Good start. You've peaked my interest.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: May 19 2015 03:08 am
Really really good. A mixture of mystery, murder and romance. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Loop Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2014 08:56 am
insane and so good! keep it up! & thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: September 25 2014 12:05 pm
very interesting cant wit to read more
Reviewer: Chicken Signed [Report This]Date: September 23 2014 01:40 pm
What in the world is going on? First the girl in the road and now a body hanging in the trees?!I smell something either evil or supernatural/paranormal going on in this town.
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2014 10:03 pm
How could end it right there with the body hanging from the tree?? I need to know who it is a and DC why they chose the schoolyard? So good!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2014 01:00 pm
Welcome back! :D I missed you and your stories! I love the beginning! SO intriguing! Can't wait to read more! <3
Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed [Report This]Date: September 21 2014 09:32 am
this is an amazing start. the characters are fantastic already, really well realized. i'm excited for more!
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: September 16 2014 05:55 pm
love it, very intrigued
Reviewer: crayola10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 09 2014 11:38 pm
I love the title first off. You did a good job of slowly bringing up the tension. I want to know who that girl is. Awesome start.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2014 01:34 am
Wow, what a great beginning and a cliffhanger already. More please!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2014 01:48 pm
great start - welcome back!!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2014 10:08 am
This was an amazing first chapter. Hmm, the girl seemed a bit mysterious and creepy at the same time. And blood, oh boy.
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2014 08:07 am
Interesting start!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2014 06:39 am
Are you back? Wow!
Reviewer: Sleek Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2014 06:06 am
Ooo! Nice start and cliffhanger. You got me!!!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2014 05:18 am
Interesting
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 08 2014 04:55 am
Caught my attention. Please update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2014 04:38 am
Welcome back. Grear start, very interesting.
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2014 04:31 am