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The past never leaves. It's all in how you deal with it that determines how well you move on . . .

 

Vera Cooke thought she'd moved on, thought she'd buried her past well enough to get married and have a son and enjoy the life she'd been wanting.

 

But the past has a way of creeping back up. For Vera, it erupts disturbingly, violently, forcing truths to be revealed and a demanding need for revenge too hard to ignore.

 

Dope Banner by Elizablu



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9367
Read Count: 12175
Published: May 22 2016
Updated: May 24 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm glad you are back.  I have missed your stories.  This short was fantastic.  I would like an epilogue or a continuation because there are still some unanswered questions.  What happened to Nicky"s mother and from the story it is implied that they have a bad relationship.  Though Cyrus accepted Nicky, what does he really think of him and Adriano? And what happened to Anthony Rotolo and Samuel Bosci for killing William and taking their life savings; will Vera get revenge on them as well?  I can't wait for your next story.

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Date: May 25 2016

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Summary:

For a sociopath who killed his step father Jackson "Jack" Ford has a heart of gold despite his tough and cold exterior. However fellow paitent Aaliyah "Al" Nelson diagonosed as a schizophrenic has a heart of glass that's been shattered too many times to count.




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19024
Read Count: 48290
Published: September 12 2016
Updated: January 20 2018


Title: Chapter 8: EIGHT

I am glad they broke out of that facility and his mom is supportive.  That place was toxic for Al and they were too scared of her to help her and wanted to hide that the guard raped her. I hope that place gets its comeuppance.

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Date: January 21 2018

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Summary:

The Universe has a funny/morbid way of completely turning your life around.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 92790
Read Count: 32398
Published: December 29 2016
Updated: June 21 2017


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I don't like how Clark is presuming to know what is best for Dena.  He never asked where her insecurity comes from he assumes that its because of him.  That's egotistical and condescending of him.  Using her issues as a reason to end their friendship is the easy way out.  She is going to a therapist to address her issues.  Maybe he needs to go to a therapist for his.  I agree that they both need to be apart to work their issues out, but it should be a mutual discussion and not a decree based on his observations which is how this meeting turned out.  I don't like Gabriel because he has stalker tendencies, but now I'm starting not to like Clark.

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Date: February 05 2017

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I was impressed as well.  I am glad that she has taken this step forward with her parents.  Her parents' neglect was a huge part in how Dena saw herself and to come to peace with their behavior and not use that as the basis of her actions is a big step. On to the next! 

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Date: February 22 2017

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm excited!! I want to know what really went down. Tammy is an absolutely horrible person. She is indiscriminate with her hatred of everything and everyone beneath her. I want her to get her comeuppance soon. No one should have to deal with someone that vile.

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Date: March 25 2017

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am sorry that you are going through this difficult time. I hope that you will get better soon and I will keep you in my prayers.

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Date: March 25 2017

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think that Dena meeting her mom was everything!!!  I am glad that they were able to reconnect and start to form a true relationship.  I wish her Dad was an authentic person.  He lives in the shadows with his lies because he doesn't know how to be real with himself; until he learns how to be honest with himself, he cannot leave Tammy or really have a meaningful connection with anyone.  His daughters may never talk to him again and unfortunately that is the bed he made for himself from the covers of his lies and passivity.

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Date: April 23 2017

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I do think Maya needs to seek professional help that is neutral to the situation because she is not fully in the right mind to make these kind of decisions.  If your parents who knew about your abuse, but did nothing is now all so willing to help, you have to be suspicious about it.  It is obvious to me that Maya's husband gave them some incentive for her to be used and abused and offered them some more to get her back.  Because what do or did the parents do for a living? Where do they get their money? She's going to end up in the same situation as before or end up dead. I just don't want anything to happen to Omari or find a way for Dena and Clark to adopt him or something.

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Date: April 27 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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"I’m a reasonable man. I came here, knowing you wouldn’t be able to pay the debt.”

”Then what do you want?”

“You’ve two choices, piccolina. Honour the deal and come with me or I’ll settle the debt. Right here. In blood."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Smoking Guns & Black Roses - A Mafia Series
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 2118
Read Count: 6986
Published: January 07 2017
Updated: February 05 2017


Title: Chapter 4: The Monster Known as Cicero (2)

He is going to try to marry her...

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Date: February 07 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Twenty-seven year-old Layla Jones made a promise to Dominic Slater ten years ago that she intended to keep. But the night her Step-Father took her innocence was the night she knew she could never keep that promise. Besides, why would Dominic want her if he knew what had been done. So she did the only thing she could do to protect him from that. She ran away and never looked back.

Dominic Slater never forgotten about Layla. In fact, she haunts his dreams and even more so took a piece of him that he could never reclaim without her. So when she comes back into his life, he won't let whatever hurt in the past pull them apart again. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 48063
Read Count: 20916
Published: January 08 2017
Updated: May 09 2017


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh no...Xavier is back!!

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Date: May 09 2017

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Oh goodness...Dominic is in trouble and he needs to listen to Oliver about Layla. If he still feels the same way about Layla after he hears her out the next day and even if he does not get with her, he still needs to break up with Nicole because they would be miserable together knowing he is in love with someone else. He would always hold back with Nicole because of his love for Layla.

