Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Summary:

Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

Exceedingly Dope Banner by my homeskillet Valhalla.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 98771
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 21: The Respect Issue Pt 1

Alexei best watch it. Vlad is way too calm. It's about to get real ugly for two vamps.

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Date: June 03 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Shifting Currents

just this... I WANT MORE.

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Date: February 28 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Hunter vs. Game

I just kicked myself in the butt [that was a real feat], can't believe I just got around to reading this very interesting story.

While Joey is all hot and fione [he may have a secret of the supernatural kind of his own, not sure], it is Vlad in all of his nasty, naughty, kinky,  and monstrous glory that has caught my attention.

It's clear that there's more to Bowie than meets the eye. She seems to be more than a match for Vlad. Now, as to whether she can handle Slutlana is another story.

Update soon.

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Date: February 26 2011

Title: Chapter 18: Denial Waits

Reid is so on the wrong track. Bowie needs to clear that up with him. He seems to be stronger than folks realize. He could get himself vanguished.

Bowie Fern is a trip. She and Vlad can't seem to be in the same room without humping each other. I ain't mad atcha. She's more than a mtach for him.

The slut might just lose her head over this latest stunt. Vlad is not a happy camper right now.

Glad you're as obsessed as I am; that means I'll get more updates. :)

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Date: March 09 2011

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Summary: Their choice of career doesn't leave much room for developing and maintaining a healthy relationship.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Welcome to Harlan County
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1197
Read Count: 2051
Published: February 11 2011
Updated: February 11 2011


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah, I like this short. well done

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Date: February 13 2011

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The Scar

 

The Scar on her face....could never match the one on her heart. 

 

Kick ass Banner by the great Valhalla!! 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 53873
Read Count: 68488
Published: February 14 2011
Updated: June 28 2017


Title: Chapter 5: Great Expectations

The physical scar has healed, but the scar on her soul is completely raw and festering. She has years of soul destroying experiences to work through. I hope she's able to do so.

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Date: February 24 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Of Mice and Men

Well, that jog Zach took did nothing for his ability to think rationally and come to a conclusion that makes sense. Boy, it must be tough for someone with ALL the answers.

I'm so glad Ralph took Emma to the support group. I hope she goes back. She really needs to get some help before she encounters Jeremy again. I must say, your previous chapters gave a very disturbing but accurate portrayal of what happened to Emma makes this chapter that much more intense and satisfying. We now have a solid foundation to see why Emma is where she is and the journey she must take to get to who she should be. Well done.

Hope Luna's going to be OK. She has more milkshake bringing to be done.

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Date: March 13 2011

Title: Chapter 3: The Bluest Eye

That was deep and disturbing. I hope she gets away from that monster and soon.

brillant.

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Date: February 15 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Emma

Damnnn, it's hard to watch the killing of a child's spirit. I so hope that Emma gets away from Jeremy. She really has no one, does she? I've read that a child wants a parent who when the parent sees them, their eyes light up. Poor Emma has no such experience. WTH caused that "mother" of hers to treat her so harshly?

Happy, no complaints here. This is starting off with a bang. I'm along for the ride. This first chapter caused me to want to hit someone or make that 3 someones.

It brings back some not so nice memories.

Good job, Chica.

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Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Pride and Prejudice

Zach is a simpleton. He has not learned that you get all of the facts before you make a judgement. What is he, twelve? *no offense to 12-year olds*

He doesn't seem to have any gut instincts because he bought that abuser's tall tale, hook, line, and sinker.

I think he's so ready to believe the worst about Emma because he's pissed at himself for wanting her so much. However, that's no excuse. Doesn't he know what kind of man his Uncle is? His suspicions are not only an insult to Emma but to his Uncle. What...a...moron.

I fear Zach will, however unwittingly, cause much harm and danger to Emma. And he should feel extremely guilty when he realizes his mistakes. Hope he learns from this, but so far, I don't see him as a man who reflects deeply about much of anything. Yeah, I'm really pissed at him right now.

I'm of two minds about Emma deciding that Zach should not be told about her troubles with her abuser. On the one hand, it could prevent some really bad things later on, but with the way he's currently acting, he probably wouldn't believe her anyway. Why is it so hard for him to give her the benefit of the doubt and he seemed to accept everything that guy she was married to without question? Does he have to make her the villain to allay his desires for her?

On a lighter note, look at Miss Luna, dropping it like it's hot, or least knowing how to drop it like it's hot.  That woman is a real character. hee

This was a very good chapter, Chica. Much appreciated.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 05 2011

Title: Chapter 10: Black Like Me

Zach has a scar, it's just not physical. Glad there is someone that he actually listens to. His sister is really a sweet kid. I really like her. I hope she and Emma become friends. If Emma gets the surgery, she still needs the group. The surgeon might be able to get rid of or diminish the scar on her face, but it'll take much more to get rid of the scar on her soul. But she's stronger than she thinks as evidenced by her ripping Zach a new one.

Very good update, Chica.

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Date: April 06 2011

Title: Chapter 9: The Devil Wears Prada

Yes, Zach, you have been a fool all along.

Zach has let his "mother" color how he sees and deals with women. So glad Emma gave him some home truths. Good for her. 

