I love this story, please update again soon. Because I hav ea feeling the when Eric's brother Matt meets Max he is going to like her alot.
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 01 2011 04:06 am
Any help you need Brenda, let me know. I had a difficult time getting the hang out of posting stories and now its a piece of cake. I usually just paste through word and that works great. Shoot me an email if you need assistance.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 03:49 am
love it!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 02:10 am
Lol i'm laughing because the look on their faces when he brought a black girl to meet the family lol remind me of a time when my best friend brought me to her house to meet her mother and father they want to die when they seen me lol. I can't wait to see what happen next like the story. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 01:53 am
So excited to see you here! Welcome to The Chamber girl!
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 01:38 am
No! Don't stop there! Great story.
Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 01:32 am
Hi Brenda :) I'm also a writer on fictionpress and so glad you decided to bring this story over here, and to the reviewers who thought you plaigarized (except for the one who apologized) just ignore them apparently they didn't your name read and see that this is your story
Reviewer: JLeshay Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 11:21 pm
This is a great story and I love the christian angle. Aura's respect for her body, which is the temple of God, is inspiring. I am a 38 year old virgin and proud of it! Please update soon. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Reviewer: brenda Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 10:36 pm
OH! I'm sooo sorry, Stupid me...I didn't read your name, and I thought you had jocked the story, I really do apologize :(
You're a really great author btw :)
Author's Response:
No problem. I'm glad you were on the lookout. I'd be upset if someone did jack my story. thanks Again!
Reviewer: Pinkconverselover Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 10:22 pm
Please update soon...This a really interesting and good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Hopefully I can add a few more chapters befoe the day's end. (If I can figure out the pix thing>) LOL
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 08:11 pm
Wonderful beginning. I can't wait to see how this goes. If you need any scriptures to help this man out. Let me know. LOL
Author's Response:
OH he knows the scriptures...hes just not applying them! LOL. Thanks for the review. More to come if I can get the pix to upload!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 07:43 pm
Great start to the story. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 07:31 pm
Supreb, please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 06:51 pm
This is going to be good!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:53 pm
Welcome Brenda!! When I saw you posting here, I was so excited!!!!! Love your stories and looking forward to reading them again. Will you also be posting Stereotypically Yours here as well. Love that story. So glad you're here as I find this site much much user friendly. Welcome to the Chamber and hope you like it here!!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks! I'm struggling here. this is my first time trying to post and it's been a challenge. I didn't realize it had to be a txt document. I got past that...now I'm trying to get the pix on the story. I like that about the chamber. I hope I'm doing this correctly, but I'm lost. This is actually a finished story, but as I said, I'm struggling here. LOL. Any pointers will be appreciated!
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:48 pm
Learn how to read. This is the SAME AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How rude!! What a way to welcome her to this site. You reviewers should be ashamed of yourself. Brenda, delete them all as well as mine!
Reviewer: This is the SAME AUTHOR.. Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:45 pm
You know if you two reveiwers took the time to read the name of the author, you would know that they are the same person. How uninformed can you be? Brenda please delete these two reviewers along with mine. Brenda you are writing a story and I am sure you do not want the ending given away from the other site, so just delete mine and theirs.
You rock Brenda, I cannot wait to read this again!
Reviewer: This is the SAME AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:41 pm
You jocked this from another writer off fictionpress! I've read this story before!!! Plagiarism is against the law you know!
Author's Response:
LOL I posted this on Fictionpress first and it was suggested that I also post here. I'm the same Brenda, but thanks for looking out for a sistah. LOL
Reviewer: Pinkconverselover Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:39 pm
Theif much? You totally jacked someone else's story, shame on you. I can recal writing a positive review on the story you jacked on another site.
Author's Response:
HI! I'm the same Brenda on Fictionpress! Thanks for having my back though. LOL
Reviewer: Popcornandmovies Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:36 pm
I am so glad you are writing on the Chamber! Yah!!
Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:35 pm
Is this story plagerized?!? I remember reading this EXACT same story on another site. Word for word the exact same... You should steal work that people have worked hard to write...
Reviewer: Amberandretti Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:32 pm
I've seen this story before on fictionpress!!!!! I'm going to tell the author about her story on this site and see if she gave you permisson to upload her already finished story to his site.
Author's Response:
I write for Fixction Press also. So it's my stuff! thanks for the look out.
Reviewer: Hannah Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:27 pm
interesting!!!.....love that she is an average size woman ...keep the updates coming please
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm going to try to add a few more chapters with pix, if I figure this stuff out! LOL
Reviewer: seachelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:12 pm
Ahh, the father doesn't seem to live what he preaches. Will he learn something from this? Aura seems to be a strong person and Jeremy has his own mind. Here's hoping they can withstand the attitude of the dad. Wonder what the ladies in the family think.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:06 pm
Woww Jeremy's father is something else. He should let Jeremy do what he feels like he's born to do and if thats modeling , so be it. He says that the modeling world is filled with sin with the drugs and gay men, but He should trust that how he's raised him and that his belief in God will stray him away from that. Aura seems like a nice girl and its good that Jeremy isn't shy on showing affection to her in public. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the wonderful reviiew! I'm having a little trouble because the Chamber is new to me. This story is actually complete but I'm trying to put some pix with the story to make it interesting. Im going to try to put pix with each chapter. Thanks again!
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 03:20 pm