COLD. A woman after my own heart.

"...she just…just shot them like they were dogs in the street"  Sorry to say, but that's what they were.

DAMN!

be afraid, be very afraid, y'all. Pops should be shaking in his boots.

Anxiously waiting for the next update. Nothing but, luv , Chica, nothing but luv.



Author's Response:

Thank you (blushing) for the review and comment.  No she does not play. She will protect those she love and those she care about to any extreme measures.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20 2012

Title: Someone to Watch Over Me

If Cullen hasn't already, he has just made a baby. :)

Carlos is a mess. He's got a ways to go to get Mhel. Girlfriend is putting up a fight.

I'm enjoying the hell outta this story. You're doing a fine job, Chica.



Author's Response:

Lol...he was and is definitely trying.  I also think he likes 'practicing making babies'.  Carlos is the ultimate Italian Stallion but she is not trying to ride that horse.  Thanks for the comments and reviews. 

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Date: July 02 2012

Title: Someone to Watch Over Me

What is wrong with those tricks that want Cullen? They seem to be all suffering from StupidBitchitis.

btw, that red dress on Lyn is FIERCE!!!



Author's Response:

as god-daughter would say: 'they stuck on stupid'.  I know I want that dress for myself...I looking for the actually designer so I can have Korean copy made.

 

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Date: July 08 2012

Title: Someone to Watch Over Me

YOU…did NOT…just yell at me…while I’m being ripped open”, she sobbed and yelled, “I’m tired and I want a nap…you did this to me- you try pushing your big headed baby out of that cock of yours.

This had me howling.

and this...

"Screaming his name, Cullen put the panties in her mouth shhhing her,"



Author's Response:

I thought our bad ass woman had show a little weakness and this was seemed the best time.  

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Date: July 14 2012

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Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 38618
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016


Title: Chapter 11: Ten~ A wanted woman

"Get your ass out of this house before I drop you again."

This made me cackle. Richard is not the one.

Carmen is all kinds of crazy. Dang.

It's everybody's fault but her own. She needs to never see the light of day again.

Whew, Richard was out of control. Nic, you need some rest, girl. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

cue the loony tunes music. I can't see how this crazy heifer was even able to function with all that crap going on in her head. She belongs on the ID channel. If she ever gets out...

This was really good.

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Date: March 01 2016

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Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 78463
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

oh my. Stephan is going to bust a gut when Cara delivers the news. This is going to be really good. Brenda, I just love your stories. You have a way of engaging the reader and writing something that makes sense. Love it, just love it. Cara's real fertile, isn't she?

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Date: August 08 2012

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Summary:

Playboy and U.S. gold metal swimmer, Ryan Lochte had everything he wanted until he saw the one woman he couldn’t live without in teammate and arch rival Michael Phelps’ arms.  Friday Jones was not his type but he wasn’t going to leave London without making her his girl Friday.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1771
Read Count: 718
Published: August 10 2012
Updated: August 10 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was hoping someone would write a story about Ryan. Especially after his mother's interview. Game On!!!

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Date: August 11 2012

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Summary:

This story is the sequel of Illusions: The End.

Emma is on the brink of depression and she has lost herself. George finds it incredibly hard to cope with the guilt he feels for causing her to lose her psychological equilibrium. Will they be able to get back together, or will Taylor be the best person to pick Emma up and make her feel herself again?

© Adi Milano, 2012.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Illusions
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 19016
Read Count: 18815
Published: October 13 2012
Updated: December 26 2012


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: George

George seems to be going thru the motions. Emma is absolutely correct. George needs to back up his words with actions that shows he's growing and changing. He seems to want a quick fix and there isn't one.



Author's Response:

He always wants the quick fix because it is easy. For once, he'll understand that he has to be patient in life. :D

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Date: December 21 2012

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 48785
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Chapter 3: Betrayal

See, I think that when your significant other brings another to your bed and have sexy times, on some level, they WANT to get caught. This was a big FU to Xavier. Xavier doesn't need either one of these people in his life.

I'm all in. Nice update. Looking forward to the next chapter(s).

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Date: July 18 2019

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Summary:

Terri Lawson, a middle-aged modeling agent had one job to do: find someone totally different then what the agency usually picks. When she runs into a young man way out of anything she'd ever consider...both of their lives change for the better.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back, On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Cougars
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 43892
Read Count: 36107
Published: January 04 2013
Updated: February 04 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Stay

I  really like Daniel. He may be young in  years but he's definitely more mature than Terri when it comes to being in touch with who he is. Love their "relationship". So glad he took her to see her folks. I still don't understand why she shut them out of her life. But, they're back and that's all that counts.

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Date: July 22 2013

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She was his best kept secret, his most treasured possession, an exotic African-American beauty that won his heart from the very beginning. But keeping what he did for a living a secret from her and trying to keep her a secret from his enemies was proving to be the hardest job he'd ever had as an assassin. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 63805
Read Count: 103157
Published: April 02 2013
Updated: June 12 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Town

love this story. thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

You are welcome!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 01 2013

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Summary:

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Could she not comprehend that he had a reckoning to deliver?

The Fire Rises



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 39404
Read Count: 33830
Published: April 09 2013
Updated: August 26 2016


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

My Next button doesn't seem to be working. :)

 

Thanks so much for the update.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2015

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Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16507
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 I Wonder If I Take You Home...

Time for that baby. This was so romantic. Lovely.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2013

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Summary:

 

Hydrangeas

Although she has "best intentions" for her daughter, a mother's obsession with social status threatens to tear her family apart.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: How Does Her Garden Grow?
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3235
Read Count: 5081
Published: May 05 2013
Updated: May 05 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Hydrangeas

what a very shallow woman. Her daughters are lucky to escape her.

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Date: May 05 2013

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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 222412
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Really nice. Great update.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Very well done, Chica. You are truly gifted.

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Date: October 12 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

DAMN! Henry! Wow!

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Date: July 22 2013

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Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 52898
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Learning and Coping

oh man. DAMN. I want Bennie to take that bastid down.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2013

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Summary:

He met her one night at a party, the moment he saw her it was instant attraction and lust at first sight, but she disappeared on him, leaving him in a state of frustration and anger. Adam Norse was a man who always got what he want and he was determined to tear the city looking for the beautiful African-American siren that had escaped him.      

A cute romantic comedy. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 33550
Read Count: 54954
Published: July 04 2013
Updated: January 31 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Cinderella

This is really good.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.