Penname: MissCO [Contact]

Real name: Kendra

Member Since: August 16 2010

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[Reviews - 276]
Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 50618
Published: March 29 2011
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Hell naw she aint lucky!!!!

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Whoa!!!!!  This is turning out to be a good read. I'm a little scared for Charly though. I have to admit though that it is rather unbelievable that she didnt have her phone in the club.

 

A side note: You tend to repeat phrases/words multiple times within a sentence.That along with the occasional left out word or letter is something to look into. I think correcting these few things may improve the flow of the story.



Author's Response: Thanks you. I appreciate the contructive criticism that will help me grow as a writer. It's much appreciated.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 01 2011

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[Reviews - 373]
Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 167679
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 4: San (3)

wow this is a really exceptional story. the first chapter was a little confusing at first but then i remembered that she was having random memories. I really hope that the relationship between Koura and Sara becomes a strong friendship. I cant wait for the next up date keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm sorry about the first chapter. I tend to jump around anyway. Please forgive me.

Thank you for taking a look! :)

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Yon (4)

I think Kamir will be good for Sara. I am really excited and this new addition just added more longgevity and intrigue to the story



Author's Response:

Thank you! Kamir, we don't know much about him though. We'll see.

:)

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2011

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Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24537
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Four

Thanks for the update!! There was way too much of that psycho Harvey though. How are you going to get rid of that freak? 

Reviewer: MissCO Signed
Date: May 06 2016

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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

stories/2209/images/To_Love_the_Devil__copy_Fotor2.jpg

 

 

Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113808
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Miss Independent

Great story! I love the plot and the characters so far are amazing. However your been tense is everywhere and words are being misused. Please don't ever stop writing but consider an editor.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed
Date: May 01 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 140]
Summary:

Kalila is the Guardian or so she is told…whatever that means she's not sure. All she really knows is that it involves a key and the destruction of the world.

Days before her 20th birthday she meets her father and his two best friends. Now her once boring life has become a roller-coaster of mystery, intrigue and romance. It’s nice to finally have a father but what are the feelings she holds for he father's friends Marcus and Caine? Will they live long enough to find out?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: End of the World, repent!
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23156
Read Count: 9549
Published: May 04 2013
Updated: January 16 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8- Nothing is as it seems

Great story I can't wait for the updAte. There are some mistakes throughout that may need the help of an editor. Otherwise it looks like things are about to get good.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2014

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A story how even though you think you have your life planned out, cupid's arrow will hit you when you least expect it. Chris and Kat both attend Tulane University. This is Chris last year and after graduation he's leaving town. But, what happens when a beautiful African American woman catches his eye?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 55615
Read Count: 158879
Published: March 01 2014
Updated: August 20 2014


Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This was such an awesome story!!! I'm so glad everything turned out well and do hope you revisit these characters again in another story aside from Chase's



Author's Response:

MissCo it's not over yet. Working on the next chapter right now. I hope you come back to visit. Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14 2014

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Man you do not understand how excited I was to see the update!!!!! I was so happy and surprised I didn't know what to do with myself; especially since I just finished this story like two days ago because I was lost in chapter one of Chase's story. It looks like Anisyon is going to be trouble. The tables may turn, causing Kat to fight. Great update as always and keep up the good work. I also wanted to say how much I appreciate and admire how you reply to every review, thank you 😄 



Author's Response:

I soo happy I'm made you that excited! I've gotten like that over other author's updates so I understand and it's an honor to be able to elicit that reaction. I think you're right, Anniston's part is not over yet. Hopefully Chris and Kat can handle what's to come. Thank you for your kind words. I respond to everyones reviews because I appreciate anyone who takes the time not only to read a story I created but also write a comment about it. The chamber has provided a place where I can share a story and have people actually read it, that's enough for me. I have no desire to be published. Just having ya'll read and give me some awesome reviews is worth it, so THANK YOU!!!!

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20 2014

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Summary:

What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 26191
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am so in love with this story. I live the way your shaping the characters. I am also excited to see more background on why Brandon is the black sheep of the family. Thanks and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 10 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wait so Quen knew all this time? What is the story with these two? How did the meet and get engaged so quick?

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Date: April 12 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OM THAT SEX SCENE!! That's about all I can remember really sorry. It was a great chapter, thanks.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Na it's good to know that Brandon isn't just using Kerri to get back at his family. He may have been A black sheep for 18 years but at least it wasn't because he was setting g fires or some crazy mess like that. I'm happy for Kerri and hope Mark doesn't ruin it. 

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Date: April 12 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Cute and fast paced ending. I really lived this story. In future ones you may wat to watch your verb tense. That is just my two cents though. Thank you and keep up the great work

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 13 2014

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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Why aren't more of the talented authors from Valentchamber receiving the accolades they so richly deserve? The answer is simpler than you can ever imagine.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 941
Read Count: 2551
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Your Voices Should Be Heard.

