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[Reviews - 105]
Summary:

 

Emmeline Carson always had a crush on Jason Bryant, but feelings would eventually change, when she became involved with his best friend. When her heart is broken, she swore off anyone who had ties to her ex—including Jason. Yet, a chance meeting leads to an embroiled love affair that is kept secret and locked away inside each other’s respective bedrooms. And although Jason and Emmeline have their own secrets, they will soon find out they aren’t the only ones.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 68022
Read Count: 13206
Published: September 08 2017
Updated: April 16 2021


Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

I like this. I can't wait for the next update!!

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Date: September 08 2017

Title: Chapter 4: The First Secret

Jason should punch Brendan in the face because his behavior has been that of an obsessed psycho  stalker "If I can't have her, you can't either" But, this also makes you wonder that even though Michael cheated on Emmeline with Alyssa, did Brendan do anything to break up their marriage or make their affair more visible? While it was a good thing to expose Michael, he had ulterior motives. 

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Date: July 09 2018

Title: Chapter 5: A Shattered Moment

Hmm...so Emily stalked Jason and is mad because she didn't like that he has moved on after their divorce. Emily does not seem to like and is jealous of Emmeline. I wonder why they divorced in the first place because Emily looks like she wishes that they were still together and even Jason seems to have some thoughts about hooking up with Emily so I am curious about this divorce.

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Date: July 11 2018

Title: Chapter 7: Reunion

I'm sorry, how dare Michael attack Jason for dating Emmeline when he cheated on her with Alyssa throughout their relationship and would have continued to do so if she didn't catch him on their wedding day. Michael is an asshole and a hypocrite. And now, I'm more sure than ever that Emily is the one who threw that brick because Michael seems surprised that Jason showed up with Emmeline. Brendan is a stalker and creep. I wonder what Joel thinks of the whole thing.

I hope that Emmeline does not use Ms. Chambers' cautionary tale as a way to keep her from getting close to Jason. JJ sounds like one of Brendan's ancestors. With the past trying to intrude on their new relationship, Emmeline and Jason want to be with each other and I hope they don't listen to the naysayers and those who would gain by them not being together.

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Date: July 23 2018

Title: Chapter 8: Hidden and Revealed

I don't like how Jason's people are blaming Emmeline for everything that is going badly between them.  First of all, Jason and Emily are divorced and she is so jealous of Emmeline that she wants to break them up, but even if they broke up, would he come back to her?  I think he would hook up with her a few times, but he wouldn't marry her again. I get it; divorce is complicated and it seems that Emily has suffered through more of the fallout, but maybe she needs to see a therapist. 

But, it also seems like she hooked up with Brendan years ago while with Jason and that she secretly resented Emmeline all of this time.  Why look for something bad on Emmeline?  Emily and the pit crew and their people are the ones who hurt Emmeline all of those years ago.  Why blame her for your problems?

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Date: August 22 2018

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Escape

I am so glad this story was updated! I am glad that people are starting to see that Jason's friends except Joel are crazy.

Emily needs to let Jason go and move on; she is needy and acting like they broke up the week before when its been almost two years. She is also acting like she didn't cheat on Jason all of those years ago at the lake house with Brendan and her butterfly tattoo. Maybe she has been hooking up with Brendan all along. 

I do feel bad for Alyssa, but how you get someone is also how you lose them. What did she expect? Michael cheated on Emmeline to get with her and she expected fidelity? I just hope that all of the secrets come out soon.

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Date: September 08 2019

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Summary:

Bumping into an old childhood friend might be exactly what Caitlyn needs, and Duncan Everston can still make her smile. Can an unexpected lunch turn into more? Or should the past remain exactly that...



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19677
Read Count: 2882
Published: October 09 2017
Updated: November 13 2017


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like this and can't wait for your next update.  Caitlyn and Duncan are so cute and Candace is a good friend whose thoughts on rejuvenation I agree with.  

