Maybe I missed something but Im getting confused on the timeline.There are times the wording makes me think this takes place in another time period then a modern phrase sneaks up on me...Need confirmation please!Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/12 10:44 pm
i wish i hadn't read itReviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/25/12 01:59 am
well, it looked interesting. However, there isn't much point in me starting to read if you have no intention of finishing this story. will keep an eye out for updates. If you do go forward with this, then I'll read. Take care.Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 12:17 pm
Thanks for a great update. I was surprised to read that Serena's father raped her mother and that is how she was conceived. It seems that Tobias is falling in her dad's footsteps in being a brutal business man.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/12 08:36 am
Sooo... update soon?
I am loving this story! I just need to say that you are a fantastic writer and that i love how you have written Tobias's character. Fantastic job. Please continue it.Reviewer: Briella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 10:21 pm
Tobias needs to "fish or cut bait". My girl is going to get whiplash with all the back and forth. He needs to make up his damn mind as to whether he's going to own up to his feelings. It's not Serena's fault that he's being a pu*sy. Tobias is under the mistaken impression that he'll be able to stay away from her. He's had a sample of how it could be for them to be together and I don't think he'll be able to forget that. He's setting them on a course for heartache and exposing Serena to the wrath of the fiancee. *smh. Tobias makes me want to slap the taste out his mouth*
Serena needs to go on and live her life. But you know Tobias will freak if she gets real serious about someone. He doesn't want to man up, yet he doesn't want anyone else to have her. Well too bad, he can't expect for Serena to become a nun.
I love all this angst. And boy was Tobias very good at stoking Serena's fires. That's called experience, baby. LOLReviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 09:36 pm
I reallly hate Tobias and he does not derserve her. If he felt he could not be with her there were better ways to say it and do it w/o making her feel like trash!! He is an idiot and I pray she finds someone else quickly!!Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 08:17 pm
Ryan sounds like an abusive jerk.. reminds me of Serena's father, actually. Tobias repected and was mentored by him; but obviously the man didn't know shit about love, compassion, and honor.Tobias' loyalty and gratitude are clouding his better judgment. He'd prefer a "business arrangement" marriage than being with the woman he really loves and desires??
As tempting as it may be for Serena to give up on him, I think she should stick it out.
Please update again soon.Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 01:19 am