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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


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Summary:

Cathy Sanova is a beautiful, intelligent African-American student who is finally a senior at Seneca State University. Her world is suddenly turned upside down when Brent Jaggers, the university's star quarterback, admit that he's in love with her and wants to be in a relationship. Brent is white, heart stopping gorgeous, rich, popular, and the exact opposite of Cathy's ideal man. She tries to fight her attraction towards him knowing it could never work out. After all, she's seen how wild he could get and what a playboy he was during their sophomore and junior year. But Brent swears he's a changed man because of his friendship with her and is determined to make her his. Along with Brent's shocking confession to her, she realizes her close friend, Lee Brinks, a sexy Native American musician also has the hots for her, and her ex boyfriend, Paul, a handsome African-American who she thought was her ideal, dream guy, wants her back.


Cathy decides to move on campus along with her cousin Kiara, to live for the first time and meets her two new roommates, Sierra and Lynette who quickly becomes her friends. However, her roommates also battle with their own problems which Cathy tries to help the best she can. Lynette is running from a dark past that's determine to catch up with her. Sierra finds her true love where she at least expects. Kiara falls in love with a young man who seems afraid to love. Will she be able to open his heart to her?


Although Cathy is the main character, this story isn't about just one person. Many secondary characters have a subplot. This story is about love, passion, learning to trust and true friendship.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:Yes
Word count: 151905
Read Count: 124495
Published: January 12 2011
Updated: July 30 2012


Title: Chapter 14: The Barbecue

And we thank you for your efforts.

Kiara is a trip. Her running was hilarious. But in the end, Chris got what he wanted. I'm liking Chris more and more. He does not back down. Stephan needs to back off. He had his chance. He needs to move on.

Brent, what can I say. How can Cathy stay off that? *growls*

Will Brent be able to stay away, only time will tell. His father gave him some very sage advice. Hopefully, he'll remember it when he gets frustrated when he can't be with Cathy. I feel for him. But he does have to abide by her wishes. This might make Cathy acknowledge what she really feels for him. She almost did.

Appreciate the update. It was splendid.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 03 2011

Title: Chapter 22: Kiara's Seduction

Why am I not surprised at Kiara's reaction? That chile is a trip. So now she thinks she's a sexual predator. This had me rolling. 

She's in for it. Chris is going to work her over. This should be fun.

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Date: August 18 2011

Title: Chapter 17: The Tie That Binds...

Go on Randall, school Miss Lynette. They way she finally let him be there for her was really nice. She'll need him when her past come a'knockin'

Dana, smh, that was totally not a smart idea to go with those guys. WTH was she thinking?

I likes a dangerous Brent. A LOT. At some point Cathy will see that side of him. Wonder how she'll react.

Enjoyed the update immensely.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 24 2011

Title: Chapter 5: New Beginnings

Really enjoying this story, Chica.

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Date: February 03 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Confession - Part Two

I don't think I've reviewed this, but I have been reading all along. I really enjoy this story.

Cathy is about to overthink herself out of the best thing that could happen to her. Hopefully, Brent will make her see the light.

Lyn and Randall, love them. He's what she needs, but will she let him love her? She's still so wounded that she might not. Really enjoying the updates, Chica.

Author's Response:

Hey you should review more I enjoy reading my reviews. LOL Yes, Cathy does tend to think too much on a subject. I loved your last comment. The question rings true, will she let him love her?

Thanks alot!  

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 23 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Fragile Relationships

Love Lynette and Randall. Lynetter is fighting a losing battle. Katrina is starting to get on my last nerve. So Brent was a tool back in school, she needs to let it go. Hope Cathy doesn't let others affect her budding relationship with Brent. Loving Sierra and Luke. Her brother needs to stay out of her bidness. Wonder what Luke will do when he sees her with other guys? Should be interesting.

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Date: March 26 2011

Title: Chapter 11: A Day In The Park

So, Cathy has some kind of physical ailment? Brent really knows how to seduce, doesn't he?

Your description was so vivid, I felt as if I was intruding on a very intimate moment. Very well written.

Brent is not about to give up, I hope Cathy eventually tells him what's going on with her.

loved how she dealt with Lynette.

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Date: March 30 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Losers

So, it's Cathy with the heart problem. She seems healthier than Kiara but is really just as fragile. Brent is going to have a fit when he finds out she's kept something so important away from him. He's going to become even more protective. I really like how he is with her.