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Date: October 14 2017

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Summary:

Leviticus 20:21 states "And if a man shall take his brother's wife, it is an unclean thing: he hath uncovered his brother's nakednes; they shall be childless" Are circumstances different if said brother was a complete bastard? Let's explore what that verse really means.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 8565
Read Count: 1629
Published: October 23 2017
Updated: May 06 2018


Title: Chapter 1: THE BASTARD'S FUNERAL

I like this.  Griffin's parents and his brother's mistress/fiancee are ridiculous.  I hope that they get their comeuppance.

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Date: October 24 2017

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Summary:

Daphne Gregory is on the run. She's looking for a place to lay low until things calm down back home. When she lands in Oklahoma, the last thing she expects to find is a friend in resident playboy Landon Phelps.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 53311
Read Count: 20693
Published: November 15 2017
Updated: October 03 2019


Title: Chapter 19: August 2011: Wedding Preparations

I love them.  

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Date: October 05 2018

Title: Chapter 24: October 2011: The Dinner Party

Well...I like that Landon isn't standing for Christi's bs and hopes that everything goes back to normal soon for them.

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Date: June 17 2019

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Summary:

The Mamba is one of the deadliest snakes in the world. It's fast, lethally venomous, and when threatened, highly aggressive. Despite its toxicity, the venom has healing properties. Can Omari's bite heal all wounds? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:Yes
Word count: 98818
Read Count: 15771
Published: February 09 2018
Updated: December 30 2019


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I still think Atsuko is a terrible person and that Omari needs to tell Clark or Dena what's going on. 

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Date: March 07 2018

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

He needs to deal with Atsuko and get out of that business so he could come back, woo Cory and spend time with Noah.  He can't have is cake and eat it too.  He needs to make some concrete decisons about what exactly he wants in his life and how he's going to achieve those goals and not lose himself in the process.

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Date: March 20 2018

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Either way is fine.

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Date: April 14 2018

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Atsuko deserves everything that she is about to get!!

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Date: April 25 2018

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Summary:

Juan couldn't live with the thought of another broken relationship, and after failing miserably upon his first attempt at love with Blue Raven, he was gun shy with his heart. Never did he anticipate falling in love again and especially not with the beautiful, supermodel sister of Kit Stone: Kat Ambre Stone. He recognized her as a force to be reckoned with, admitting that his resistance never stood a chance. But when her modeling agency transfers her to Europe on a five year contract, he does something that he would soon regret: he watched her go.  Vowing to release her, Juan is in for a surprise upon her unexpected return. This time, however, he's playing for keeps and Kat has no objections to that.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 59455
Read Count: 8182
Published: February 10 2018
Updated: October 22 2018


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Family Reunion

Uh oh!! She's back...

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Date: February 14 2018

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Trouble in Paradise

Good for them. Rico is a dick.

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Date: March 08 2018

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Little Interruption Won't Hurt

Kat needs to watch out for that Tommy man. He seems obsessed with her. I wouldn't be surprised if he found out about that shoot just to follow her.



Author's Response:

I love your comment, but I want you to be surprised ;)

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Date: October 11 2018

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Summary:



Princess Seras of Arcadia was born a princess with the heart of a Prince. Raised to be as strong as iron and delicate as lace.  Words her mother demaned she live her life by, these words were at times her only comfort.  Now the princess will have to face her future and whatever that lies ahead. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 31183
Read Count: 5443
Published: April 20 2018
Updated: December 03 2021


Title: Chapter 2: 5 Years Later......

I really am glad that this book is back.  I like Seras and want her to win especially against these intimidated men.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I realized that the first time around had a alot of mistakes.  Hope everyone likes it and reviews.

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Date: April 23 2018

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Summary:

All Jace McCoy wants to do if marry his best friend Ester Daniels but everyone from the mailman to the man on the corner that like to yell about end times.  Will these lovebirds be able to walk down  isle without everyone driving them crazy.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 15740
Read Count: 2511
Published: May 20 2018
Updated: May 09 2019


Title: Chapter 2: Stranger Things

LOL! Jace was jealous and shy about his crush on Ester. It was cute and funny that he ran away from her after he kissed her. 