Jeremy has continued with his ability to break a woman down. Too bad Polly doesn't have enough self-esteem to kick his ass. Hope by the time he tracks down Emma, she's ready for his abusive behind.

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Date: March 29 2011

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Summary:

eric northman and tara thorton... 

Banner by Cynn333 "I follow the road at night, just hoping to find which puzzle piece fell out of me. I know who you are, open the door & come in. Hold me real close, then do it again, I ache for the touch of my dead end friend."Hate. It's strong enough to burn us and maim us. Is it strong enough to get us to love without limits and without reason. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 44210
Read Count: 43714
Published: March 11 2011
Updated: May 26 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Torture Me

Eric's bound to know she's let another man touch her. This should be interesting.

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Date: March 15 2011

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Summary:

Hearing- to have the capacity of apprehending sound.

Deaf- partially or wholly lacking or deprived of the sense of hearing; unable to hear.

Angela is an accountant who falls in love with Patrick, a Deaf man who lives in her apartment. Can they find love together even if they are different?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 10692
Read Count: 14348
Published: March 17 2011
Updated: July 27 2012


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

progress and boy what progress!!! Patrick got skills! I hope this works out. I like those two together.

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Date: April 16 2011

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Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78093
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Déjà vu

I'm looking forward to your delving into their relationship. This first chapter was a real attention grabber. It seems Molli is more forthright when she's partaken of the bubbly. Can't wait to see if she'll admit what she feels for him and if he'll admit what he feels for her. This is a sticky wicket with the him being with fiancee.

You know by now that I think you're a prolific writer, but it bears repeating. I'm always happy when you post.



Author's Response: thanks, Bella! glad you're enjoying it and my writing in general!

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Date: March 27 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Maybe Not

so glad you're back.  missed this one.

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Date: May 26 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Limit to Your Love

Aunt Mae and Fluffy... *wipes tears from my eyes*

Cooper? got with Amber? Really? DAMN...

This is a mess all around. Poor Molli... Something's going on. 

I really enjoyed this chapter. I was laughing so hard but then at the end, I felt bad for Molli. Hope Simon follows through and breaks off the engagement.

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Date: April 05 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Lay in My Bed

Wow! That was intense. They're making up for lost time. I'm exhausted just from reading it. hee

And yep, babies are being made in that house. And yet, Molli will prolly be surprised when it happens. It'll be interesting to see how they both handle "reality".

Wonder if Cooper's "secret" has something to do with the business? Aunt Mae really needs to let Molli know what's going on with her.

Really, really well written chapter, Chica.

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Date: April 01 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes!

Chapter 3. Oops Upside... I must say that I really like Aunt Mae. She's a real broad. *and that's a compliment*  And Copoer really creases me up. He and Mae are a 1-2 punch. Cooper tells Simon the real deal as does Mae tell Molli.

Chapter 4. Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes. Wow! *wipes drool from face and picks jaw up from the floor* Finally, some forward action on their part. Bu, there's still the pesky business of a fiancee. What will Simon do about that. You know there is no way he'll leave Molli alone now. Very good update, IT.

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Date: March 30 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Keep Holding On

Not sure it was your intent to make Cooper a sympathetic character, but that's what he is for me. I really hope he and Simon can reconcile. He really needs Simon.



Author's Response:

it most certainly was my intent. no person is black and white, so i'm glad i was able to convey that with Cooper. he's a complicated and deeply hurt man. thank you so much for seeing just a little bit more of him.

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Date: November 24 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Bad Medicine

ahem... Cooper's going to get his own story. *falls over in a dead faint*

ITmouse, you always bring it. I'm obsessed with Cooper. And his sexing Amber makes me want to throttle him. But I just can't bring myself to do it. It just shows how badly he needs some good and true loving and not just sex, but someone who cares about HIM as a person.

Well done, Chica.

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Date: February 06 2012

Title: Chapter 18: Try a Little Tenderness

I'm loving this. Simon makes me laugh. And his reaction to the Doc is hilar. And now he's cold cocked Simon.  Dude better get a grip. Great updates, Chica.

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Date: June 07 2016

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Summary:

 

You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 79091
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Lunch Time Disasters

I must say Jeremy is mighty fine. And Bree needs some love. hmmmm

The phone conversation was cute.

Stacecy sounds pretty vacuous. But then she's still very young... I think Justin will continue to compare the two and Stacey will prolly come out on the short end of the stick, so to speack. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review... Jermemy is fine I agree and yes there might be somehting in the works for them two not sure yet they havent really said but who knows I let mycharacters speack to me and I write what they have to say... Glad you like the phone convo I liked it to it was one of those that left me sighing.... Somebody will stick it to the stick. 

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Date: June 04 2011

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Yep Justin, you just f!cked up big times. Jalena needs to stay away from him until he gets himself untangled from that she-wolf.



Author's Response:

ha ha Justin is in some deep sh*t so well just have to see how he redeems himself..

Thank you so much for rating and reviewing.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 15 2011

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Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 83581
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 7: Roku (6)

Hold on Sara. Mama is on the way. Percy might have to stomp a knot in that she-devil's behind.

Sara, Sara, Sara. You need to explore other options when it comes to men.

I son't trust Yuki's mother. That turnabout seems contrived to get her what she wants; which is total control of Shouda.



Author's Response:

We shall see! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 01 2011

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