Rohar, you've got a fiery mate in Tori. Let this be a lesson to you. Tori does not play. You may be big, but she will slap the taste outta your mouth.

Soo, Rohar has a crazy ass father. Let's hope he can handle the demon.

You know as I was reading this, I was thinking, she needs to kill him. She really had no choice. Her family wouldn't help her. She really had no one but herself and after having tried to get away from this f'ker before, she knew what would happen if she did get away this time, he was always going to be after his "property".

Gah, this girl couldn't catch a break back then. It doesn't seem as if she got therapy for her many instances of trauma. She really needs psychological help.

This was hard to read, but it happens to women in the real world. Maybe, not to this extent, but someone, somewhere is going through a version of this hell on a minute by minute basis.

Well done, Chica.

That Heather chick better pray that kid looks like her. what a maroon.

This is me, picking my jaw up off the floor. JASPER!!!

OMgee. Sebastian is going to murderize someone.

Nah, Bastian is ALL man. DAMN!

Oh Willow, there is so much to you than the physical. I really like her. And while she has some issues, she's stronger than most who have to deal with being judged by looks alone.

And yeah Willow, that smart mouth is going to get you into so much trouble. Bastian might just make you put it to better use. :)

MJ, onward. Loving it.

Can we get an assembly of Sebastians? Damn, if that man ain't the ONE.

Willow, you just won't heed my warning. That mouth of yours, gurl.

MJ, thanks for the bonus chapter. I think I enjoyed it as much as Willow did. ;)

It wasn’t his idea to play ‘catch the pig’.

Yeah, but yo ass participated. But for you, it wouldn't have happened. You little shit.

And how the hell do you know her to be lazy. There yo ass go judging without knowing a damn thing. And aren't you just full of yourself. 'cause, yeah, the ONLY reason Willow would jog would be to get your attention. Sweetie, you aren't all that, ya know?

What the hell is wrong with you, man? You didn't want Willow, but the minute you hear about someone else wanting "the pig", you get salty. Yeah, I'd like to beat yo ass, my damn self.  *deep breath; control the ratchetness*

“Let’s play a game,” ... “It’s called ‘kill the pig’.”

YES! Maybe Simon doesn't deserve to be killed, but hey, things happen.

REAL, Yes!

Damn, y'all real bold. I think you both were marking territory. And Willow was saying a ginormous FU to her parents, methinks.

YASSSSSS

Pease complete this wonderful story. Good luck in your future writings. Let us know when you've published. Your stories are enjoyable and very thought provoking. Best of luck.

BTW, I'm skerred that Juliette is still a threat. I'm not above throat slitting, not.at.all.

Zuma is talking outta her ass. Gah, she is so irritating. Spouting off all kinds of nonsense. I see there is much more to Iris than meets the eye.

Does Zuma even realize that's she's one seriously miserable human being. She really seems to hate to see others happy. Yeah, the fall is going to be hard for her. At least I really hope so. She makes me want to hit her in the throat.

This is an intriguing story, Chica.

Is there a human beneath that hard exterior? I hope Iris can handle this. She SEEMS like a nice girl. I hope she has the fortitude to deal with Ms Zuma. I've met one Zuma in my life and you NEVER let 'em see you sweat, that's like chum in the water to someone like her.

I don't normally go there, but I hope there's some good ole Karma coming her way.

Looking forward to the next installment.