I am also glad that Jace checked that Madison girl. In many of the cases I see and know, the girl is always the one checking the other one on her relationship; I am glad that Jace clearly let this Madison girl know that he is not interested and that she's a crazy and delusional stalker. 

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Date: June 10 2018

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Summary:

Truck never expected to get a visit from Wynne, his  estranged wife of two years. Wynne harbors some secrets of her own. Will they let go of the past, live in the present, and hope for the future? "I came back, I came back for you!" Wynne shouted teeth bared eyes wide.  He didn't move, stood like a mountain before her, his eyes cold and hard. "I never asked you to."



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2998
Read Count: 672
Published: May 23 2018
Updated: May 23 2018


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm curious about Wynne and why all these people are in shock to see her.



Author's Response:

Hey dcphoenix1 ! 

Thank you for reading! Everything will be revealed in time! Thanks for the review! 

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Date: May 28 2018

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Keyshia and Jason Jameson's eventful life continues in this tale that features their offspring. Sit back and enjoy the ride!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 8265
Read Count: 5327
Published: November 14 2018
Updated: December 02 2018


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Keyshia has to figure out some things for herself.  She did not want to be famous, but this is ridiculous.  She is Jason's wife and as such, she needs to realize that he didn't ask to be famous and it doesn't have to be a big deal; she can still raise Sydney without money being such a huge influence; look at how Jason turned out; he has money, but he was still a nice guy, ethical and moral.  I hope that they get back together and that she talks to someone about her insecurities.

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Date: November 26 2018

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Common sense would have told twenty-seven-year-old Pressley Hamilton that jumping from one relationship into another isn’t the smartest idea. But what is common sense in comparison, to Ryan Morris’s smooth talk, hot body, and unyielding desire to make Pressley his?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4600
Read Count: 6021
Published: December 21 2018
Updated: June 13 2019


Title: Chapter 3: two

Congratulations!! I hope everything works out for you! I really like the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: June 17 2019

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Summary:

When a struggling plus-size actress gets a callback for a major supporting role in a legendary director's indie film, she was absolutely ecstastic. Told that the lead will be acted by an A-lister, she didn't think it would be Nick Bryant until she arrived at her second audition. It's been nearly nine years since she's seen him. Nearly nine years since she's had his son and didn't tell him about it.

Things are about to go off-script real quick.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 62771
Read Count: 84036
Published: December 22 2018
Updated: July 06 2021


Title: Chapter 9: Take 9: Tearjerker

Why did you do this to me Missus James??? This story is so good. Desiree needs therapy just as much as Nick does.  She has unresolved issues from her mother and her father as well as her self esteem and abandonment issues.

I like Nick, but he also has to resolve his issues as well. They need therapy separately as well as together. I want Desiree and Nick together as a strong unit; for that to happen, I hope they resolve all of these issues before females like Naomi try to get in the middle of their relationship.



Author's Response:

Desiree and Nick have a long way to go. Naomi is an obstacle to be overcomed. 

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Date: January 03 2019

Title: Chapter 13: Take 13: Climax

This chapter was fire!! Nick is not playing games with Tallulah or the people. Tally needs to be more confident in herself and in Nick.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed this update. Nick is going to knock some sense into Tally in the next chapter about that confidence and he's going to show the world he ain't playing games when it comes to his woman. 😜

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Date: April 26 2020

Title: Chapter 16: Take 16: Pornographic

I am glad that your writing routine is working for you!! This chapter was so good. I really like Nick; all he cares about are his little family and if they are not good, then he's not good.



Author's Response:

I am totally in love with this new writing routine. I used to wait for my muse to hit me and I realized that was detrimental to my growth as a writer. So, I force myself to write at least 1K per day no matter what. It has truly changed how I write. 

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Date: May 07 2020

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