Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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Member Since: December 26 2009

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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78667
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Cause (Revised)

Having experienced the Klan up close and personal like. Coming from my neck of the woods, it was more an anomaly that the white person DIDN'T belong to the Klan. So, yeah.

It says a lot about who Branny is that he still feels guilt. He's a much better person than the rest of those yahoos that he was around. He needs to forgive himself.

Gah, can you IMAGINE what the FAMILY would think if they found out he was a member in his youth? With the way her father is, he might do some investigating and find out.



Author's Response:

That is a DEFINITE possibility...poor Branny.  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: February 03 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Honeymoon's Over

no she didn't buy one of those ice packs? HA!



Author's Response:

She did : )  Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: June 15 2016

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Surprise, Surprise

I choked on the popcorn I was munching while reading the Ya, Brandon and Mannie scenes. For Reelz. I couldn't breathe there for a sec I was laughing so damn hard.

I'm getting tired of Diya and her inability to stand up to her father and acknowledging Brandon. He does what he does because she ALLOWS him to do so.

Brilliant chapter, Chica. DEAD.



Author's Response:

Thanks BellaChica!!!  So happy you got a good giggle out of their foolishness.  

As for Diya standing up to her father and acknowlegding Brandon, she tried.  In the past, she's allowed William to do the things he does so far as she's forgiven him after the fact.  But, as you'll soon see, that's where Diya's control over William and his meddling begins and ends.  

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Date: June 16 2016

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Friend of My Lover Ain't My Friend

Bloody hell! This family.

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Date: July 15 2016

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - The Trouble with Assuming

JJ, First, stellar chapter, Chica.

But I would commit mass murder on this crazy ass family. These folks are certifiable. But DAMN, if they didn't have me rolling.  I now have a headache from laughing so hard.

But, on the real, I'm glad she finally got it out there. I fear what will happen next. I don't hav any confidence that she will stand up for Brandon. We shall see.

Brilliant!

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Date: July 15 2016

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Di needs to get away from Brandon until he gets rid of his baggage... looking at you, Marisol. I'm real pissed right now. How could he think that little tidbit wasn't important . Sonuva...

Buckle up is right.



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: March 10 2019

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Who I Thought I Knew

Brandon seems willfully ignorant when it comes to Marisol. Diya needs to do self-care.  She seems to be more concerned about Branny than herself. Diya, take a bit of time to figure out who you are and why you let folks treat you any kind of way. You seem to want to belong so badly that you accept treatment that a person who values themselves would've punched the asshats in the throat a long time ago. I think that this goes back to that wack family of hers. You need to help yourself before you can help Brandon. As for Brandon, there are no words. He needs help and I don't think no matter how much Diya loves him, she's not equipped to take on his drama. Remember Diya, you teach people how to treat you and I don't see you being your authentic self with Brandon right now. Girl, run, and run far. I'm so pissed at Brandon right now. 

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Date: August 17 2019

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Hell Hath...

To answer @flikchick, Nope. No man is worth this.  Extraordinarily bad idea is an understatement.  When will she see that there's something toxic in her desperation in her relationship with Brandon to the point she would have any contact with the jackhole half brother of his. 



Author's Response:

First Diya has to ask herself if it's Brandon, or something else she's trying to save.

More that later.

Thanks BellaChica!

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Date: May 02 2020

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Summary:

  I was broken when he found me,damaged goods..My name held no meaning when shame fit so well in its place but he saw me, the real me, that little thread I held onto and kept in a box hidden beneath my chest. He knew my flaws and instead of running in the opposite direction he ran towards me hitting me dead on like a sledgehammer .He licked my wounds, allowing my scars to heal before peeling back each layer of myself to devour and claim, he brought me unspeakable pleasure using my body as his canvas.Many would of considered him a monster, a killer, an evil man. His Name was Nickolai  Harkov with the Russian Bravta and he was the man I fell in love with.

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     I was the second in line to lead in the Harkov Bravta. The hardcore exterior I portrayed made me who I was a lethal and merciless killer . Darkness nearly overtook me, until I stumbled upon Tiara. She didn't know it but she was my light that pulled at the vessel beating beneath my rib cage. She made me question life, before her nothing matter, but now I would do anything within my power to be with the woman that gave me a reason to live.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8575
Read Count: 9781
Published: July 15 2015
Updated: July 23 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nic had to get rid of the trash, but at what cost to him and his soul? I hope he can reconcile what he's done. What has it done to him inside? Enjoyed this.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading the story!!!! I'm so happy you liked it... 

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Date: July 22 2015

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Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121645
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 9: EASTER SUNDAY 1995

Yes, kids sometimes think they control events and are responsible for when something goes wrong. I hope Anika comes to the realization that she's not to blame for her parents' death. And what about Hunter, when he sees her for the first time, will he be insensitive as he's used to women with "perfect" bodies? He can learn a helluva lot from Anika. And I hope he teaches her a thing or two as well. He is quite blunt, but I like that trait in him. The rest, not so much. But here's hoping he learns to be a human being at some point. I know, it'll be a slow process, reaaalll slow.

Thanks for the background, so sad.

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Date: August 28 2015

Title: Chapter 25: BACK AT HOME 5

Wow, Sterling took his ballz back from Corrine.

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Date: February 29 2016

Title: Chapter 10: SUMMER 1997

So much in this chapter. So much.

"don’t mind your father Hunter"

That right there says it all to me. It really ticked me off.

So, no mention of Corrine working, so the money is coming from Sterling, right? So, anything Hunter got was from Sterling's pocket and he was too chickenshit to put his foot down and say hell to the naw. That was to Hunter's detriment.

