Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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Member Since: December 26 2009

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“If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.”


~Jon Stewart




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Below The Surface by Alexandria Glass
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 48920
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016

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Title: Chapter 14: Note

Oh my! So, he left the Priesthood BEFORE they did the mattress mambo, right?

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Date: January 22 2016
My Catfish by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Clark E. has always been the mysterious one out of all of his friends. With a new company on the rise and heartbreak in his past he has many doubts about women. Taking a chance and from the suggestion of his good friend he goes online and starts a romance with Katrina.

Katrina is the ugly duckling that has been named in her family. Living in the shadows of her older sister and cousin she becomes closed off from the outside world. Her only escape is the internet that gives her confidence. She makes a fake profile pretending to be someone else but then starts to develop feelings for Clark.

What happens when these two get to meet in the real world?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 8175
Read Count: 13730
Published: May 23 2015
Updated: August 03 2016

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Title: Chapter 7: Clear choices

Nah, Son. That cleared something, but it damn sho wasn't your brain. Now, you going to have this trick on your back. Kat doesn't need that.

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Date: February 27 2016
Title: Chapter 4: Nights like this

Kat, you're the only one doing the "sticking". Here an idea, use the word NO, and there's no need for explanations as to WHY. They don't deserve one. And next time, Don't.Open.The.Door

Those two gits need to be punched in the throat.

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Date: February 27 2016
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Good Fit? by Dion
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

Appearances can be deceiving



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 26983
Read Count: 37195
Published: May 30 2015
Updated: June 13 2015

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I must say, I love how this is developing. Hump is a dope. Addy uses her head for more than a hat rack, for sure. Northridge lost a gem when she left. They all will slowly realize that.

I'm interested in Gabe's journey. He has a LOT to learn and acknowledge. And his company has some bumpy days ahead. They don't seem to know who Max is. btw, I've got a crush on Max. Clearly a man who sees people as people and not as some f'in' label. It would due Gabe well to develop a relationship with Max. He could learn a few things. Max told him straight up and you need at least one person in your life who won't sugarcoat and condone your bad behaviour.

Well done, Chica. Take your time. Your pacing is great.

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Date: June 13 2015
Lovers' Dance Part 2 by K Carr
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 225]
Summary:

Part 2



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11288
Read Count: 22094
Published: June 09 2015
Updated: October 05 2015

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Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Wow! I hope they have a little time to themselves before the sht hits the fan

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Date: September 01 2015
Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Who would've thunk, but, Matt is adorable. When he gets all earnest and vulnerable.  I can't believe I use Matt and adorable in the same sentence.

 

I hope Maddie is on BC, 'cause they way Matt is going at it, we're looking at twins or even triplets.

 

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Date: September 30 2015
Despite It All by WonderingWhy
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Choi Ha-Nui is a former olympic swimmer who finds herself back home coaching the men's swimming team of a prestigious high school. She finds herself entangled in the lives of two brothers, as she tries to navigate the world as a new retiree.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Teacher/Student, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 29487
Read Count: 15737
Published: June 14 2015
Updated: July 30 2015

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Title: Chapter 4: Searching&Searching

Wow, what a first meeting.

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Date: July 30 2015
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A CHILD NAMED SOLOMON by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 200]
Summary:

Nathaniel Hendricks lived alone in his lakehouse on Lake Michigan spending his days remebering the young son he tracgically lost and the wife who left him when he needed her the most. The only thing that kept him remotely happy was the lake he lived by boating and fishing. He already failed as a father and a husband so why would God give him another chance?

Eden Wilson spent most of her life running from abuse and now as a young adult she finds herself running from an obsessive abusive ex-boyfriend. Not wanting the child she's carrying to be in danger she spends most of her pregancy running until she tries to get in contact with her uncle for help. Eden finds herself with her uncle's friend a lonely handsome man Nathaniel who gives her shelter in a snowstorm. 

Little did either of them know how close the baby would bring them together or how much this little bundle of joy would help them learn about secound chances.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 28561
Read Count: 37464
Published: June 16 2015
Updated: June 14 2016

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Title: Chapter 6: JANUARY 23RD 1990

Hard to think that Wendy has moved on since she and that rat husband of hers seem to be obsessed with Nate. What idiots.

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Date: July 06 2015
Title: Chapter 10: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

So glad that Nate dispatched that jerk to hell. Roast, baby, roast.

Sol is not going to be happy being away from Nate. I love how he seems to know that Nate needs him. They have developed their own little routine. Like a little family.

Yes, the ass is gone, but there are two other asses waiting to cause havoc. Hopefully, they won't be able to cause too much trouble.

I hope that Nate and Eden continue their friendship. Eden will have to come to grips with her life with Curtis and his death. It's more than a notion to watch someone die. I hope she can find a job and become independent.

Let your muse flow, Chica.

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Date: July 22 2015
Title: Chapter 11: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

Idle hands are the Devil's workshop and Wendy "Satan's handmaiden" Rodgers and Charlotte "run tell dat" Baker are living proof.

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Date: July 26 2015
Title: Chapter 12: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Those 3 vile creatures are putting out so much bad juju. And that Charlotte on her way to Church and channeling the devil without any self-awareness of the irony.

I so love Sol and Nate time. I'm fearful of what the 3 will come up with to get rid of Eden.