Randall and Lynn, I like a lot. Randall really needs to get himself under control. He could get himself into some really deep trouble if he goes after her ex. And it wouldn't be worth it in the long run. He really loves him some Lynn. Wonder how long will she fight her feelings for him. Poor boy needs to be put out of his misery.

Kiara and Chris, too cute. Chris is a goner and has at least admitted it to himself and Brent. Brent has officially turned over Protector of Kiara's heart to Chris. Loved that unspoken exchange between them

Glad Tyrese is backing off a bit with Dana. She's become used to him acting like a little lap dog around her. This should be interesting.

Always look forward to an update of this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 15 2011

Title: Chapter 13: First Game

Cathy, Cathy, Cathy. This might get more complicated. Lee will be on her like Prince was on App....

 

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Date: April 28 2011

Title: Chapter 15: Breaking The Rules

I'm with Kiara. Totally stunned that Cathy is not giving being with Brent serious consideration. Maybe, it would be best if Brent found someone new. Alas, he's going to be hurt by what she's doing. I just hate to see him hurt and she's effectively lying by omission. Not good.

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Date: May 20 2011

Title: Chapter 16: The Secret

Kiara is a trip.



Author's Response:

She is, isn't she? LOL 

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Date: May 26 2011

Title: Chapter 25: Precious Ones

I swear Kiara is a trip. She is so funny. I enjoy reading about her. Chris really has his hands full. That fever seems to be the precursor to some bd times for Ki. I hope she comes out of it.

Look at the guys being all sensitive.



Author's Response:

Kiara is funny without even trying to be. LOL Yes, thank goodness she has a responsible boyfriend like him. They had their one and only sensitive moment in this chapter, seeing Lynette attacked like that affected them all and made them realize how precious their girlfriends were. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2011

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Summary:

Taylor found her at a hotel while he was on a business trip. She was in desperate need of help. He was in desperate need of an assistant. He thought he was doing a good deed by taking her in. He had no clue the woman who started out depending on him, would end up making him depend on her in more ways than one.  

Kaitlyn thought her life was finally over when he ex-boyfriend left her to defend for herself at a hotel.  Completely out of money and nearly starving, she realizes she would end up on the streets.  However, when a handsome man approaches her offering her a job and a new life, she finds herself "kept."

Despite Taylor being arrogant, demanding and a man use to getting his way, Kaitlyn falls in love with him. Can she get him to stop seeing her as his little pet and start seeing her as his soul mate? 

 

 

Kept is written by Katherine Madison. My story, please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 85624
Read Count: 242165
Published: January 21 2011
Updated: May 30 2012


Title: Chapter 15: Girls Night Out

Kaitlyn is going to fool around and get her butt kicked listening to Mia. Taylor is about to lose his damn mind.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26 2011

Title: Chapter 16: Taylor's Fury

"Wrong answer," Aidan told her.

Somehow, I think Aidan and Kale are about to "punish" Miss Mia.

The pull scene was quite comical.

And then we got down to real business. Taylor is spinning out of control. He doesn't know what to do with himself. What will he do next? Will he start to get a grip and be straight with her? Come on Taylor, you can do it. Don't let your fear do something else stupid.

I'm loving this story. Taylor is so Alpha. yum.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2011

Title: Chapter 2: The Stray Kitten

Kaitlyn has no idea how much of a take charge kind of guy Taylor is. She will be in for a rude awakening, I'm thinking. But something tells me she can give as good as she gets.

Hot damn, this looks to be a very entertaining read. btw, I likes the alpha businessman myself, yes I do. HA!!!

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Date: January 23 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Her New Home

I'm thinking Taylor is about to discover that any "ole port in the storm" won't do.  I also think he'll find reasons to dine with Kaitlyn. He's drawn to her in spite of all of his denial. That won't stop anytime soon and I'm loving it.

Ahhh, the description of San Francisco makes me miss it so much. Thanks for giving a little glimpse of home. *sigh*

So glad you updated, Chica. I've been checking the site hourly looking for an update. *yep, the stalker in me is coming out*



Author's Response: Thanks BellaChica, I will be sure to update regularly so your stalking won't go to waste. LOL!  Glad I could you give a glimpse of SF. There will be more descriptions to come. 

