Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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“If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.”


~Jon Stewart




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Obey by Kaye Ti
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

"Fuck you!"

 "That can be arranged darling" he says seriously with a mischievous glint in his honey brown eyes that were hooded with lust.

 It was only then when Abela understood she had made a mistake that will bite her in the ass later. But little did she know, later was going to be here a lot sooner.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2999
Read Count: 3688
Published: February 23 2016
Updated: February 25 2016

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Title: Chapter 3: 02

Say what?:)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm looking forward to seeing how they came to be.

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Date: February 23 2016
Stone Cold by carolinaheart
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Just a short drabble based on a song.



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Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 763
Read Count: 2855
Published: February 25 2016
Updated: February 25 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

DAMN. That WAS cold. I can feel her pain.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26 2016
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Knight In Shining Armor by AntiVenom
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11381
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017

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Title: Chapter 1: ~Chapter One...~

Yes!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2016
Title: Chapter 2: ~Chapter Two...~

"I talk with my hands"

Love it. Nic is a hoot.  Kelsey is my kinda women. That Randall guy is in for a surprise. While I would like for Nic to stomp his butt. I want to see what kind of hurt that Kelsry can rain down on his behind.

Alas, Joey does have a weak mind. What an idiot.

Oh my, this chapter was EVERYTHING!

 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2016
All I Ask by carolinaheart
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Kind of a companion piece to Stone Cold, but it can be considered a stand alone piece. It's another drabble for another song.



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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1247
Read Count: 3014
Published: March 06 2016
Updated: March 06 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Girl, you'll love again. For your sake, let this be the end.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 07 2016
Same Love by Soulholder
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 58]
Summary: Siriphana Howard, was alone in this world until she met Nicholas Clayton. Who becomes her best friend, and anchor. With a trip back to his home for the holidays, she discovers that the man she secretly pins for has an unexpected surprise.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 31246
Read Count: 12552
Published: March 10 2016
Updated: June 05 2016

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Happy Belated Birthday.

Noah is acting less than smart. He needs to control his lust. Yeah, Siri is bound to fall into your arms with you acting like a dog in heat. Noah, nothing about what you've done so far shows me that you want to change for the better. Siri, don't fall for this bs. He's being totally disrespectful to Siri. Siri needs to stay as far away from him as she possibly can.

Noah, you have the self control of a four-year old. No disrespect to four-year olds. What is wrong with you?

Nic is being pretty clear how he sees Siri. And as written, I don't see him "hiding" any romantic feelings for her. I appreciate that. I hope the brothers can strengthen their relationship. And Siri being in the middle certainly wouldn't help in that endeavor.

I'm interested to see how or if Noah grows. I hope he does. He is yet to be the man for Siri, since he's still a man-child with emphasis on CHILD.

Looking forward to the next chapter, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my. I'd like to be a part of a Nick and Noah sammich. I don't care how much of an ogre that Noah seems to be. :)



Author's Response: Haha he is a ogre!! But a hot one.. Gonna add a banner pretty soon. Just gotta figure out how. I'm happy you enjoyed it tho. Thank you

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ruh Roh. Wonder what Noah was thinking. I am simply loving this story. Trying to be patient as I need my fix on the regular. :)

Well done, Chica.



Author's Response: Thanks Sweetie!! I appreciate it! Ya'll give me life, when it comes to my writing. An I won't keep you guys waiting since, I myself know how it is to have withdraws when it comes to a good story!! So I got you :D

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2016
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Noah, that was all kinds of wrong on your part. This is all on you. No, she did not "vex" you. You saw, you wanted and you got. All on you hombre. If it's more than just physical, you need to square whatever you got going with Jennifer before you ome for Siri. Otherwise, you just a little boy wanting something you think that your brother has.

Enjoying this, Chica. It might not seem like it, but I like Noah. I like Nick. Both for different reasons. I dont think either is all bad or all good. I just think that Noah has some issues that are causing just the "bad" parts to be highlighted right now.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2016
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

“I'm only going to extend this warning once, so If I were you, I would take note.” Siri’s voice was calm; too calm to mean anything good. “Don't you ever… and I mean this...ever come at me with this bullshit again. I also will not accept you throwing insults at me, so heed my words Jennifer. I will not hesitate in fucking up your pretty little prejudice face.”

See now, that's what I wanted to hear come out of Siri's mouth. She didn't shrivel up and die just cause some little pasty ass chick came at her. Nah, Son. She let it be known what she would and would not take from ANYONE, least of  all some random chick who can't seem to make it on her own and is willing to do ANYTHING for MONEY. Noah's "fiancee" needs to take a look in the mirror. Seems like she's projecting to me.

Well done, Chica.