I really appreciate you bringing this to my attention. I never really thought about how much my little two cents impacted the authors. From now on I will be more diligent in leaving comments whenever I read free or for profit material. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I was inspired by some of my favorite black hair vloggers on Youtube, who sort of pulled back the curtain and let us in on the game. I click like so often now, that it's automatic, because I want those people to get credit for everything they do. I hope this is the beginning of something special, where all of us can make a difference.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

'When sirens sing they bring war...'

 

Khadijah has never had a normal life, not that she really minded. Working as an agent for Chamber 6 and living the life that came with it had it's perks. One of them being that she had access to all the free bacon she could eat. Another was being fully aware of the supernatural world that surrounded her. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3156
Read Count: 5632
Published: April 23 2014
Updated: September 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The Sirens Have Awakened

Nice start. I am excited to read more. I am A ok with the dashes

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 25 2014

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Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54434
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Thanks for the update. I hope school is going well for you 

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstar
Date: September 01 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Omg what a gem this is!!! I loved this story from the beginning but this unexpected twist has me hooked!!! Please update soon

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Date: August 13 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Lol big smut but good smut. Thank you for the update 

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 15 2014

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Summary:

Chase James is Chris' older brother from Making It Hard For Me. Chase recently filed for divorce freeing himself from a woman he never loved. Although he would like to pursue a meaningful relationship with someone, now is not the time. With Chris starting his internship program, Chase is down a mechanic and in serious need of help. Maya has lived a sheltered life helping her father run his Auto Repair Shop until he passed away 6 months ago. Without enough customers to support the shop, Maya was forced to close it. After several months without work, she is in desperate need of a job.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19395
Read Count: 40330
Published: August 11 2014
Updated: December 22 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- December Part 1

Things just became very interesting! Could this guy and hiss insane obsession be another part of the reason that Maya is so shy? I enjoyed this update but I am a little fearful that incorporating the holidays may speed the story up and detract from character building and plot development. I am sure I am wrong but I love your stories too much not to voice a possible concern. Thank you so much for the wonderful update!!!!!



Author's Response:

No problem at all, please voice all your concerns. It makes me more conscious when I'm writing so I make sure not to take away from the story. It's going to be interesting to get the background story to Domingo and also to find out why Maya ended up so reserved and shy. Thank you MissCO for taking the time to voice your opinion.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- November

Great start. It's been a long time since I read a good 1st person. Can't wait to see Mya come out of her shell 



Author's Response:

AWWW... Thank you so much. It means a lot to me.Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 12 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- December Part 2

Wonderful update as always. I really hope Chase doesnt use Maya to fill his loneliness void, but i guess it wouldnt be realistic otherwise. Thank you and i cant wait for the update 😄 



Author's Response:

Hi MissCo!  Thank you for reading. I think Chase needs to figure out what he's really feeling for her because you're right, right now he's just horny. Thank you for your review.

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Date: September 06 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- December Part 3

Dang I have been waiting to get the info on the mom! After hearing all of that I'm glad that was the last that we will have to see of her! She was horrible. Oh and Veronica is little better. I guess Chase would not have been going on three dates to get it from her. You have a way of writing women that showcases just how different we are. Thank you for the update and you know I can't wait for another 😄 



Author's Response:

Thank you MissCO. Her mom was pretty bad but like everyone who knows what kind of shit she went through to make her like that. Thank you for the compliment on my writing, that means a lot to me. I'm working on the next chapter and will hopefully have it up by next week. Thank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Extreme sexual content. The title says it all.



Table of Contents
Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 456
Read Count: 4293
Published: October 06 2014
Updated: October 06 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Blow Job

Whoa that was intensely good. And you managed not to get too dirty with it. I applaud your vivid use of imagery. Your skill allowed me to feel as though I was in that moment myself. Great job!!



Author's Response:

Thank you MissCo. It was something I was trying out but I'm glad you got the feel of it. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

My submission for the grindhouse challenge. Jessa has been living for a year in the Masion inherited to her by her now dead parents whom she never met. Finding her new gated community disturbing at first, it has grown to become her home. Jessa is about to discover how and why, herself and the two handsome brothers that live across the street, Ren and Garrett are bonded to each other. With their help, she will learn her true calling.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5380
Read Count: 8286
Published: October 15 2014
Updated: November 03 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- More Questions

I love this story so far! I can't wait until the next chapter. Are there really only going to be 3 chapters for this story? It seems as though it could be made into more ( no shade) I'm really enjoying how different this story is from the other two I have read from you. I can feel this darker aspect that shapes the scenes and the characters. Was that's the first time that Jessa had a tantrum that melted things? If her supposed parents were.... You know what let me stop you just said all questions will be answered in the next chapter. Thank for sharing and I can't wait to read more of whatever update you put out next.



Author's Response:

Hi MissCo!!!  Thank you sooo much for reading. Yes, that was Jessa's first meltdown. This Book 1 is only going to be 3 chapters but I do plan on making a Book 2 and maybe Book 3. I just know I have trouble finishing one story so I'm trying not to leave things unfinished when I start them. Really trying to finish Chase's story and Chris and Kat but sometimes these other ideas pop in my head. Thanks always for your review.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 19 2014

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