Penname: Tootall [Contact]

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Member Since: November 21 2010

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[Reviews - 203]
Summary:

It is a truth universally acknowledged that a Vulcan in the grip of Pon Farr must be in want of a mate.

---A Star Trek meets Pride and Prejudice Story---



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99273
Read Count: 211659
Published: July 12 2009
Updated: December 21 2015


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thanks for the update. I'm glad that Spoke showed, and he and Nyoto can work on their issues.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18 2011

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for the update. I really do love this story. The mix of Pride and Prejudice with Uhura and Spoke is perfect.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2011

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thanks for updating. I loved this story and am happy to see a new part.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214496
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

This story is so good! I don't know why I waited so long to read it, sorry, but I can't wait for the next part.  

Ryan is such a stand up guy.  Charlie better hold on tight. Wes is in love with his best friend's ex, and has been for a long time. It was probably real interesting when Ryan and Christi were still together. That would have been some drama if it came out then. lol Thankfully Ryan could give a rat's ass now.  Can't wait for the family dinner and the upcoming drama with Chad.

Love your story.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

 

 

Like A Bee To Honey

 

Ares, The Greek God of War meets Irene Hart a woman who brings fire and her own brand of peace to his life. Can he win this battle and convince Irene that he's more than a fighter and a lover but a man to keep for all eternity?

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 141131
Read Count: 14560
Published: November 29 2010
Updated: January 21 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Nice start on the spin off. I agree with you that Irene and Percy are seperate people, and that Irene deserves her own story.

Author's Response:

Hi Tootall,  Glad you liked it. I really wish I had done it sooner but no sense crying over spilled milk. Don't worry I'll work it out for all parties involved.

Thank you for reading, enjoying and reviewing. I appreciate it your input.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 01 2010

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Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 419]
Summary:

Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

Exceedingly Dope Banner by my homeskillet Valhalla.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 99692
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Instincts

This story is intense, but I'm enjoying it thoroughly.  Bowie is a bad chick and Svetlana needs to leave her alone, but we know she won't.  Vlad's brother needs to rethink his alliance with that crazy woman.  Jan is a straight up slimeball and I could see him joining forces with Svetlana, and in the process getting himself killed. 

Thanks for the update and I look forward to the next part.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06 2011

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 670]
Summary:

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

Poor Seleah. It's good for her that her past is coming out so she can get help, but I feel bad for Demaris when he finds out.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 Revealing the Hidden Part of Me II

This was a sad ending, but I did lol by the way Julian described his family when Amaris said they were "nice".

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
Summary:

 

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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80847
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Looks Can Be Deceiving

Very good start. I'm really liking the characters.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I love this story so much! Micah is a true sweetheart and I can't wait for Lei to realize, completely, that Micah' feelings are true.  Sabrina and Teddy are hot together. Really looking forward to how their relationship progresses.

Thanks for updating this wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Teddy and Sabrina crack me up. LOL Their conversations are funny. Micah, Micah, Micah, oh how I think he's the sweetest young man possible. His honestly and dedication is beautiful. I just love that character. Looking forward to him and Lei continuing to grow up together.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 245]
Summary:

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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39376
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Maxie, now he's going to be stressing out after finding that card.  That Renley chick is a pain and needs to be schooled on proper customer service.

 

Thanks for the new chapter.



Author's Response:

Maxie is stressing out and he's going to confront Selma.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 13 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104077
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26

Thanks for the update. It was goood!

I think all the secrets are finally out and that's a good thing.  I knew Christopher was stronger than some in his life thought.  Can't wait for Erin and Madeline to get theirs, especially since the whole Westmore family will be against them.  

As for Devyn and Jason, I'm glad the blowup happened so Devyn could face whatever her issues are so now she and Jason can hopefully work their issues out sooner than later.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30 2013

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update. I enjoy this story and was happy to see it. Erin's mother really is evil.  I hope Shawn helps with her downfall that hopefully hapens. lol  Looking forward to Devyn meeting Jason's parents.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2013

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25

Great chapter and I'm glad you updated.  Wlliam Westmore messed up and I'm glad his wife seems angry with him.  Hopefully Devyn hears Jason out sooner than later because even she should remember how they acted towards each other in the beginning and not be surprised that Jason did what he did.

I think Christopher is stronger than Erin and her evil mother think he is.  Can't wait to see them tumble all the way down.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2013

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 169]
Summary:

 

 

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Christmas is a time of giving and Henrietta Young is about to give the perfect gift to someone who doesn't deserve it.

 

 

The Gift  is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Gift
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3349
Read Count: 5875
Published: December 21 2011
Updated: December 21 2011


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great! A very interesting premise.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Taught to see the worst in people so he lived life semi- emotionless, that is until he met her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1643
Read Count: 10511
Published: December 26 2011
Updated: August 23 2015


Title: Heat

This was an interesting start. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26 2011

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

He loved to see them suffer. The pitiful humans that they desperately need to survive. Oh how she would suffer the girl who was nothing but a twinkling star, and he knew just as good as anyone that stars were never meant to stay. They were destined to fall and look beautiful as there innocence fades away.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 60375
Read Count: 132379
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: June 18 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The old lion.

I just started reading this, don't know how I missed it, but this first chapter already has sucked me in completely.

Bravo!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 332]
Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

makeme



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66274
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Cold Shoulder

You bad bad woman! The cliff hanger at that part sucked. lol  Seriously though, this story is so good.  I'm glad Lily isn't moping over Aiden and is living her life, but I can't wait to read Aiden's reaction to Lily not answering his call.

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Turning Tables

Definitely Yay!

It had to happen and the way it did was great.  Aiden is going to be even more possesive than he already was.  Good luck to Lilly. LOL

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2012

Title: Chapter 8: He Won't Go-Part 1

I was quite happy to see an update. Thank you!

Aiden is about to give Alex a rude awakening when Alex tells him why he treated Lily like he did and said what he said to Aiden. Can't wait! lol

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Right As Rain

Aww, Apple is too cute.  I couldn't do S&M because that punishment would have me running out the door lol, but I love this story. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27 2013

Title: Make Me

I was just thinking of this story yesterday.  The tease was good, but I really want the update. LOL

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

 

Mallory Ruskin lost her sight in an unfortunate accident five years ago. Can she push aside the fear of the assumed and the unknown to trust the one man who had her heart?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28493
Read Count: 19564
Published: January 29 2013
Updated: May 19 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 My Love

This story is really good.  I haven't been on The Chamber lately and this was a good read.  Looking forward to an update.



Author's Response:

 Thanks!  I hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Love, loss and redemption are found in the most unlikely places.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active, Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 114
Read Count: 34090
Published: February 05 2013
Updated: March 15 2013


Title: Good Grief

Aww, that was beautiful and sweet.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I indulged in this story a little. It was my very first story EVER and just wanted a good old fashioned lovey dovey romance. But there's more to come. :)

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.