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“If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.”


~Jon Stewart




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Ravenous by Jinrey9023
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Years of craving can only end in satisfaction. Kory Lane and Kai Wu will soon learn that not all cravings can be appeased.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 16033
Read Count: 5579
Published: February 04 2015
Updated: July 10 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

*clears throat*... um... it's 117 in PHX, and it just got a whole helluva lot hotter. SPEECHLESS!



Author's Response:

Lmao! Thank you very much! I hope I can continue increasing the intensity! 

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Date: August 16 2015
the odds by QuillsandPens
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Ebony 'Bunny' Banks is the type of girl Clark Davis never thought he'd be in love with. With her cloud of hair and perfect imperfections, she wasn't the girl his parents or society taught him to go for. Clark Davis is the type of guy Ebony Banks would never notice with his close tie to the cheering hags and his movie star appearance. They are on two completely opposite sides of the popularity scale. Him being a pretty popular guy and her a wallflower. Yet somehow these two seemed to have found each other and the odds of love seems to be in their favor.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3103
Read Count: 4831
Published: February 16 2015
Updated: February 28 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Him

Indigo_bluee, nope just you, both chapters are the same.

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Date: February 27 2015
Finding Ace by PassionFruit
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary: Natia Palamo was taken from her father, Ezra Palamo, by her uncle, who killed her mother. Now her father works for her uncle, Mika, in exhange for his life as he plots to find Natia. But his search has to come to a stop when Mika's business has been threatened by an unknown masked vigilante that goes by the name of Ace. Mika sends Ezra and his other lackeys, Adam and Ray, to hunt Ace down and bring him to Mika, dead or alive with the help of Alexis. Ace knows the secrets to Mika's business, will he tell Ezra where Mika has Natia? Only time will tell.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 7686
Read Count: 32306
Published: March 12 2015
Updated: May 08 2015

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

I have to remember this is an adventure. Alliances might be formed and broken and re-formed. So, yeah, I can see why Adam is still among the living. Sure, he can't be trusted now, but who knows. Plus, you best believe the rest of the crew don't trust him as far as they can throw his fine ass. He might become quite useful, if the others as as good as they seem to be.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: May 10 2015
Retired
Breathe (revised) by Jaye Sims
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Lynne and Saul had been married for 25 years when he committed the ultimate betrayal. Lynne attempts forgiveness, but memories from her past make it hard to do that.  She loves Saul, but will she ever be able to trust him enough to take him back?  And when a new man enters her life, will she even WANT to?

 

This is a new version of the story I started earlier this month. In a comedy of errors I deleted the original version from my hard drive AND The Chamber.  I was depressed for a minute, but took it as an opportunity to re-work the story.  So here is the new, and hopefully improved, story.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17066
Read Count: 74987
Published: March 19 2015
Updated: April 05 2015

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Title: Chapter 8: The kids are NOT alright

See what you did Saul. And Mal's right, NOW you think about the effect of your actions. YOU FOOL. Cry me a frickin' river, why doncha?

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Date: March 29 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Getting to Know You

See Saul, you brought that crazy ho into Lynne's world. All you could think about was gettin it in. No thought to what disease you could bring to Lynne, no thought of the cesspool you were dipping "little saul" in, no thought to that ho's mental instablilty, 'cause this couldn't be the first time homegirl has channeled "fatal attraction". Whatever happens is on your triflin' ass.

Malcolm really has it for Lynne and she's starting to feel him. Again I say, Saul who?



Author's Response:

Malcolm's crush on Lynne is so CUTE!  I ship MalLynne.  Or should it be LynColm?

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Date: April 01 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Out With the Old, In With the New

Saul, Who?

Bring on Malcolm.



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HA!

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Date: March 31 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Don't Poke the Bear

YASSSSSSSSSSS. Lynne - still waters run deep - with a right hook. YASSSSSSSSSSSS!

You do know that Lynne could shoot yo ass, drag you across the threshold and call 911, having just shot an intruder. Stoopid, stoopid git. Alicia is a twit.

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Date: March 30 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Mama Say

I would give my left eye if Aunt Ernie ran into the trick. Ernie is a mess. But she really gave Mal what he needed. Ernie made me choke talking about the little crumb snatchers.

I really like the relationship between the women and Mal. That's a real family unit. Oh Saul, what have you done, you FOOL. I loved how Lynne became the child who needed the comfort of her mama. Put a smile on my face.



Author's Response:

You might get your wish, Bella.  Musey is telling me that there WILL be a confrontation.  Shoes will be kicked off, earrings will be pulled off, and someone WILL get them paws.

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Date: March 28 2015
Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue

Well now, I see Lynne got her back blown out. ;)

I was wondering about children, since Malcolm didn't have any and sure he would want some with Lynne. What was the age difference? 10 years? Glad she could give him a bambino.

Enjoyed reading this.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yeah, Malcolm worked it like a job and the rent was due. ;-)

I wasn't sure they would have kids at first, but Malcolm told me he wanted to be a dad, and Lynne was like "cool" so baby makes five, lol!  If Halle Berry can have a baby at darned near 50, so can Lynne.

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Date: April 05 2015
Title: Chapter 16: The End is the Beginning

That last bit was EVERYTHING! Especially this:

"she realized that her past was walking away from her as her future walked towards her"

Good update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.

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Date: April 05 2015
Title: Chapter 15: Cause and Effect

Saul "THE dumbest man on the planet" is a FOOL as well. Gah, he wanted to make this about him. Self-centered. I knew Mal was gonna blow his lid when they said it was Saul's trick. Yeah, Saul has a real chance of getting Lynne back. Just look, he brought flowers, yeah that would work, but for the fact that he's also brought that crazy git into Lynne's life.

