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Title: Everyone Lies

I think that Shenai needs some space. She should get away from Jeramy and Jeremiah. If Jeremy go trough with the wedding than he does not deserve Shenai. And besides, he is an asshole, He cheated on his fiance just a couple of hours before their wedding. 

 

Jeremiah needs to mind his onw business. I will never understand some people. If my brother talks to me like that or try to but in to my life and thinks he knows best I would seriously kick his ass. Who does he think he is. I'm so happy that me and my siblings aren't selfish towards each other. And we always treat each other with respect and also respect each others choices. Yes we will give our opinions and stuff like that. But you can't cross the line.  Its obvious that Jeremy needs to man up a little bit and tell his brother to shut the fuck up and mind his own business. Jeremiah will always but in to Jeremy and Shenai lifes because they let him do it. 



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Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 12 2011 04:23 am

Title: Everyone Lies

The song is by Shai not Boys II Men. Good chapter, what ever would Shenai do, what comes next.



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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 11:03 pm

Title: Everyone Lies

I fell sorry for all of them. Shenai, Jeremy, Jeremiah, and Jade are all in pain. I like that this chapter showed that. Excited for more.



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Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 09:00 pm

Title: Everyone Lies

I really like this story. Jeremy knows he's wrong for even thinking he can marry Jade. I did kind of feel sorry for Jade until she called Shenai a negro. WTF? I think Jeremiah is trying to keep Shenai away from his brother because he wants her for himself. Please update soon!



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Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 07:11 pm

Title: Everyone Lies

He would be a fool to go through with this wedding. I want to feel sorry for the bride, but she seems to have problem with blacks/Negros.

 

 



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Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 06:35 pm

Title: The Cast

She needs to wake up and smell the bananas. CUT Jerry loose! I don't like that she let him think he can have his cake and eat it too. She let him have power over her. Senai needs to disappear for a while SHE IS LETTING THESE BROTHERS BE THE CENTER OF HER LIFE and she needs to get a life.

Is he really going thru with the wedding? If he does, it would be cold but she would deserve it because he doesn't respect her. If he did he wouldnt have touch her HOURS before walking down the aisle. So what's he going to do when Jade tells him she can have children? run to Senai...don't like that one bit. HE is a DOG and so is his twin.

CAN'T wait to see how this plays out!



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lol She needs to wake up and smell the bananas. :) THANK YOU!!

Reviewer: 100%FAN Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 01:13 pm

Title: Everyone Lies

The situation is effed up on every level.  They waited until the worst possible minute to give in to their desires.  Jade is sitting across town keeping a secret that's going to blow up in her face.  Jeremiah is blocking but not for truly innocent reasons. 

Great update.



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Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 12:13 pm

Title: Everyone Lies

GREAT!!!!!



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Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 11:36 am

Title: Everyone Lies

Jade is a piece of crap and if Jeremy goes through with marrying her and Jade tries to use Shenai as her surrogate.....I dont even know girl lol

Jeremiah needs to mind his dang business and if he cares so much maybe he should go marry jade.

Jeremy needs to marry Shenai. Point-blank period.

Shenai...she needs to either fight for Jeremy or move on completely. Do not try to fill the void with the other twin. It wont work! She'll just keep seeing Jeremy and thinking of what could've been and comparing the two and oh lawd.

Twins are always so much trouble -_-

I cant wait until everythings laid out on the table and some final decisions needs to be made! lol someones not going to be happy....



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LOL :) THANK YOU!!!!!

Reviewer: blckbeary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 09:55 am

Title: Everyone Lies

Shenai is pushing Jeremy away, but he is such a punk.  Why are you marrying Jade?  She is not what she claims to be, she is just as racist as his father was.  Please don't let him marry that not uterus having lying ho!!!



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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 07:39 am

Title: Everyone Lies

Oh hell nooo, Jeremy wimped out and Jeremiah won. Run Shenai, RUNNNNN!!! Jerry isn't worth the effort if he doesn't fight for you. Jade is a liar, marrying Jeremy under false pretenses. Can't wait until the crap hits the fan.