Author's Response: That's one of my favorite parts of this chapter as well xD. I totally think that Siri is a bad ass lowkey, and some people are going to try to sleep on her. And to me money is the root of all evil, so with Jennifer wanting her relationship with him badly for money, could mean bad news for everybody in the near future

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2016
The Experiment by DramaQueenAmby
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

In a day and age where race relations is the go to subject for most academic instructors, the behavioral science department at Saylor University decide to push the envelope. Eight diverse college students are chosen to participate in a study where they will spend two weeks together, separated from society and cut off from the outside, to learn more about one another. Each student has a different background and the aim of the study is to force the students to examine more than just the current racial issues plaguing the nation, but themselves and who, in actuality, they really are.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Racism, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2616
Read Count: 7077
Published: March 12 2016
Updated: March 16 2016

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I tell you, I CACKLED at the interaction between Ghetto and the Dick. I mean, Namea's sarcasm is ME.

I was concerned that I might not like this, but so far, so good. Adam, interesting. But, he might tick me off later. As Namea might as well. But right now, I'm liking her snark. She might wear then if that's all she is. We'll see. Layla, hmmm, she would probably get on my nerves if she was perky all the damn time. But might be good for a few laughs.

Good job, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16 2016
Hello Heart by midnightlove
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

They were a "missed connection" in High School. What happens when Jayden and Dean reconnect as adults?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 16228
Read Count: 12563
Published: March 19 2016
Updated: June 24 2016

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Title: Chapter 2: Lumiere

Dean, you should thing with your BIG head. I can not wait for his past actions to come home to roost. I like Jayden and am impressed with the work that she's doing for the community.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2016
Lady and the Tramp by Sweetest Voice
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Don't you love it when your friends don't listen and hire a male escort for you despite you repeatedly telling them that you're not ready to see anybody? Yeah, neither does Jacqui. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5324
Read Count: 8951
Published: March 21 2016
Updated: March 30 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Moving On

OK, in real life, I'd be pissed at this. But since it's not, I'm laughing my head off.

Good start, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21 2016
The One That Got Away by M_Denise
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Derek Walker was not interested in surrendering his playa's card. His friends were falling like flies but he'd be damned if he was going down that road. He liked his life. He got to take pictures of beautiful women all day long. He had his pick of models, celebrities, and debutantes. His family loved him and he had great friends. Why in the world would he sacrifice that to wake up besides one woman every morning? He'd been repeating this mantra since his senior year in college. Hell, since the day his cousin brought that red-haired witch to a family dinner when he was in the 10th grade. Then . . . she got engaged and everything changed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Chi -Town Shenanigans
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 12722
Read Count: 11809
Published: April 13 2016
Updated: May 02 2016

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'm enjoying this. Oh Derek, that chest pain is not going to go away, Dude, until you admit you love this girl. I'm getting a kick out of his pain. Yeah, I'm just that evil. :)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2016
Forfeit by Briella
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

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Emery and Nicholas have been friends forever. But when Nicholas finds out he's sick he asks for something that could change their friendship forever



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4365
Read Count: 5808
Published: April 13 2016
Updated: August 21 2019

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Title: Chapter 2: Requests

Oh yeah, this is going to work out just fine. just fine.

So this dude has been lusting after his "brother's" wife all of this time. That should make Emery question a lot of things. Sorry, I don't care that you've got cancer, dude, that doesn't mean all of your morals go out the window. That says to me you've been coveting their relationship from the jump. Instead of trying to find someone for yourself. GAH

Nah Son, Nah, you don't get a free pass just cause you're supposedly terminal. And what if a child results? Or is that what you're hoping for? Or what if you go into remission?  Emery will have to see your damn face EVERY.DAY knowing that YOU'VE seen his wife's ecstasy face.

Gah, SELFISH. Way to dump shit on your "brother's" marriage. But then, if they go along with it, I won't feel a bit of sympathy for the shitstorm that will result.



Author's Response:

I love comments like these :P It's not going to be pretty that's for sure. Thanks for reading, sounds like you know this is a bad idea but youre gonna stick it out and read the drama anyway? Pretty please??? Lol thanks for reading Bella

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2016
Title: Chapter 3: We All Make Choices

Sooo, he met her first. Don't care. She chose Emery. More importantly, she MARRIED Emery. Now, I'm giving ole girl major side-eye. I don't trust her motives nor do I trusts Nick's. Run, Emery, Run. She really isn't worth it.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2016
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Submerge by Yuukiyanagi
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 85]
Summary:

"You have thought about it, haven't you? How it would feel to be with both of us."

"If we do this...promise me that nothing changes. The thought of losing you both..."

Dante took a moment and then nodded. He shifted his gaze to her shoulder and Hope felt Emil grip her tighter, leaning further into her when his mouth brushed her ear and he said.

"This changes nothing."

 

Caution:

MFM Short Story!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4029
Read Count: 15464
Published: April 25 2016
Updated: December 25 2016

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Title: Chapter 7: Ruins

It is not clear to me why Emil agreed to this. Did I miss something?

