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Title: Chapter 2

Good start...looks like it has not been updated in a while. I'd like to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 07:54 am
Title: Chapter 2

You are a great auther. Thanks for the stories

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: jaymonia Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 12:01 am
Title: Chapter 2

I love it they are so sweet and playful with each other and they take the stress of their work days off each others shoulder @ least for a time.

Great work more please.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2011 10:20 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Really loving your story. Nice to see Elton attracted to a bbw! I also like that they are taking their time in getting to know each other. More chapters and soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 15 2011 03:04 am
Title: Chapter 2

They are to hot for each other and when they do the do it will be H-O-T!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 05:25 am
Title: Chapter 2

Hello Sade,

Delightful start.  Looking forward to more of Elton and A'isha's story.

A



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 03:25 am
Title: Chapter 2

Me likey!! More please.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 02:56 am
Title: Chapter 2

Nice



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Thanks for the review.

 Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 01:28 am
Title: Chapter 2

nice update



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 08:40 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Yay. Another fantastic story. Keep up the good work.



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Thank you so much for the review. 

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 06:41 pm
Title: Chapter 2

can't wait for more =)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoy the story.

 Reviewer: mekaky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 04:00 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Great update.  I really enjoyed it.  The friendly banter between the two was fun to read.  I like that they're relationship is progressing this slowly. I like seeing the growth.  Thanks for another great read.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.

 Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 10:16 am
Title: Chapter 2

me likey very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 09:25 am


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