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Date: March 21 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Groomed

hmmm... so Taylor, how's banging some other woman to forget Anna working out for ya? hee

Wonder how they both will play this off. Jason just got an eye full.

I enjoyed this update immensely.



Author's Response: LOL!!! Loved the first comment. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 28 2011

Title: Chapter 6: The Kitten In The Window

My boy went from "it'll never happen again" to "it'll never happen again...without her permission". Yeah, just keep telling yourself you can stay away from Kaitlyn.

I'm glad he came right out and explained himself... well... as much as he was willing to... 'cause he left out some key parts. He seems the type to get really jerky when he wants something (or someone) and he can't have it. I don't think Taylor handles frustrations well. He'll prolly make a few pit stops at that chick's place to take the edge off.  But the sooner he acknowledges that Kaitlyn is under his skin, the better it'll be for his piece of mind.

I'm really liking the beginnings of K "friendship" with Richards. I think he likes her in spite of himself. Hope he sticks around for a while.

Don't want to put undue pressure on you, but I'm REALLY looking forward to your next update. Enjoying this a LOT.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 06 2011

Title: Chapter 10: SIZZ..LING

Taylor completely lost it, didn't he. DAMN

"Let's get something straight, Raine. Kaitlyn is mine. You will not speak to her, you will not touch her, and you definitely will not be trying to charm her into your bed like you did my first two assistants."

Taylor is very possessive.  MINE!!! Wonder what Kat will do when she marinates on all that he said to her?

Wonder if Raine will cease to come onto Kat. Or will he keep at since he knows that Taylor really likes her.

KM, I so missed this story. Loved the update. Just made me want more.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 03 2011

Title: Chapter 17: The Disgruntled Kitten

Ahh no she didn't! She broke out the slave voice. Kaitlyn had me rolling. Taylor is a moron. An arrogant one at that. Richard has more sense. Loved this chapter.

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Date: October 12 2011

Title: Chapter 25: Missing

oh shit. Taylor is about to  commit murder. And yeah, Ashley has lost her damn mind. But there won't be any place she can hide when Taylor finds them. This is scary and exciting. A pissed off Taylor is a turn on. I don't know how he's going to react once Kaitlyn is back with him. He might put her on permanent lockdown.  Can't wait till the boys get there and wonder if Mia is coming also.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 20 2012

Title: Chapter 19: Kept

Oh Taylor...I sigh along with Richard.



Author's Response:

I know, he'll get better...I hope. LOL

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 24 2011

Title: Chapter 20: Lust or Love?

Wow, Taylor did it up right, didn't he? I'm so proud of him. Kait's reaction was hilarious. Now, what will will be her answer? Is she willing to take the risk? Will she saddle him with her ex's baggage? Inquiring minds...

wonderful update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks Chica! hehe 

I'd like to know too, the characters are running the show here, I'm just writing down what they say. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2011

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Summary:

Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

Exceedingly Dope Banner by my homeskillet Valhalla.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 98771
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 16: Confrontation Part 2

umm...well..ummm...sooo...yeah

I take it she kinda likes Vlad. HA!

Bowie, yeah, it won't happen again, right... And if you believe that, I've got some swamp land in Arizona for sale.

She almost ripped him to shreds. I noticed that when she had sex with Joey, she was talking bout teaching him how to keep up with her. I don't think Vlad has that problem. There's something going on with Bowie in regards to that. I know she's a lustful individual, but there's something going on there. And there's no way in hell that Vlad will stop now. He's gotten a little taste of her and that has just whetted his appetite. Who will surrender first? This should be an interesting dance.

Why would she even think he should bite her? why? Something's afoot.

ITM, you blow me away. I enjoy ALL of your stories *including PWAHII, hint*

Author's Response: i know, i know! but my braiin is consumed by Farewell. i just can't seem to get into Penny's grove. though i do miss my DeLeon. lol

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2011

Title: Chapter 15: Confrontation Part 1

Now that's what I'm talking about!

Mila is not the one to mess with. I wish there was a way for her and Reid. The tension is high when those two are in the room together. And Mila is a real jealous woman. Reid plays her like a violin. I love him. I wish he would knck the hell out of Jan.

Vlad is about to lose his sh!t. Will he be able to control himself with Bowie looking so beautiful? I hope not. I really want to see him lose control.

I'm waiting for the next update tonight. YAY!!!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.