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Date: December 26 2016
Solomon and The Queen by Nsablo
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

A young black prince Solomon Banks in his mid 20s, must marry but he doesn't like any of the suitors that his parents presents him. So he goes looking for his queen himself. He finds a young african princess that he likes but she is not buying into his charm because he has money. But he has his heart set on her and he is not a man to give up, he will make her his wife wether she is ready for it or not. 

Naira Okeke is a post college graduate is who  is struggling to live in New Jersey on her own with two part-time job. She's a retail worker by day and high end bartender at night. She was finally able to move out of her parent's home after saving up while in college to escape a toxic household. She plans to further her education to get her Master's Degree in English in the future. Her luck with men hasn't been that great as she becomes frustrated with her current sexual relationship with Ryan Brown. Then life brings Solomon Banks into her life that she can't seem to shake off but it is not impressed by his materialistic gifts that he presents her. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4808
Read Count: 1166
Published: May 19 2016
Updated: June 01 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Uncertainty

I'm so looking forward to this story. Bonus is a black man in the lead. YES!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Solomon Meets the Queen

Good for you Naira. Good for you. You just got a glimpse of what a real relationship can be. Ryan is a boy. Not very deep. Solomon is going to get you.  Game on.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for supporting my story! I am so happy you are enjoying it! Yes, Naira knows what she deserves and has an idea of what kind of man she wants. Let's see what happens next!

 

-Nsablo 

 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2016
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Dark Paradise by intellectual titmouse
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

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The past never leaves. It's all in how you deal with it that determines how well you move on . . .

 

Vera Cooke thought she'd moved on, thought she'd buried her past well enough to get married and have a son and enjoy the life she'd been wanting.

 

But the past has a way of creeping back up. For Vera, it erupts disturbingly, violently, forcing truths to be revealed and a demanding need for revenge too hard to ignore.

 

Dope Banner by Elizablu



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9367
Read Count: 12175
Published: May 22 2016
Updated: May 24 2016

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Brilliant.  And if some day your muse taps you on the  shoulder and whispers "About Vera and Nicky...", listen.

You have made my day.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2016
Home by K Carr
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

See now, that's the way grown folks handle situations. Alec was right to put a pause on Vanessa. Charlie needs to be as honest with herself as Alec is with himself.

This family time was EVERYTHING. I so love Jamie. Him being so young, I'm sure he looks up to Olly even though they do fight. He can become the forgotten one with the focus being mostly on Olly. So realistic that they both think the other is the favorite. Loved how Alec and Charlie handled that.

KC, brilliant chapter. I was cheering as I read it. No games, just everyday life causing drama. I think I'm in love. :)



Author's Response:

Hi BellaChica,

Glad you enjoyed this chapter, and you're right, everyday life is drama enough without the need for game playing! 

K.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2016
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh Alec, you really do need to decide what exactly you want.  This is such a good story. I started off really disliking Charlotte, but I understand that she was sick. I still feel bad for the boys. They have been thru a lot. I hope to see some interaction between Charlotte and Jaime.



Author's Response:

Hey BellaChica,

Hope you're well and it's good to know you're enjoying the story. Have a great weekend.

K. 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2016
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Just when I think this can't get better, you post this chapter. Brilliant.

Vanessa... When Alec says it's nothing, I believe him. He's done nothing so far to indicate that he's a liar. But Vanessa, WTH. Alec has been clear with this trick and yet she still felt the need to "clear the air". Welllll, since the air has been cleared, there should be no reason for her thirsty ass to show her piehole anywhere near Alec and his family.

Her offer to stay at the hospital indicates to me that she continues to think that she has a place in his life. Nah, he has a WIFE who can comfort him. You are dismissed. Girl, get some pride and walk away. You're like one of those hound dogs hanging around the back door hoping for some scraps to be tossed out. GO AWAY.

I so love little Jamie. He will accept Charlie as his mother as she continues to ACT like she's his mother and not the person to give him everything he WANTS, but what he NEEDS.  He tickled me with the "mallow". He is adorable. I feel so bad for him.

This was a really good update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Hi BellaChica,

Thank you for this lovely review, but that 'thirsty ass' and 'piehole' comment had me choking on laughter. I sense you are not here for any of Vanessa's silliness! Jamie is a cutie pie and I do enjoy writing his character a lot. Glad you liked the update.

 

K. 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2016
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Same page? Ha! I doubt it. She doesn't seem to have learned anything. She's still trying to be the FUN parent. I wanted to throttle her in this chapter. I'm amazed at how Alec was able to handle it without going the F off, 'cause I was screaming at my screen. I hope she stops with the pity. You screwed up. Suck it up. It's draining trying to reassure her at every turn. Plus, Ols is still recuperating. How can they take on yet another stress inducing project. THINK, Charlie and stop trying to give the boys EVERYTHING that you THINK they WANT.

Really good update, Chica. Normal stuff causing realistic drama. Fantastic.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02 2016

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