"He rationalized that if he’d been there, if they’d still been married he could have prevented this."

Nah Son, if you'd kept little Saul in your pants, this would've been prevented, YOU FOOL.

I'm enjoying Lynne and Malcom's friendship. And yeah, if they do progress to something more, I say more power to her. She needs her back blown out. :D



Author's Response:

You made me choke on my coffee, woman!  LMAO.  Yes Lynne is long overdue for a good shagging.  I wonder if Malcolm is up for the task? ;-)



Author's Response:

You made me choke on my coffee, woman!  LMAO.  Yes Lynne is long overdue for a good shagging.  I wonder if Malcolm is up for the task? ;-)



Author's Response:

You made me choke on my coffee, woman!  LMAO.  Yes Lynne is long overdue for a good shagging.  I wonder if Malcolm is up for the task? ;-)



Author's Response:

You made me choke on my coffee, woman!  LMAO.  Yes Lynne is long overdue for a good shagging.  I wonder if Malcolm is up for the task? ;-)

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Date: April 04 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Where Do We Go From Here?

Saul best make sure that bitch is in check. And she may be bad, but there's always someone badder. She don't know Lynne. She best be careful if she tries to step to her. That little mousy school teacher might just dust the floor with her crazy ass. Lynne's a lady, but I suspicion that if pushed, she will kick a mudhole in that ass.

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Date: March 28 2015
Title: Chapter 2: The Call

Saul, please do explain, cause I can't wait to hear the bullshit that pours outta that piehole. I really can't.

You are on fiyah, my dear.



Author's Response:

:::curtsies::: Thank ya, kindly.

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Date: March 20 2015
Title: Chapter 1: His Betrayal

Yeah Saul, it was all HER fault. She just tripped and FELL on your dick, You DICK.  Poor guy, being trapped by the sinister female *heavy sarcasm*

So, no, if Lynne kicks your triflin' ass to the curb, buh-bye.

Sorry you lost your story, but I agree about there being a reason for it. And I'm seeing it in this chapter. I love that you're giving us a front row seat to the idiocy of Saul and the cheatation (more context).

 

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Date: March 20 2015
Title: Chapter 3: Wounded

Love Aunt Ernie. She's got the right idea. Saul hurt his whole family, the idjit. He's got a lot of ass kissing to do for a whole bunch of people. And that strange is irrelvant, she's not even worth the bother. Saul needs to handle that, he brought the trick into Lynn's life, that's on him. Lynn best get tested, these days, cheating is not the worst thing that can happen. Saul is a fool and his tallywacker needs to be cut off. FOOL

Good read, Chica.

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Date: March 27 2015
Title: Chapter 4: The Purge

Singing. The last sentence was EVERYTHING.

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Date: March 28 2015
Title: Chapter 13: The Age of the Cougar?

Lynne, what you've hopefully gotten yourself into is Malcolm!

As for Saul, would feel sorry for him, but since he brought this on himself, I just can't find that sympathy chip. hee

On to the next chapter.

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Date: April 03 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Blood and Tears

So, what you wanna bet that Herpes chick of Saul's had something to do with this. There goes any sympathy I might've dug up for the cheater. Saul, this is all on you.

And that trick is so delusional, she might just let Saul know that she did it for them to be together. Which is stoopid, 'cause FELICIA, Lynne already DIVORCED his ass and if he wanted to be with you, he WOULD. What is your occupation again, you braintrust?

Well now, Malcolm seems to have real feelings for Lynne. I like it. The kids have met him and he's a hero for saving their Mom. Should be interesting what their reactions will be when they realize that Malcolm really likes Lynne.

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Date: April 03 2015
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Can't pick your family by Hatty
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45726
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019

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Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

uh, oh. A bad situation just might get really bad. Please, Shy, please, prove me wrong.

Wow, Matty D gots issues.  Shy was right, he was arguing not about what was really bothering him. And his being pissed with Scott and Shy's "relationship" needs to be examined by him. Is he ever honest with himself? And damn if he didn't go all in with both Shy and Lauren. Not to say that Lauren didn't deserve a bit of that.  What is Matt's occupation again? He can be scary with that mouth of his. He takes no prisoners.

And Matt, maybe if you'd told Shy about your plans BEFORE, that argument might not have happen. Hell, who am I kiddng? Matt was ticked about more than having breakfast with Shy and the kids. And a lot of that came out in a rush. Shy, just listen to what's being said and what's NOT being said.

This is so frickin' good. So good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Perfect analysis!  Matt is an investment bank. 

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Date: August 09 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh my goodness. DEAD, I just died laughing. Shy is NUTS!!!

This is so much fun to read.

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Date: April 11 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Shyla. woo. girl. youse nuts.

Matt had no clue how close he came to getting an elbow to the throat.

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Date: July 11 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A much needed laugh to kick off the weekend. I'm liking how they're starting to be friendly. But I still want the differences to continue, because it's bound to be good for a good laugh. And since it can't be said enough, Shy is a mess. I like her view of life (I can so relate).

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Date: April 17 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Shy might be a little ticky, ticky, boom, but she was on point with her assessment of Matt's family.

btw, if and when they do get together, it seems it will be Explosive. Can.not.wait.

Great update, Chica.

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Date: May 10 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh Matt... you are being willfully ignorant.

Tristan made me laugh so hard. He's just pops up outta nowhere. I can see being a spy in his future.

I love the way you're writing this.

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Date: June 21 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm interested in seeing how this pans out since Shy has taken a liking to Lauren. And there's no way she can keep her mouth closed. no way. And why does Matt jump to the conclusion that Shy started all of dat?

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Date: June 23 2015

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