Great update. Damn Jeremiah a true hater that wants Shenai all to himself but baby it aint going to happen.
I did not hear one time them using a condom I wonder if Shenai is on the pill but hasn't been in a realationship for a minute and it sounds like she has been going without just as long.
Please update again soon.
Thanks!
Happy writing!
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Thank you!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: April 30 2011 11:38 am
Well they got caught. I thought so sure it was going to be Jade that took a visit over to the house but should have know it would be Jeremiah.
Loved it and damn their love making is hot to death.
Thank you!
Happy writing!
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Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2011 11:16 am
OMG! That was great and totally unexpected.
I know Shenai has rug burns for days and all of Jeremy's alphaness just came out. LOL!
I wish he would show some balls and marry who he really wants to and not try to honor his father by marrying someone he cares for but is not in love with.
More please.Thank you
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:) THANK YOU!!!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2011 11:07 am
I think that Jeremiah wants Shenai all for himself, which is why hes guilt-tripping his brother.
Jeremy should be with the girl whos been there for him the whole time and who he truly desires which is shenai.
Jade wont be able to fill the place of her. Maybe Jeremiah should marry jade instead lol
Author's Response:
LOL Jade & Jeremiah... Jeremiah hates her..
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Reviewer: blckbeary Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 30 2011 10:39 am
Ahhhh! That is sad. They both love each other deeply but due to some sense of worship to his father he is marrying a woman his father would approve of instead of going with his heart.
He does not realize that he is just going to be miserable in the long run cause he is not with who really makes him happy and who he is in love with true love.
Great update.
Thank you!
Happy Writing!
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Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2011 10:13 am
Nice start can't wait 2 c where you take us with this story and your characters.
Thanks for sharing.
Happy Writing!
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Hopefully I will take you on a nice ride :) THANKS !
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2011 09:52 am
nice sex scene... love it
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:) Thanks!
Reviewer: Alien Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 30 2011 08:16 am
Beautiful Cast, Enjoyed the story can't wait to see what occurs and can't believe Jeremy is getting married still. doesn't her love Shenai
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thanks continue to read and you will see what occurs
Reviewer: love Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 30 2011 08:15 am
I love your story
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:) Thanks !!!
Reviewer: smexy Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 30 2011 08:14 am
le sighhh
I think they are being a wee bit selfish,it being his wedding day and all.Couldn't they wait till he called the wedding off.....or will he :O dunn dunn dunnn
great story chica ^.^
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Reviewer: treehugginsmartarse Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 09:39 am
Wow, that was a hawt scene!!! Hope Jeremy has some clarity after making love to Shenai. He needs to be honest with himself. If he goes through with this marriage to Jade...SHAME on HIM!!!Don't like Jeremiah much as he knows Jeremy's heart desire but is encouraging him to marry Jade. He doesn't have his brother's back. Maybe he doesn't want his brother to be happy.
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Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 04:43 am
Having sex with someone else instead of your soon-to-be wife on your Wedding Day? I feel damn sorry for the bride and hated Jeremy and Shenai for it.
Author's Response:
Gasp.. you dislike Shenai && Jeremy :)
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Reviewer: romantic Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 03:43 am
I don't like Jeremiah, he is a douche bad. How could he be in favor of Jeremy marrying a woman that he doesn't love? Is going still going to marry Jade after loving Shenai? I so love this story!!!
Author's Response:
But Jeremiah is such a cutie.. lol..
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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 03:31 am
I so loved that this chapter, thank you for the hot, butt, naked sex!!! I do mean HOT!!! Shenai and Jeremy were sizzling there is not way that Jeremy feel that good when hes sexing Jade. I don"t believe that he loves Jade, if he does he's definitely not in love with her. THe love of his life is Shenai. I give this story two thumbs up!!!
Author's Response:
lol on the " hot, butt, naked sex"
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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 03:27 am
Hot, and Jade is no more.
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Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 03:12 am
wow! that was hawt! what happens next?!
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Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2011 01:54 am
Holy Shitznoid Batman! Somebody got busted! But damn what a way to go! Get it boo!
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[Report This]Date: April 26 2011 12:33 am
Uh oh, those two are so naughty. On his wedding day no less. I'm sure they both thought it was worthy it. I hope there isn't a pregnancy because I didn't read about them using protection. Also they are about to get busted by Jeremiah! Loving this story!
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[Report This]Date: April 25 2011 11:59 pm
What a mess! Excellent story....
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[Report This]Date: April 25 2011 11:11 pm
What the hell! Jeremy you want your cake and eat it to. Shenai you just had sex with Jeremy,Is he going to call off the wedding. Excellent....
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[Report This]Date: April 25 2011 11:08 pm
Wow the 25 minutes wan't enough?!
What Jer will do?!
That was wicked can't wait for more...
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[Report This]Date: April 25 2011 10:58 pm
I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!! LOL
I hope you update soon. Please don't wait toooooooo long.
Author's Response:
CLIFFHANGERS ARE AWESOME lol....
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Reviewer: 100%Fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 25 2011 10:47 pm
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!
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[Report This]Date: April 25 2011 10:42 pm
It about time Shenai and Jeremy finally closed the deal. It is better to do it now...before the wedding. This way there should be no wedding...at least not between Jeremy and Jade. There will be drama. And Jeremiah, who lusts after Shenai, will probably be part of it, but hopefully, Jeremy and Shenai will stick together...no matter what.
Good update.
Nyeesha
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Thank you!!!!
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2011 08:54 pm
I like this story, but this chapter was entirely too short. I felt rushed, it didn't read like the other chapters did. I would have liked to read about what transpired between the two before the whole shower scene. Also, their are two many points of views floating around. The only people I'm concerned about are Jeremy and female character (sorry, I can't remember how to spell it) Slow done, let the reader savior your writing.
Author's Response:
ok.. Thank you!! and i did note that this was the shortest chapter in the novel.
Reviewer: Jannelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 25 2011 08:47 pm