Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

Real name:

Member Since: December 26 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




[Report This]
Reviews by BellaChica


Retired
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 243]
Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45726
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I laughed so much that couldn't breathe. Shy is crazy. Her description of white folks fighting was hilar. What is not hilar is the murder of her sis and bro-in-law. I so hope that she tells Matt, but witht he way that he's acting, I don't see that happening soon and that could spell disaster for Shy.

Well done, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG! I simply loved this chapter. Shy treating Matt like Tristan was hilar. Him and his virigin hair fixation. too much. And his many questions was so funny. I want more of this between those two.

Very good chapter, Chica. I have a huge smile on my face even though I'm feeing sad for Matt not being able to let out his emotions. Shy will be good for him.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it i was so unsure about this chapter because I didn't have the time.   Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh Matt, ya boys are about to get you in some trouble. And that damn muva of yours is definitely about to get you into a heap of trouble. You need to tell her to STAY. IN. HER. LANE.



Author's Response:

Ha! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This had me cackling. Matt is such a dope. Love it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23 2015

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

O M G! Those two... DEAD.



Author's Response:

Haha!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

DEAD.

I swear. Those two. Oh Shyla, you better hope yo ass don't get preggers. Sooo glad that I work from home, 'cause folks would've thought I'd lost my mind laughing so loud. whew.

Chica, you sure did deliver. Now watch the fallout.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I.AM.DEAD.

little brown hobbit. petite bandit.  little troll.

Now, now, children, play nice.

Matt doesn't know which end is up. Shyla is a hoot.

This chapter had me cackling.

Sooo glad that you're back. Hope life has straightened out for you. Thanks so much for the update.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2016

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

And what a teaser it was. Oh Matt, you so don't understand women. But you did have to sense to know when your friends were blowing smoke up you butt. Shyla's Dad may be a bit better, but we'll see. So, Matt has finally admitted he has feelings for Shyla. That's a bit of progress. His conversation with Dad had me choking. Too funny. I needed the laugh.

This was a joy to read.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2017

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Shyla and Matt need their ears boxed. They're "adults" and should be able to handle their issues without disrupting what little stability that those poor babies have. They don't seem to understand that tension between them will be felt by the kids. I hope that they get their heads out of their butts before they do real damage to their children. For all intents and purposes, they ARE their children. But, it is so funny to see them stumbling through this relationship. Poor Matt, he is so lost when it comes to dealing with Shyla. Not like any other woman that you've come across, huh? Hope you come to realize that all women ARE NOT the same. You gon learn today! kmsl.



Author's Response:

Yes! I haven't heard the term "ears boxed" in a while! Amazing. 

I agree they do need to grow up

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2017

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarhalf-star
[Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40299
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter two

"I've always wanted a twin."

I don't think that I took this the way he meant it. Or did I? ;)

With this Dark Fic tag, I'm suspicious of everything and everybody. hee

Waiting for the next update!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 24 2015

Retired
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Despite the absurdity of bargaining with the Almighty while topless and bound in the bedroom of a man whose last name she can’t remember, Diya De la Roy gives God an ultimatum:  Send her a man and a love worth having by next Valentine's Day, or she would give up on both.  Forever.  

Unbeknownst to Diya, she'll get that and more, along with a lesson in how perfectly wicked divine humor can be.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13212
Read Count: 11185
Published: May 02 2015
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Beginning

I made the mistake of reading this chapter while eating water-boiled fish atop rice and green beans and promptly almost choked when I read this gem:

"Exhibit A sat lodged in his mouth.  Though the closest I’d ever come to lessons in BDSM was reading the first two pages of the literary tragedy that is Fifty Shades of Grey, I was pretty sure the bright red ball gag belonged in my mouth."

I howled. I'll have to finish eating and return to the story. Now, I might choke trying to shovel the food in. hee



Author's Response:

Lol!  Sorry for the spillage.  Thanks BellaChica!



Author's Response:

Lol!  Sorry for the spillage.  Thanks BellaChica!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Enter the Bachelors

Kinda like, iced tea,” he mused, smacking his lips.  “But tart.

Help me. I can not stop laughing.



Author's Response:

Thanks BellaChica : D

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

Perfect.



Author's Response:

Thanks BellaChica!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04 2015

Featured
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 256]
Summary:

Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53265
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Papa Marino made some pretty babies. DAMN!!!

I'm liking Christian!

I think I'm going to love this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

"Did your precious Ambrosia inform ya'll that the reason she broke up with Cameron in College was becuase she was pregnant by the man she was cheating on him with? Or how about how she paid some back alley doctor two hundred dollars to abort the baby so her parents wouldn't find out?"

Well, that explains ths scar tissue and her well used kagina.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

16!!! And she was going to continue if her nasty behind hadn't been found out. Trick has that stalker vibe. Wouldn't put it past her to try and do something to Jay. If she does, there will be numerous suspects in her disappearance.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

Jay is definitely a Marino.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Oh Amby, you do not want to f with the Marinos. Hope you've made out yo will. You dumb slut.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01 2015

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 50]
Summary:

He made a promise to protect her. Can he keep it? Can he keep her?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 12071
Read Count: 20330
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: May 26 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Is Malcolm really dead? hmmm. inquiring minds.

Yani, I think there are many reasons that Nathan won't look at you. The least of which is his feeling of guilt. I think he has feelings for her and that brings his own brand of guilt.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I really want to show how many layers attraction and love can have, so really appreciate your comments.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22 2015

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 181]
Summary:

 photo BelowTheSurface1_zpsaxr0lqhy.jpg

 

 

Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 48920
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Sadly, anyone on that list is capable of doing this. Is ex out of the hospital? Harris seems to be a little unhinged. And there seems to be something kinda hanky about that Donna person and what she and the ex has going on. Something smells there.

Good update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 29 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Denise and Chance had me cracking up. Cole. cute.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18 2016

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Wow, Denise. To do that to your own child. Damn.

Asger and Denise, yes.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

DAMN!

If Jen lives, Chance has some crazy yet to confront. And as for Angie, Harris is a nutjob. There should be warning bells going off. He has given her glimpses of his overbearing, controlling true self. She should heed it.

Who will be the crazier of the two? Hope it doesn't get too ugly. Moppet might be elderly, but I'm thinking she can throw her cane/walker with percision.

Really enjoying this, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Perfect. Leave it to Moppet.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I'm not convinced that it's Harris stalking her. If so, he would've seen that she was pregnant at the very least. I like Hart.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 30 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.