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Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

Please, comeback we need you

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/13 05:27 am
Title: Authors Note

This is what I hate about these wannabe authors, they don't have the endurance to finishm if I knew this shit would happen I wouldn't have read this story. You're right, you suck!

 Reviewer: mjfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/12 11:06 pm
Title: Authors Note

Well this sucks...lol

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 05/02/12 10:45 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

Maybe I missed something but Im getting confused on the timeline.There are times the wording makes me think this takes place in another time period then a modern phrase sneaks up on me...Need confirmation please!

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/02/12 10:44 pm
Title: Authors Note

i wish i hadn't read it

 Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/12 01:59 am
Title: The Runner

great

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 11:37 pm
Title: Authors Note

WHAT!!!! Really? This is sad news to me!! Hope you get back to it some day soon. Loved it while it lasted though.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 12:33 pm
Title: Authors Note

well, it looked interesting. However, there isn't much point in me starting to read if you have no intention of finishing this story. will keep an eye out for updates. If you do go forward with this, then I'll read. Take care.

 Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 12:17 pm
Title: Authors Note

Thanks V, good luck with school.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 08:39 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

Wow, thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 08:38 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 1

Thanks for a great update. I was surprised to read that Serena's father raped her mother and that is how she was conceived.  It seems that Tobias is falling in her dad's footsteps in being a brutal business man. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 08:36 am
Title: I just wanna be okay

Great update.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 08:28 am
Title: Skinny Love

So she is in love with her guardian?  It seems that he feels the same way.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 08:26 am
Title: The Runner

Good start.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 08:23 am
Title: At First

Good cast.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 08:17 am
Title: At First

where are you?

 Reviewer: anonymous. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 01:36 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

Lord, Iam enjoying your story...please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/07/11 03:54 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

I love a good anti-hero story or a good girl/bad boy.  This seems to be a bit of both including the evil fiancee.  I can't wait until you update.

 Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/11 06:15 pm
Title: At First

Sooo... update soon?

I am loving this story! I just need to say that you are a fantastic writer and that i love how you have written Tobias's character. Fantastic job. Please continue it.

Reviewer: Briella Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 10:21 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

Tobias needs to "fish or cut bait". My girl is going to get whiplash with all the back and forth. He needs to make up his damn mind as to whether he's going to own up to his feelings. It's not Serena's fault that he's being a pu*sy. Tobias is under the mistaken impression that he'll be able to stay away from her. He's had a sample of how it could be for them to be together and I don't think he'll be able to forget that.  He's setting them on a course for heartache and exposing Serena to the wrath of the fiancee. *smh. Tobias makes me want to slap the taste out his mouth*

Serena needs to go on and live her life. But you know  Tobias will freak if she gets real serious about someone. He doesn't want to man up, yet he doesn't want anyone else to have her. Well too bad, he can't expect for Serena to become a nun. 

I love all this angst. And boy was Tobias very good at stoking Serena's fires. That's called experience, baby. LOL

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 09:36 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

I reallly hate Tobias and he does not derserve her. If he felt he could not be with her there were better ways to say it and do it w/o making her feel like trash!! He is an idiot and I pray she finds someone else quickly!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 08:17 pm
Title: At First

Ryan sounds like an abusive jerk.. reminds me of Serena's father, actually. Tobias repected and was mentored by him; but obviously the man didn't know shit about love, compassion, and honor.Tobias' loyalty and gratitude are clouding his better judgment. He'd prefer a "business arrangement" marriage than being with the woman he really loves and desires??

As tempting as it may be for Serena to give up on him, I think she should stick it out.

Please update again soon.

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 01:19 am
Title: At First

OMG!! Tobias is a tortured soul!! He's unable to deal with his feelings for Serena but she's sure feeling him!!! Hope he can work it out before its too late!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 01:13 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

Asshole! That's the only word I have. 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 12:49 am
Title: At First

Great cast!!

Congratulations on taking the plunge!

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/19/11 11:47 pm


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