Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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Member Since: December 26 2009

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“If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.”


~Jon Stewart




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Memories Lost by CrimsonBlaze
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 573]
Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103484
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018

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Title: Memories Lost

Allen showed great restraint. I feel so bad for him. Thinking that Zoey is dead.

"As you probably know, I am...was...addicted to drugs,"

Dude, I thought once an addict always an addict. Just in recovery. You'll always be addicted, just able to not succumb to that addiction, if you work the program, EVERY DAY, ALL DAY.

I think Zoey needs to remember her life before she gets involved with Brian. It would be one thing if there was no chance of her remembering, but she's starting to, so I think she needs to get whatever help that will help her put the pieces together. Disjointed memories can give a false picture to who and what she was. And then she mistakenly act based on the blurry picture.

So glad for the update.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01 2015
Title: Chapter 16: Closer

Brian, I'm thisclose to wanting to hit you in the throat. Listen to your boys. You need to figure out what you really want. You're still entangled with that psycho sheBeast and if you can't disentangle yourself, you need to leave Kelly/Zoey alone. You will only hurt her.

and Darren, I don't think that you're ready for Danica just yet.

Thanks for the update. Loving this story.

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Date: December 17 2016
Title: Chapter 17: Trust Your Gut

Good for Kelly/Zoey. Do what's right for you, girl.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: December 28 2016
Title: Chapter 8: Meet the Fiancée

Macy is really dumb. Why would you warn the enemy. Anyway, she's so insecure and hopefully Brian won't be such a slave to the p that he doen't notice that his fiancee is being a b to Kelly.

At some point I expect Kelly to set her straight once Kelly gets more secure in who she is. Right now, Kelly is dealing with some major issues and needs to focus on those. Macy is Brian's problem.

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Date: August 26 2016
Title: Chapter 12: Confessions

Brian, that Macy person CONTINUES to show you who she is and you CONTINUE to be complicit in her antics. gah

There are no words for Henry. He's scum and all of the sniveling in the world will not justify what he did. I so hope that Kelly remembers EVERYTHING.

Great update, Chica. It really ticked me off.

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Date: November 20 2016
Title: Chapter 14: Strange Behavior

Brian, you still slow. btw, no one says you have to marry this woman. You could co-parent that mythical baby of yours.

That Macy is evil enough to stage an accident with Zoey/Kelly as the culprit and conveniently loses that mythical baby. I hope not, but she's just that evil.

I hope Zoey/Kelly does leave that house before more harm befalls her. How can Brian not feel the vibes Macy throws at Zoey/Kelly? She's good at hiding, but dang, Brian is being really obtuse.

Thanks for the update.

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Date: November 30 2016
Title: Chapter 19: Night Out

Oh Darren. I told you, you weren't ready for Danica. too funny.



Author's Response:

Darren has met his match for sure. 

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Date: January 24 2017
Title: Chapter 26: Uninvited Pt. 2

Henry hasn't really changed. He's only thinking about himself. Each day that he gets up and continues to not tell Zoey EXACTLY what happened is another LIE that he's telling. No sugarcoating it for me. He's a LIAR and he CONTINUES to lie. I sure hope that Brian starts to look at what's being said, critically, and starts digging. Zoey is a sitting duck. Brian is clueless and so is Dad and Henry is a f'in' COWARD. I hope that she starts to get more memories back and more importantly, that she can interpret them correctly. That a-hole Henry is letting her think that she's trifling in going to be with a drug dealer. That makes no damn sense and if they buy that then they're dumb as dirt. gah.

Good update, Chica.

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Date: July 12 2017
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Trust - Revision by Caribbean Fire
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 296]
Summary:

Sally McDonald is not who anyone thinks. Her life is filled with secrets. Some she doesn't even know about. But when Storm Monsello sees the terrified girl one night, he never expects how much her secrets would reveal the dark actions of the people he trusted the most.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 43
Completed:No
Word count: 133222
Read Count: 425284
Published: September 21 2014
Updated: April 26 2020

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Title: Chapter 1: Coincidence

CF, so glad to see you back. You might want to consider making this a members only story. Just a thought.

Looking forward to future updates, Chica.

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Date: September 22 2014
Victoria Red by Benny Jude Road
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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Freedom and neutrality was something Victory Red always desired.


However when your born in the middle of a war you can see how that could be difficult.


Luckily Victoria wasn't one to give up.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7803
Read Count: 14856
Published: September 23 2014
Updated: September 14 2015

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Title: Chapter 4: Paradise

On the one hand I feel so bad for the way Vic is being treated. On the other, I'm impressed at how she hasn't let it destroy her. Is her father still out there waiting for an opportunity to get her back. I so want her to be reunited with the man she never knew. Once she is, there will be HELL to pay.

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Date: September 14 2015
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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215320
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 30

It's a crime that one so young is losing his childhood at the hands of the very folks that are supposed to love and protect him from the outside world. All the hell is right there in their house.

I so hope that Stevie is taken away from these people. I hope that somehow, Hiriam is able to get custody of him. But in a town where the Klan seems to rule, it doesn't look promising.

