Jeremy is a coward, thru and thru. He is fine as all get out, but I cannot stand men like him. I hope Shenai moves on and does not become some desparate woman who sleeps with Jeremy while he is married. Since Jeremy is choosing to get married, he would not even get a sniff of my perfume much less anything under my clothes. She needs to separate herself from Jeremy and move on to someone else. Too many times, you see women in love with a men who have a girlfriend or is married and they will never leave the one's they are with for you. 'You,' being Shenai.
Great Update and I hope Shenai is strong enough to move on until her and Jeremy can be together legitimatly. If he ever grows a pair. I don't know though, I would not want to be with a man who had second thoughts about me. Or could only hit it in secret. I know it happens everyday all day, but women who put up with it are really selling themselves very short.
Author's Response:
loved it. Every thing you said is absolutley true. Thanks! We will see what happens with Shenai later
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 17 2011 06:20 am
Why does Shenai need him to admit it? What good could come of it now.
Jeremiah...grow up!
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Thank you!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2011 05:41 am
The wait for this miserly chapter was too long. I hate Jeremy's prejudiced, idiotic behind. At least Jeremiah sees her as a potential mate, and not just a pre-wedding "buddy."
Author's Response:
hmm. Thank you!
Reviewer: too short Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 17 2011 05:00 am
absolutly soo happy that this story is up and running again I just love it!!!!!!!!!!
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Happy .. Thank you!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2011 03:46 am
Wow, he's actually going through with the wedding!! What a jerk!! Hope Shenai doesn't make an ass of herself!!! If he doesn't want to fight for her, he's not worth her effort. She needs to keep her mouth shut and get the hell up on out of there as fast as her Louboutins can take her.
Author's Response:
:) Thank you baha_malo !
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2011 03:25 am
What is Shenai going to do? This is going to be great. nice story
Author's Response:
Thanks..
Reviewer: na- na Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 17 2011 02:53 am
Awwww i miss this story whens it getting updated
Author's Response:
soon.. sorry to keep you waiting.. Thanks for missing it
Reviewer: nikki Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2011 03:40 am
shux how are you spose to deal with that? great writing skills now I'm in pain....
Author's Response:
Thanks
Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 22 2011 02:58 pm
This story just sounds like some ho-ass shit. Him and her. Maybe just not enough dimensions. Why would they wait under 24 hours before he gets married to have sex--the way you have your characters thinking. Its like you trying to create a story line around don't-care-who-gets-hurt, ho tendencies. they run they walk they do pushups and just fall into sex just like that. crazy.
Author's Response:
ok. I feel you. thanks
Reviewer: nottrynaberude Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 22 2011 12:47 pm
I love and am truly enjoying this story. I hope Jeremy.
I hope Jeremy backs out of the wedding especially with Jade not being honest about not being able to conceive and because he is IN LOVE with Shenai.
I understand Jade will be hurt deeply but chica "He just not that into you"
I wouldn't be surprised if our girl ended up in the family way herself since they were getting the get on without anyone's protection in site.
Shenai girl go for your man...you both love each other desperately.
Great update hope to get more soon.
Happy writing!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!!!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 08:52 am
Wow!! I loved the update. Those gifts he gave her were amazing but its a pity it wasn't himself. Wonder if she's gonna become preggers??? If she goes to the wedding I hope she stays strong and show them all she's a better woman than what they thought.
Have a feeling if he goes through with this wedding he's gonna regret it bigtime especially if he ever discovers Jade's lies.
Author's Response:
THANKS!!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 08:38 am
Great Update!!! I love this story!!
Correction: Red bottoms are Christian Louboutin's. I love shoes...so I am obsess with his stuff.
Author's Response:
HaaaHaaa!! Thanks.. I love my reviews.. Yall are awesome... thanks for the correction i will get on that pronto
Reviewer: Rapture Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 07:52 am
great so far!!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Reviewer: sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 07:00 am
Very Good
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 05:33 am
Okay this women is crazy, I hope this not going the direction i think it is because it would be so cruel
Author's Response:
:) Thanks..
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 05:32 am
Okay, I understand Jeremiah POV about Shenai and his feeling for her. Great Insight into his feelings and thought patterns
Author's Response:
Thanks
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 05:30 am
Again the POVs give readers insight into what the character are thinking as well as writers written discription
Jade seems a little loopy, Great Job
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 05:20 am
OH BOY! Very good and very Alpha......Jeremiah true colors are starting to show.
I Love this story more and more
Author's Response:
Thank you !!!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 05:17 am
The POVs are the best...What is up with Jeremiah, does he have a thing for Shenai or is he jealous or his brother friendship with Shenai?
Great Job
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! :)
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 05:11 am
I love that you put character background in the beginning
Author's Response:
Thanks ....
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 05:07 am
I love the cast
Author's Response:
THANK YOU.. I tried..
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 05:04 am
Damn Jeremy! You need to dump your soon to be bride and run away with Shenai. This is not going to end well for someone! Love the new chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: May 20 2011 11:24 pm
Jeremy is about to make the biggest mistake of his life. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you !!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: May 20 2011 10:41 pm
How is Shenai going to make it through this farce called a wedding? He spend some money on her and she still doesn't believe that he loves her. So sad, he someone going to wake up before it's too late. I can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 20 2011 08:44 pm
Wow, please update today again.
Author's Response:
:) Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 20 2011 07:51 pm