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Title: Chapter 1

I like the start so far, love Elton.

Please continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.

 Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 03:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great start.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 02:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

A’isha and Elton are hot. I can't wait for them to get together.

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Thank you for the review.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 02:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for a great start to the story.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 01:06 pm


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