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Date: January 19 2017

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I feel bad for Nicole, but she's not oblivious, she knew something was wrong and needed to get out of that situation and be able to find someone who loves her as much as Dominic and Layla love each other.  I just do not want her to find out that Dominic is leaving her for Layla because the way she talked about that coworker of Dominic's means that the woman who he left Nicole for is going to feel her scorn as well.  I love how Stone is defending Layla and threatening Dominic because she needs someone in her corner that does not see her from a past perspective, who has seen her at her worst and knows the triggers of an addict, but is able to hold Layla accountable to her sobriety.



Author's Response:

Dcphoenix1, 

You are spot on with Nicole and how the story is following so far.  I hope you can continue to enjoy it as there's so much more to come. 

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Date: January 25 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Laura and Riley have been best friends since childhood. They also were one another’s first love. Now they’re best friends. But can that work between two people who used to be in love with each other?




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 36370
Read Count: 1828
Published: January 10 2017
Updated: March 08 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Friendship between a boy and girl

This was such a great chapter.  So real.  It made you know what was going on in Riley and Laura's heads.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: January 10 2017

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Summary:

The typical bag of sugar experiment in 11th Grade made Aurora "Rory" Campbell realize that she liked her friend Sean Sullivan as more than just a friend. (Working Summary)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 17139
Read Count: 32500
Published: February 05 2017
Updated: November 19 2017


Title: Chapter 3: SEPTEMBER 1992: PICTURE DAY

If you are seeing him as black then that's who he should be.

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Date: February 18 2017

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Summary:

Natalia loves children, and she loves being a nanny. After being fired from her job, she goes in search for a new nanny job. That's when she meets Jesse Stone, the badass rockstar and his sweet daughter Sydney. Jesse makes her job harder by being an asshole, but she loves being there for Sydney. Will Natalia push through and keep being a nanny to Sydney or will she leave, causng Sydney...and Jesse to miss her?



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 14256
Read Count: 15248
Published: April 04 2017
Updated: July 14 2017


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I like Lacey.  I hope she figures herself out and find what she is looking for.

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Date: April 09 2017

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I don't like how his boys just up and kicked him out of the band.  This is their first time seeing him after rehab and they just up and kicked him out?  This coup was planned.  If he was still strung out they would have said he was too out of it to be in charge, but now he's serious about getting himself together, he's too boring.  He and Xavier need to start their own thing and leave the other three to fail and be high together.

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Date: July 14 2017

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Summary:

 

Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.     




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 36570
Read Count: 15092
Published: July 15 2017
Updated: September 30 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Love Is Definitely In the Air

I really like this.  Johnny should talk to his brothers about his feelings for Raeann so they can help him boost his confidence.  If going on a date with Raeann is what he wants, he should go for it.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoy this story. You are so right about Johnny, you'll just have to wait and see how this plays out. ;)

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Date: July 16 2017

Title: Chapter 3: No Regrets, No More Subtlety

Poor Jonathan, Raeann scared the hell out of him.  Raeann just hit him in the face with the truth and he has to figure out what to do about it. 



Author's Response:

HA! She didn't warn him or nothing. 

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Date: July 23 2017

Title: Chapter 4: He Is Not Himself

Yay!!  I am so happy Johnny and Raeann revealed their feelings.  I want certain aspects of Johnny's concussion (like him not being as self conscious and hesitant) to remain with him because confidence is sexy and obviously Raeann responded to that side of him. Lucy is a trip and is going to tease them forever.  I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

After that bump on the head Johnny is definitely going to show signs of 'something'. I want to keep him 'Johnny' as much as possible but this time around he will grow a lot more than he did in the previous versions so stick around. ;) & I love Lucy! She is so much fun to write! 

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Date: August 04 2017

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Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 283512
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 9: Sweet Talk

I love how Chef is so into Sugar and because she doesn't know how to react, she keeps running. I can't wait until he catches her. I want next chapter to be about her date. Her sisters grilling her about Chef can wait until later. Or she can talk to her twin and get his thoughts. 



Author's Response:

I think I will definitely do the Friday date and the girls' outing will come after. I'm holding onto Sully finding out because he has to be the last one to know. 

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Date: August 06 2017

Title: Chapter 10: Hot Affair

Thank you for the update! I look forward to the next one!! Good luck with your first day of school!! My mother is a teacher so I know how unsettling it can be for the first few weeks while you and the students are getting took know each other. With this shady co-worker on top of everything else, keep an eye out for her. 



Author's Response:

Hopefully, I will be able to update at the end of this week! :) Thank you for your kind words!

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Date: August 13 2017

Title: Chapter 24: Rotten Intentions

Miles' parents are terrible people. Holding this secret over Miles is killing him and its just not him involved. Alicia's mother also deserves closure. Rene's pettiness is selfish.

Miles' mother is no better, but she hides it better than the father. She is fake and acts like she was mother of the year, but his grandparents raised him. Where was she? Where was the father? Sugar needs to be careful around these two.



Author's Response:

It's sad a lot of people have a similar childhood like Miles.

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Date: July 05 2018

Title: Chapter 30: Lemony Loss

Sugar doesn't know how to love herself and also doesn't believe that she deserves to be happy.  I really hope that she learns how to get out of her own way and accept that she is great the way she is, is loved the way she is and the actions of others is not her fault.

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Date: April 22 2019

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Summary:

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 116940
Read Count: 30643
Published: July 20 2017
Updated: November 21 2017


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Love is in the Air

LOL... its caking

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Date: September 28 2017

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Forever With You

Awww...that was nice.

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Date: November 22 2017

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.