Savvy is a minx. She luvs her Daddy.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14 2015
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 29

Savvy is a cutie pie.

And now the truth is out. But watch that family of his not believe their lying eyes.

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Date: January 11 2015
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Adaline:The Silent by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40808
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

How do you sign, KISS MY ASS? 'Cause that is exactly what Addy needs to tell Dom.

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Date: July 03 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Yes, Dom. I have come to realize that Dom is the one that needs confidence and some backbone. Amazing. He's fine and all, but evidently, fine folks have issues too, who knew.

Dom is over thinking this. He doesn't want to hurt Addy by making her the rebound girl, but he's hurting her right now, but in the long run, it's better that he gets his act together and if it's too late, so be it.

At least Addy knows that he feels the same for her. He's more scared than she is. So, if she moves on, good for her. I just hope she doesn't use Murph as the rebound.

She does need to be away from Dom. Let's see how he handles that. I just don't think he can be away from her for long, since he's gotten a taste. Oh Dom, youse a bit of an idjit.

Loving this.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

So very glad this story is back. Addy should make a point to stay clear of Carla. She really doesn't have to interact with the witch. And if push comes to shove, a restraining order might be in the works. If Carla has time to torment Addy, then there's something seriously wrong with her and her life.

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Date: November 15 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh yeah, there can definitely be friendship between those two. I think Addy has romanticized Dom way too much. They need to deal in reality. Dom is still trying to get his head straight after Dina. He could've easily taken advantage of Addy, but he didn't. I'm looking forward to them being friends first and then finding that, yes, let's get horizontal. :)

As for that Carla chick, she's mental. Addy would do well to stay as far away from her as possible. And oh Carla, did you forget that yo ass is MARRIED? What is wrong with this chick? Addy needs to handle her ass.

Looking forward to future updates.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21 2015
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Choosey Lover by CaramelGal
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69608
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

DAMN. Elle just ain't right. Leaving the man in such a state.

Randall is a pig. No offense to pigs.



Author's Response:

She did leave poor Dean a little stiff, huh? But he’s a big boy, he can handle it---or at least I hope so. And I agree, Randall’s definitely swine. Thanks for reviewing Bella Chica.

CG

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14 2015
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I'm liking this Dean. It's like he said, f' it, I'm going for what I want. That's more of who he is I think. Elle, on the other hand is...Elle. So, I have no expectations for her. I will just see where it goes.



Author's Response:

I think your Dean analysis is spot on. Elle is as you say…just Elle lol. I’m glad you’re still along for the ride and thanks for reviewing BellaChica.

CG

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2015
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Well  now, Elle really surprised me. Amazing that a boozy Elle is more honest with her feelings. Now, let's see how she acts when she's not liquored up.

In regards to Randall, Elle is a grown ass woman, she should be able to freeze that fucker out. And if he tries ANYTHING, she should first pepper spray that ass and then take his balls as souvenir.

Good update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Boozy Elle definitely came through this chapter. Your guess about non-liquored up Elle’s actions are about as good as mine. You’re not the first to prescribe mace or Mortal Kombat “finish him” style tactics, but let’s see how this goes. Thanks for reviewing Chica!

CG

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2015
Camp Outlook by Briella
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16599
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016

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Title: Chapter 8: You & Me?

Well now. That was about the best update.  She's getting a sense of what she wants and how to ask for it.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU! It was inspired by a fever dream lol. Joss is going to learn a lot this summer.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14 2015
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Dig by Madds
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 138]
Summary:

Dig

 

Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold.

Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves?

When her good friend Adam Nuro invites her to tour with his number one band to play with his band while featuring some of her songs, she hops at the chance.

But the opportunity presents more challenges than she was ready for, obstacles that threaten to break her.

Will Avery make her dreams come true? Will her adoptive band support her?

And what has been following them since day one?

 

Shout Out to Elizablu for the Banner



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23829
Read Count: 18128
Published: November 30 2014
Updated: February 14 2016

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Title: Chapter 6: Only in Dreams

a mystery. why is Adam not allowed to be with Avery? Interesting. And yeah, CJ, yeah. All or nothing, Adam. All or nothing.

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Date: January 12 2015
Daniel Latebloom by lovelydreamer
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Daniel has always been late for everything in his life. He's been late for puberty, dating girls, and even the "monkey in the bush". When he discovers his new neighbor next door is a woman, a very pretty woman, will he take a chance and ask her out? Or will his former bully, Nick Young, beat him to it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 7978
Read Count: 10464
Published: January 23 2015
Updated: May 12 2015

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jun "Luther" Lee... smdh a mess.

Oh Daniel. That barbershop had me rolling.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Quick question can you see the cast? 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25 2015
Title: Chapter 3: cast

This is so funny.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LD, In answer to your question, I can see all of the cast except for Daniel.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I put up a not in the cast chapter about that. I don't know why his pic is not showing. 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
Date: January 25 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That went well. Yeah, Daniel, you the man.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.