I love this story. I don't think Shanai is a slut at all. She's just confused and hurt that Jeremy can toss their friendship away so easily to please his dead dad. Although I'd rather see her with Jeremiah, he should have waited until he dumped his girlfriend first and when Shanai is completely sober. I'd love to see Shanai and Jeremiah to get together and Jeremy to see what he missed out on. Please don't listen to people who rudely tell you to re do this chapter. It's your story and you should write it whatever way you want. Whichever way you go, I'll continue reading. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Luv2Read Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 07 2012 07:44 pm
Well, I didn't see her having sex with the other brother. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 06:12 pm
I am surprised that he went through with the wedding. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 05:58 pm
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 05:37 pm
Little late for recriminations. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 04:42 pm
Good update. I can' t believe that they are doing this right before the wedding. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 04:39 pm
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 04:36 pm
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 04:34 pm
Good start to bad she couyldn't have just fallen for the other twin. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 04:28 pm
Good cast. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2012 03:45 pm
I just read this story. Wow! What a mess.
why is Shrenai given herself to these men...they both have significant others.
Also she is not using any protection. I am sure she will be pregnant - Who will the father be? Additionally, Jeremiah took advantage of a hurting woman.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 06 2012 08:30 pm
This is the second time I have read chapter 11 and I really don't understand where this is going. Please re-do this chapter and try not to make Shenai seems like a slut. I really like this story but now I on the fence. I will not rate because it is not favorable and I don't ever want to give an author an unfavorable rating because you do this because you enjoying doing what you do. Thanks for coming back though.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 07:58 pm
I'm not sure I like where this story is going. Having sex with two men in a matter of hours seem sorta distasteful especially when they are brothers. I felt the correction between her and Jeremy not with his brother. Mix feelings. Hopefully the next chapter will clarify some things.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 06 2012 07:42 pm
Aaaauah,that was so nice!
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 04:05 pm
Aaaaauh...Sad
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 02:15 pm
Uhoooh!!!
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 01:53 pm
Hawt!!! Shenai is a bad girl and that Jeremy...Wow Wondering whats giong to happen next?
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 01:40 pm
I really don't understand...now she's doing both brothers?! I mean seriously, the way you picture her is not flattering at all...she comes across like a slut with no self respect...just sayin'...
Reviewer: Mary23 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 11:23 am
Great Chapter! More please!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 07:46 am
Yep, y'all shouldn't have...!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 06:55 am
I started off really loving this story, but now I'm confused. Why would you sleep with his brother after you heard what he said in the bedroom?
Shenai needs to grow up, she is starting to get on my nerves. You either tell the man how you feel or you don't.
Jeremy is weak and Jeremiah is hypocrite. I mean why would you do that to your brother?
Ugggh I'm just confused. Hopefully the next update clears things up for me.
Date: July 06 2012 06:51 am
BUSTED!!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 06:42 am
Not good having sex with another woman on your wedding day!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 06:38 am
I love this story, but I don't understand what is going on now? If you really loved and cared for someone you would do all you can to be with them. If a man couldnt fight for our love or me just because of his parents, then I couldnt be with him. I know that relationships are tough without all the extra added stuff, but if he's married now, whats the point?? Let's not get started on sleeping with the brother and twin brother no less. Interested to see where you go from here.
Reviewer: PharmD Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 06 2012 02:21 am