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Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 07:14 am

Title: Everyone Lies

Wow! I need a update soon. Excellent........



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Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 07:00 am

Title: Caught in the Mix

What a mess! How could Shenai be that blind? She hasn't figured out that Jeremiah really likes her too! Why bother with someone who is getting married when you can have his twin. I bet Jeremiah would do anything for Shenai. You are doing a good job with this story!



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Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2011 04:36 pm

Title: Caught in the Mix

Jeremiah was guilt tripping him and if he doesn't realise that he's a fool. He needs to open up his eyes and see that Jeremiah is jealous of his friendship/relationship with Shenai.

If Jeremy marries Jade Shenai needs to cut him out of her life cause it will only lead to problems and heartache for her. She needs to move on with her life and be happy elsewhere

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Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2011 12:49 am

Title: Caught in the Mix

I need another update, wonderful.



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Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 06:37 pm

Title: Caught in the Mix

great



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Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 06:09 pm

Title: Caught in the Mix

Banging story...love it..update soon..want to know what will happen next...don't leave us hanging!!!!



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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 05:13 pm

Title: The Cast

This story has so many twist and turns! Can't wait to see what happens between Shenai and Jeremy maybe Jeremiah will get in there too, seems like your hinting at it. Poor Jade. Still ove the story overall!!

Happy Writing!!!



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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 05:11 pm

Title: Un-regrettable Events

Why is he getting Married to Jade.. Whats so special about her.. What is up with Jeremy and his father... Jeremiah is a asshole 



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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 05:00 pm

Title: Caught in the Mix

That was truly caught in the mix. Nice story. More please 



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lol Thank you

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 04:59 pm

Title: Caught in the Mix

I hope that dummy doesn't go ahead and marry Jade, he doesn't love her.  At lease not he loves Shenai.  Why is she apologizing to Jeremy, it takes two to tangle and he wanted her just as much as wanted him.  The woman is daft, and you can't take back hot sex.  Please don't that fool marry Jade.  Have I said that I can't stand Jeremiah, he also has the hots for Shenai.



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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 04:24 pm

Title: Caught in the Mix

what the heck now what. why is jeremiah guilt trippin jerry.  poor sheniah more please



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Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 02:43 pm

Title: The Cast

whoopsie! forgot to rate XD



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Reviewer: treehuggingsmartarse Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 12:34 pm

Title: Caught in the Mix

I just hope that you won't make it cliche and have Shenai crying in Jeremiah's arms. He is an selfish bastard and wants Shenai for himself. I want Shenai to tell him right in his face that whatevers happens and even if Jeremy gets married, that she is not interested in him and will NEVER get involved with him no matter what. I want Shenai with someone else. If Jeremy goes trough with the wedding, then he doesn't deserve neither Shenai or Jade. He is hurting both of them and he is a fucking coward which is such a turn off. Right now I don't like him either. Yes its what your father had wanted, but Jade is not the love of your live. So if he still gets married after all that happened then I guess he is not that in love with Shenai like I thought. Both brother are a pain in the ass. Jeremiah needs to mind his own business and get a live. He needs to accept the fact that Shenai doesn't like him like he wants to and even if Jeremy gets married, it will not change anything. And it will be kind of awkward if she did have something with Jeremiah, she already slept with Jeremy. So that will be just gross. And as for Jeremy, he is a coward who doesn't want to face the fact that he is in love with Shenai. I want Shenai with a REAL MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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 you want her with a real man :) THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 12:33 pm

Title: The Cast

good update :DD

All i can say is Shenai didnt need to be worried about jeremiah, its jeremy she should be focused on cause he's the one getting married. Lashing out like that wasnt cool. Right now i'm having no sympathy for her :< Jeremiah may be in the wrong for guiltying his brother but to me Jeremy is the true arse.

Lovin' your story chica <3



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Reviewer: treehuggingsmartarse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 12:33 pm



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