You best believe that Hunter saw how Corrine treated his father, with very little respect, actually. So, why should he listen to his Dad? Sterling allowed his son to turn out like he has. I'm just surprised that he was such a wuss. Yeah, Corrine is the main issue, but Sterling shares a big portion of the blame for letting this shit go down that way. That has not helped Hunter become a fully formed mature human in the least.


"I feel like a man today Dad

Oh Hunter, feeling like one does not make you one with your simple ass. And he still doesn't know what it is to be a man.  Because, unfortunately for him, his Mother and Father showed him what their version was of a man.  If this boy evolves, it will be a MIRACLE.

And slinging yo dick at anything that moves, does not a man make.

why do you always have bring up the harsh stuff he’s still a kid

Ah yes, that is his problem. He's been a kid far too long. This just burns my butt.

"He just prayed that his son would be make judgments with the head on his shoulders..."

Really Sterling. How's that fool boy of yours going to make any rational judgements when it doesn't seem as if you and your wife have taught that idiot a damn thing? Or if you've tried, that fool wife of yours hasn't supported you. United front, people, united front. What a concept.

As I got to the end of the chapter, Sterling seemed to grow a pair, but it seems to have been too late. Unfortunately, by sixteen, Hunter's personality, etc. is set. 

That MIRACLE I mentioned above will have a name and that name will be Anika Gabrielle Wallace. Cause, right now, Hunter makes me want to put my hands around his neck and squeeze, slowly.

Really good chapter, Chica. It really got me going. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2015

Title: Chapter 1: DAY 1

Sterling is about to become a man and human, hopefully.



Author's Response:

We'll  see how long that takes  don't forget  Hunter comes from a comfy privileged background

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Date: August 12 2015

Title: Chapter 2: BACK AT HOME 1

Hunter takes after his female bio unit.

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Date: August 13 2015

Title: Chapter 8: DAY 11

Wow, yeah, Hunter, reality just smacked you in your pie hole. I'm surprised at his reaction. I expected him to make some insensitive remark. But then again, it's still early morning.

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Date: August 25 2015

Title: Chapter 11: DAY 12

Wow, that "mother" of his is a piece of work. I kinda feel sorry for the boy.

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Date: September 08 2015

Title: Chapter 15: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

Hunter bet not react the same as that little shit. Man vs boy, man vs boy. And if Hunter does react the same, then he's still a boy.

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Date: September 20 2015

Title: Chapter 18: DAY 28

Now that is how a MAN would react. Loved that he only noticed the discoloration AFTER. Yeah, Hunter is coming along quite nicely. Wonderful update, Chica.

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Date: October 01 2015

Title: Chapter 24: BACK AT HOME 4

Oh Sterling. While what you're doing is admirable. That shebeast that you married is not going to react well with this new development. I just hope you can shut that crow down before she insults those poor boys. She didn't seem to care about her own son, how do you expect that she'll be sensitive to two black boys. Sterling, will this be the final straw for you?

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Date: February 02 2016

Title: Chapter 26: DAY 42

Well now, this is an interesting development.

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Date: March 01 2016

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Summary:

 

She lives from a secret, constructed in a lie she must keep in order to survive.

He lives a secret, constructed from a life he once lived that was all in turn lie.

Their lives and lies soon collide,now they both must do what they have to survive.

Together



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 12841
Read Count: 3511
Published: September 13 2015
Updated: September 20 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

She's gaining weight. Could she be pregnant by that f!cker?

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Date: September 13 2015

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Summary:

Need I say more?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4858
Read Count: 1220
Published: September 16 2015
Updated: September 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

we can fuck now or later.  It’s your choice.  Really, it’s the only one you got.  ‘Cause we both know your pussy is mine to have.

Tell him you have someone more important to do.

OOO MMMM GEEE!!! Rich!

I am doing cartwheels. Damn, I just hurt myself.

JJ, so looking forward to Rich's story. Looking forward to seeing who he really is. While I do like the cockiness, I want to see what's underneath. We got a good idea from Consequence. That is why I love the big lug so.

And Kara! I'm liking her a lot. She's craving some of that Rich luvin'. They might be too much alike to make it serious, but since I like her so much, I've got my fingers crossed.

Erin seems interesting. I hope to understand why she seems to have an issue with Kara.

Let's get this train started, Chica. YAY!!!

 



Author's Response:

Lol!  Erinn's issues with Takara are your basic personality clash, jealous/protective friend deal.  The rest of your questions and curiosity will be answered as the story progresses.  So glad you're excited for Rich's story.  Thanks BellaChica!!!

P.S.  You may wanna do a few warm-up exercises before the next chapter ; )

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2015

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Summary:

 This story is a continuation from my first one Dragon Master! If you haven't read it please do so, just so you're up to date on the characters. I debated on this for a minute but knew this story would see the light!! Sorry it took so long but I wanted it to be right for you guys!! This is a historical, erotica love story about an alpha dragon and his woman who has her on fire!! Please enjoy and excuse my errors.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Historical
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 11592
Read Count: 4608
Published: September 18 2015
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Rohar, you are f'kd. There is no way that Rohar will be able to handle Tori being with Lokem. Yeah, hes says it, but if it came to pass, he would go completely nuts.

Tori is young and thinks she knows what's what, but like Rohar says, is she ready for him? She might surprise him. This has been growing for at least four years. She won't stop.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL!! more to come I promise!! Thank you for reading

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Date: September 19 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think Tori might've bitten off WAY more than she expected.

WOW!



Author's Response:

I think you might be right!!! wink lol more to come

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ruh roh!



Author's Response:

giggles!!! it's complicated!

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Date: October 05 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.