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Penny with a Hole in It by intellectual titmouse
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 721]
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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168958
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Intro

okay...so this is ah-maze-ing.

I love it. It feels real.

cannibalistic hicks..you made my day.

Keep up the awesome work.

 Reviewer: Petitemarie Signed
Date: January 03 2011
THE MAIN EVENT. by wwefanforlife
Rated: 17 and older
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In the left corner is Tanya Rodriguez, a woman that has it all. A great business, the best friend in the world and a mother and father who love their baby girl. But the one thing she's always wanted but never had is love. True love.

In the right corner is Jaycee Cristoforo. He's at the top of his profession as a sports entertainer. He's sexy and with millions of adoring female fans Jaycee knows he can have nearly any woman in the world but feels he is still missing something.

When these two meet will they find what they are looking for?

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 47718
Read Count: 19329
Published: February 09 2011
Updated: January 01 2013

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

SO loving this story.

And the cast is awesome.

Love the foreshadowing at the end. :)



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Glad you like the story and the cast. Thank you for the review.

 Reviewer: Petitemarie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think that Tanya will in the end-at least I hope so. However, I think she has a lot of personal issues she needs to work on, but Jay might be the guy that can help build her up.

I hate Coco. ugh. I know crazy females like her.

Great story so far! :)

Please continue.



Author's Response: Yeah Jay mess up big time but who knows maybe tanya let go of her issues and give him a chance.  Glad you like the story and I don't like coco either lol.  Thank you for the review.

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Date: March 15 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like that she didn't beat around the bush and told him what was really wrong. I also like the fact that he was man enough to ask her what happened to kill the mood. I really like this story. :D

Puh-lease continue.



Author's Response: Yeah for the both of them  to move foward they have to lay all the cards on the table and Tanya did that will Jay. Jay is man knows what he want and he realy want to get to know Tanya and glad you like the story. Thank you for the review.

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Date: March 18 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.