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Date: July 29 2015
Title: Chapter 14: MARCH 12TH 1990

Gah. Wendy - forced sterilization. That would prevent the abuse of any future children. She's a menace. And quite distasteful.

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Date: September 01 2015
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Love, God & Negotiations by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78662
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021

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Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Fallen Angels

this f#cker doesn't have anything better to do than to try and torment Brandon. I hope he's thisclose to death. What a real ahole.



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That he is.  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: January 13 2016
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Beware the Prowlers

Diya would do well to not tell Chan anything she doesn't want to be divulged. I really don't trust her one bit.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, Chandi will be the least of Diya's problems.  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: February 15 2016
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Undone

Oh Diya, do ya really think your sister is going to keep her mouth shut?

“Then you’re fresh the fuck outta luck, because Brandon said he ain’t—and I quote—‘puttin’ shit on you or in you.’”

This made me laugh sooo hard.



Author's Response:

Teehee.  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: February 15 2016
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Date Night, First Fight (Revised)

Oh yeah, I was expecting that friend of his to be there. If not her, then someone else. arggghhh

I might not like the choices some of the characters make, but I fully support your writing this story the way you and your muse want to.

Having said that, argggh. Please don't let it be his bestest girl friend EVAH.



Author's Response:

Lol.  I make no promises.  Awful ain't I.  ; )

Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: January 04 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

I see now, this is a story I shouldn't read while playing with sharp objects or eating.

Harriett Snubman

I almost choked on a really good tortilla chip.

Love this.



Author's Response:

Lol!  Thanks BellaChica!!!  

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Date: July 04 2015
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Old Bait and Switch

I knew it! I just knew that dear ole dad was setting my girl up, in more ways than one. She might end up having to cut her own father.

JJ, I so enjoy reading this story. It really brightens my day. Even when I get ticked at something a character does, it's with a full on smile and dare I say a guffaw in some instances.

Thank you for this little gem. You are gifted, Chica.



Author's Response:

Diya and Daddy are bound to bump heads over Brandon.  Who'll get their way remains to be seen.  So glad you're enjoying the story,  BellaChica.  And thanks for the awesome review!

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Date: July 09 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - T.M.I. (Revised)

I'm deathly afraid of cats and yes I think that Camilla is the spawn of Satan. Di better sleep with one eye open because I don't think a locked door would keep her out if she really wanted to get in that room.

I'm kinda disappointed in Di.



Author's Response:

Lol.  Camilla definitely bears watching.  

I don't know if it'll affect you're level of disappointment in Diya, but next chapter you'll get a little more insight into the whys of her reaction.

Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: July 16 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Missing Pieces

Oh Tyler, you don't stand a chance with Di, you little shit.

I can not wait to see what's the dealio. It looks pretty bad.



Author's Response:

Tyler sure the hell doesn't.  

As bad as it looks, I think you'll find it's worse.  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: July 19 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Slippery When Wet

Good one, Brandon.



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Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: August 01 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Kiss and Telltale

Yeah, that Marisol is making me kind of stabby. Sure, he can have female friends, but it sure seems that she wants something more. And yeah, they kissed when they were 17, but I bet ole girl is holding that near and dear to her heart. I really don't trust this chick.

Ya know, Brandon needs to take care of his "relationship" with Marisol. It is quite clear that he's not oblvious to the vibes when the two ladies in his life are in the vicinity of each other. Has he made it clear to Marisol that Di is his boo and a serious boo at that? If not, he needs to.

Yeah, a bit bumpy is prolly an understatement. :)



Author's Response:

Like any female in close proximity to a man who isn't theirs, Marisol bears watching--which Diya is doing.  Brandon has made it clear to Marisol how serious things are between him and Diya.  More importantly, Marisol knows Brandon well enough to read the signs.  What that means to her, remains to be seen. 

This chapter was bumpy.  But it gets so much worse.  Stay tuned...

Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: September 18 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Night Light

Diya, do ya hear him? In not so subtle woeds, Branny just told you how he feels about you. Girl, you better listent.

As for Marisol, I could give a blue dilly f'ck as to whether she conveniently forgot to relay the message, whether it's because she wants Brandon for herself or she thinks Diya is not the one for him or whatev. That was foul what she did. Foul, I tell ya.

Thanks so much for the 2 chapter update. But you know, I'm a greedy little bugger. It just makes me want more.

Good updates, Chica.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Brandon put his feelings out there, however illusive they might have been.  Diya just has to accept them...if she can.  Lol @ the "blue dilly f*ck" and the "foul, I tell ya"!  Marisol seems both innocent and guilty enough.  We'll eventually see which it is.  Thanks BellaChica! 

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Date: September 21 2015
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Misfortune Tellers

Her father is an idiot. And gullible. This had me cackling.

But on the serious tip, maybe it's not time for Branny to meet the parental units.  They might need to be more stable before the onslaught of that crew. Especially Daddy Dearest. Would she give up Branny? I'm thinking yes at this juncture.



Author's Response:

William is certifiable.

I'm cosigning your suggestion that Diya wait before unleashing the De la Roy beast.  Unfortunately for her, Brandon's not trying to hear it.  Her giving him up is a definite possibility.  The question is, would it be for his benefit or hers? 

Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: September 15 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - On the Outside

smh. Diya is something.

Those 3 ole biddies need those crates knocked from beneath them.



Author's Response:

That they do.  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: January 03 2016

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