everything can and should be a stated of mine but what is woman to do
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: October 09 2013 02:57 am
love it
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2013 02:56 am
I'm so so so glad you updated!!!!! I hope Shenai will know what she really wants. Jeremy is a real mess, always digging his own grave! He's cute in a silly way. The one who knows what he really wants is Jeremiah, he's so desperately in love, it's touching. I hope to read more real soon... Thanx!!!
Author's Response:
Your welcome. Thank you for the review
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2013 11:59 pm
Hmm. I don't know if your plan is to eventually get Jeremy and Shenai together or what. As it stands, nothing will change the fact that Jeremy was too weak, too unaware and too lilylivered to be with the right one. As currently drawn, Jeremiah has been much more straightforward and clear about his feelings.
Alternately and please forgive me but Shenai has been stupid and loose to sleep with both.
It will be something to see where you take this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. We will see what next for Shenai
Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2013 02:54 am
I want her to end up with Jeremiah, not Jeremy.
Reviewer: Mel Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 06 2013 10:50 pm
Originally I liked her she seemed like a positive black woman now after having sex with twins in the same bed and sheets within 24 hours and now onto the next guy it's not quite what I thought she or the story was or is about. Good luck with the book but this story has turned corners that aren't attractive to her at all.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2013 06:28 pm
Team Jeremiah. Jeremy had his chance but he didn't have the guts to be with the woman he truly loves. Now he's lying to his wife, not that I have any sympathy for her. She's a liar and so is he. They deserve one another. Hopefully Shenai can get her act together and realize that Jeremiah will treat her like a queen and won't be ashamed of her because of her color. Jeremy sucks. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Girl you are so silly. Team Jeremiah lol we will see what happens
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2013 05:04 pm
Shenai it's a bad idea to use Jeremiah because you can't have Jeremy. I still say that she's pregnant. When it gets published I will buy this book.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2013 04:09 pm
I think she should be with Jeremiah.!maybe if he had spoken up when they were younger things would have been different for him, maybe he would have had a chance with Shania. Please don't let her be pregnant at least not yet. Maybe somewhere down the road when she and Jeremiah build their relationship.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed
[Report This]Date: October 06 2013 09:33 am
i know you just started a new story, but please continue this one. please
Reviewer: dreamama Signed [Report This]Date: May 19 2013 04:43 pm
Great update.
Will she be pregnant and wow...how did she let this all happen. Those twins are apiece of work as well. She was hurting after that wedding.
They are all screwed. What a shame.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 02:42 pm
I am not loving this turn of events. Sleeping with brothers in the same day ugh.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 01:54 pm
All those calls from Jer made me think he ended things with Jade. But if that were the case he would had come over and heard Nai and Jerm. So I'm not sure!! But it's going to be good update soon =]
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 07:57 am
OK, Jeremiah knew that Shenai was and has always been in love with Jeremy. Did you think that good sex would suddenly make her fall in love with you? So crazy but I am glad that you told her how you feel, but it doesn't make it for the fact that you had sex with woman that you know your brother is in love with. This whole situation is a mess and I think that Shenai could get some perspective movng away for a bit.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 07:28 am
I don't know if it was such a good idea to give away the goodies without him leaving his ffiancée
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 07:26 am
That was so wrong. That was more wrong than tits on bull!! You got me on tens!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2012 07:20 am
I hope she puts on her big girl panties and says something before the wedding.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2012 07:12 am
I just reread this story and I have discovered a new level hate for Jeremy, Jeremiaj and Jade. For Jeremy because he spineless your dead father was not perfect. Jeremiaj beacause he's jealous of his brother for having Shenai's love. Not to mention cheating on his girlfriend. Jade just because she's lying skank who doesn't know what true love is. Shenai please loose those ho te ndencies!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2012 03:30 pm
This is so sad. I feel bad for everyone, especially if she gets pregnant. Please update, I have to know where this goes.
Reviewer: alexp696 Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2012 05:13 am
Please give us more.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2012 12:26 am
Oh shit what's going to happen now?
Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 09:35 pm
Oh shit;) lol
Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2012 08:46 pm
Okay, please explain to me, what the hell is going on. This story started out really so good, with a strong black woman. And now she turn out to be a slut??? I'm sorry but that is exactly what she is. I get that she is drunk and hurt. But not drunk enough to not know what she is doing. Sleeping with both brother no less-in a 24 hour period is straight up slutty. I'm sorry but it really is. Why was it even necessary for him to stay the night? Yet alone sleep in her bed. Doesn't Jeremiah have a girlfriend? Wasn't he all against Jeremy sleeping with Shenai because he is getting married, and now he ends up sleeping with Shenai, while having a girlfriend? How ridiculous and hypocrite is that. I'm honestly very disappointed. I really likes Shenai in the beginning, but I never expected her to turn out being such a whore. Like I said, being drunk is not a excuse. She is disgusting, plain and simple.
Reviewer: disappointed reader Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 11:48 pm
Hot Damn! Great update...So the panzy went ahead with the marriage to Jade not know that he is not going to be able to have children with the woman which he wants.
I hope Nai is on the pill cause now she has slept (not much sleeping behind it) with both the brothers unprotected Jeremiah seeming to be a whole lot better the Jer but there was a spark with Jer and Nai but Jeremiah had chica screamin til she was hoarse and toes curling. If she does end up pregnant I hope that they are Jeremiah's cause ass-whip made his choice when he married Jade his father's choice.
Then if Nai is pregnant with Jeremiah's babies he will know what he missed out on and I hope that Nai can love him just and much as she love Jer maybe even more.
Thank you for the update.
More please...
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 11:47 pm