Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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Member Since: December 26 2009

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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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[Reviews - 85]
Summary:

Isabella "Izzy" Salvatore is just like any other first grader who likes to draw and color pictures and is living the happy carefree days of childhood. However some of Izzy's drawings are not so happy and carefree some are just really dark and twisted.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 27153
Read Count: 7089
Published: February 07 2016
Updated: November 26 2016


Title: Chapter 6: HIS HEART II

"the only reason Kenya felt obligated to talk to Bernadette was because she carried her for nine months."

And that is ALL she did. The animal kingdom treat their young better than this b.

Luc, Regina is NOT a parent.

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Date: March 07 2016

Title: Chapter 11: TRICK OR TREAT

Oh Izzy, you are a hoot and too cute.

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Date: July 28 2016

Title: Chapter 12: SCARS FROM THE PAST

Interesting chapter and informative.

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Date: December 01 2016

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[Reviews - 316]
Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43003
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh Yeah, this will go well. hee

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Date: February 09 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I think Papa Newton might have an inkling. :)

Now Mama Masterson almost caught them. hee

I like those two together.

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Date: February 25 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yeah, Gerrie needed that bottled water, 'cause she's one thirsty azz heifer. PATHETIC.

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Date: February 13 2016

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

"his brand of sex appeal can be quite potent on some women and it certainly appeared to overwhelm Hilary almost immediately."

There's that word again. Hilary used it when describing her and demonDylan to Reuben. Interesting.

That Gerrie chick is crazier than a squirrel on crack. She's scary. I wouldn't put ANYTHING past her.

While I know that Mama Masterson's first priority and loyalty is with Reuben, I just hope that she won't do anything to cause harm to Amelle. I really like their relationship so far. It's like Amelle is the daughter she never had. We shall see. I'd hate to start disliking Mama M.

The way Reuben treats him Mom is an indication how he treats other women. The problem there is, he doesn't see to realize those other women don't have his best interest at heart. He's almost like a babe in the woods.

And yeah Reuben, I see you. You've notice a whole lot about Amelle. And maybe the reason he reacted so intensely is that he feels something for her and not ready to admit that even to himself.

I'm looking forward to the party. Amelle is a strong young woman. I was a bit surprised at her reaction with Reuben accusations, but maybe it hurt more becaue it was coming from him. She cried, yes, but she's not going to let that keep her down. I'm liking her more and more. It would be dull if she was completely perfect.

Another good update, Chica. Peeling the onion slowly. :)

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Date: February 17 2016

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I so love Mama Masterson. I love the budding relationship between her and Amelle. Mama Masterson can teach Amelle some tricks. No matter what that thirsty h does, Mama M won't let her get away with it. Amelle, learn from boss lady.

Chica, loving your updates. But, take your time and do it the way that you want. With such great updates, we might get a bit spoiled. So, don't feel pressured. Deliver in your own time. Enjoy this as much as we're enjoying it.

Good job, Chica.

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Date: February 16 2016

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm scared of where this Dylan thing is going. I hope not where I think, but we shall see.

Interesting exchange between Reuben and Amelle. And I hope he takes her words to heart. I like Amelle. She's confident in who she is.

And you wish me to change the way I speak because, it makes you more comfortable,” she enquired.

THIS.

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Date: February 15 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So, Reuben, do you like hot sauce on your crow?

Hopefully, he will check the phone logs. If he doesn't trust Amelle, then I can't see her working for him, right now.

Chica, I'm on pins and needles. Good job.

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Date: February 15 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Damn, Reubs really know how to pick 'em.

There something a little "off" with Hils and demonDylan's relationship. Something's not quite right. There seems to be a threat running beneath that oh so "calm" exchange.

btw, Mama Masterton has a mean ride. That is all kinds of purdy.

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Date: February 15 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

"Reuben shrugged his shoulders lightly at the discomfort caused by her spindly fingers and sharp nails."

What popped into my head was an old crone. Reuben needs to delouse and get rid of that git.

“But not important enough to have a serious relationship with obviously.”

Nah, bitch. You smart. What do you THINK he means. Stop pestering the man. HE.DON'T.WANT.YOUR.THIRSTY.BEHIND. You got that?  *Victor Newman voice*

And girl is asking him questions that just is not her business. I hate folks like that. Ya'll don't have that kind of relationship, ya hag.

You have lunch with your mother every Tuesday,” Gerrie pointed out.

And yeah, IT'S HIS MOTHER, you twit. Is there anything in that thick head of yours besides wool? DAMN. She's starting to tick me off on Reuben's behalf.

I hate to be mean, but I LOVE that Hilary is coming around. That Gerrie is gonna lose what marbles sh has left. hee.

There's something kinda offabout croneGerrie.

And now for the other one. What in the blue dilly hell does Hilary think she's doing. She ain't no Mata Hari. This is so transparent and hopefully Reuben doesn't fall for it. I wonder if Hilary really wanted to do this or was that demon forcing her to do it? demonDylan is evil, but I must admit, he's one fine piece.

There is so much to wonder about, in a good way. Keep us wanting MORE. Thanks so much for the great update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good to see that there is something covering the girls beneath the lace. Yup, got his attention. However, I think her words captured his attention more than that bra did. She gave him some really good insight and I think that was what was stunning to him. Although, that lace number DID make a diff, I'm sure. :)

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Date: February 11 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Whoa. I was digging the conversation between Amelle and Dylan until Hilary came up and I got a whole nother vibe regarding Mr. Chambers. Hils timidity just smacked of being afraid of this f*cker and walking on egg shells so that she's not punished later. And this f*cker seems to have gotten Hilary so that he can rub it in Reuben's face. Yeah man, I got your girl and I have "eggs" every morning with ya girl. What a real prick.

I was so ready to hate Hilary, and I might eventually, but right now, I feel kind of sorry for her. Yeah, Dylan, Amelle can handle yo azz just fine. I'm liking Amelle. She's confident in herself, even if she didn't go to an Ivy league school. She knows who she is and seems to be a good person.

Chica, you've upped the stakes.

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Date: February 10 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Does Reuben have "Dial a ho" on speed dial?

Can not wait to meet the heart breaker. Reubs sounds like he has a tender heart under that brusque exterior.

I'm loving Amelle and Mama Masterson's interactions.

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Date: February 09 2016

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Amelle got some fine a** brothers. Kai is a cutie.

I see good taste in cars runs in the Masterson family. Reuben, I think Moms' got you beat, though. :)

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Date: February 22 2016

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Dylan is quite smarmy. He'll double his efforts now. He should know that Amelle might take a body part next time.

Hilary, you need to grow a pair. You're letting that jackhole use you. He doesn't love you one bit, as evidenced by withholding affection because you won't do what he wants.

Amelle called it. Dylan is jealous of Reuben, always has been it seems.

That kiss, yeah,

Reuben was about to go all hulk on Dylan. Amelle is going to be a good partner for him. Her natural instinct would've been what Reuben was dying to do. But she was the one thinking thru the consequences of Reuben attacking Dylan.

Does this mean, that she'll have to keep kissing him everytime he wants to do something rash that could negatively affect his business. hee

Chica, this was a really good update.

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Date: February 22 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hell Yeah, you best continue. This chapter had me cackling.

I like the interaction between the mom and Amelle. I hope that continues. I wonder if Mrs. Masterson has another motive that she isn't telling Amelle about.

Yeah, I like it.



Author's Response:

Hey BellaChica, thanks so much for your reviews. I've never written humour before, so it's a challenge. I'm glad I made you cackle. I'm working on chapter 2, should be posting tomorrow.x

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Whoa, Reuben. Yeah.

Amelle is real pretty.

Mama Masterson looks like a pistol.

Liking the cast so far.

Good job, Chica.

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Date: February 08 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So, if Reuben gets out of this meeting alive, I hope that will be the end of his excuses for this crazy bitch.

Interesting conversation between Mel and Mama Masterson. Very.

This is a real treat to read. Although, Reuben, this is looking like you might get a scene from Misery in a few. Boy, open thine eyes.

Good update, Chica. Very good.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

She saw no other way out.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 377
Read Count: 1642
Published: February 10 2016
Updated: February 10 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well now. This should be interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I hope u still feel that way as the next few chapters come out!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 10 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

"Obviously, you don't give a fuck about me! You just want me to stay at home and pop babies. My dreams mean nothing to you!"

"Is that what you think?" Yes was Ashley's immediate answer.

"I asked you a question."

"Does it matters!?"

"I guess you need to be reminded that you're moye serdtse."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2647
Read Count: 14513
Published: February 15 2016
Updated: February 18 2016


Title: Chapter 2: o1

That pic is E'ERTHANG!



Author's Response:

it sure is!

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Date: February 18 2016

Title: Chapter 6: o4

MAKSIM - DROPS MIC!!!

WHAT AN ENDING.



Author's Response:

Yy

 

Boom. Mic drooped - we out!

Thank you! 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18 2016

Title: Chapter 5: o3.5

My, my, my.



Author's Response:

yup! it was a fan your face moment, lool!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

"Love -- not dim and blind but so far-seeing that it can glimpse around corners, around bends and twists and illusion; instead of overlooking faults love sees through them to the secret inside."    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1256
Read Count: 978
Published: February 19 2016
Updated: February 19 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Best Friends and Early Mornings

I like this. And I like their friendship. That flashback was so sweet.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20 2016

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