One more thing! I'm not great at finding mistakes in my writing. I've tried and failed too many times. Try www.elance.com. You can post a job posting up for an editor, choose your budget and wait for people to approach you for the job. It's fab.Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/14 03:40 pm
I hope it's not considered harassment when I say, puh-lease update. That is all. :)
Of course not lol. I apprechiate it so much! I am working on editing the crap out of this story, publishing it, and I will surely post the sequel here as I work on it, as well. ;) Thanks for reading!Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/14 10:19 am
whens part 2 of the series coming out?!?!?!Reviewer: kiyosabi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/03/14 12:37 pm
Voices, this story occupies my everyday life. I find myself thinking about Jack, Chase & Lila almost daily!
You can't know how happy I am that you're making this into a mini series. This is one of my all time favorite stories EVER! Bible. I think partly because you give such distinct voices to each and every character. Marsha is a riot and I feel like I've met Frank even though he's hardly said a word! Usually fringe characters don't stay with me and I as a reader just go along to get along our whatever. Thank you for doing that & I think it's just brilliant use of language, the economy especially, if that makes any sense...
Lila's Chase's guidance counselor [tutor] so technically she's not his teacher. Semantics, I know, but still...
Chase's closet-wish is pretty much a reality & since Jack quit Jones-Day I put 20 on 10 he's gonna find himself in Massachusetts sooner or later...
Lila runs away from one brother then crashes into the other. It's the result of a perfect storm.
Is Cambridge really big enough for Chase & Lila to avoid each other successfully?
Also, who are Lily & Jake? Do they happen to know Case by any chance?
LOL it took me a minute to get that last sentence. I DIED laughing. Thank you for that.
And of course I have to also thank you for all of the beautiful reviews you've left me for Lila's Thunder. Not everyone has been on the same page with me with this story, Jack, Lila or Chase (and that's fine) but I have always felt like you GET me. You get my story and my characters that mean so much to me (yes even the minor ones that barely uttered a syllable)--so thank you.
And keep your eye out for the sequel. ;) Stay well.Reviewer: BabyPasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/14 08:19 pm
Thank you!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/14 01:28 pm
I've always thought that the relationship between Jack and Chase was much more important than any they would have with anyone else. They are FAMILY. They need to work on and mend the gaping hole in their relationship BEFORE they can have any other meaningful relationships. Lila in their lives was not conducive to that. Although she had good intentions, we know the old adage about the road to hell... and this was a prime example.
The ending was what it had to be. I had a hard time connecting to Lila, because of her choices. I'm looking forward to your next story about these folks, if you chose to do one.
I don't know why, but Jack made me so sad, 'cause he seemed as if he shouldered the burden of both Chase AND Lila. I just hope he finds someone who he can love and who can love him and only him. I don't feel that is Lila. I never got the sense that she really LOVED Jack. Because, imo, it was all about Chase. Everytime. Yeah, she slept with Jack, but I think it was possibly because even she couldn't cross that line with Chase and Jack was a passable substitute? I don't know, I just don't know. Jack just seemed much more invested in her than she was in him. And that is not good for him.
I'll stop my stream of consciousness, now. Chica, you really wrote a thought provoking tale. Well done.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/14 09:17 pm
I turely enjoyed this story. Your writing is beautiful. I felt as though I was a character in the story, and that's because the story comes alive, and that's because of your brillant writing. I hope one of your sequels is all about Chase. I really love this character, dare I say even more than Jake?Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/14 09:42 am
Awesome ending. I think that was the most genuine way to end everything! Great story read it all in one sitting.Reviewer: anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/14 10:02 pm
Are you just leavin the story like this&?
No happy ending?
I feel it's incomplete!
No happy ending for Lila and Jack OR Lila and Chase. Perhaps Jack and Chase need to find a way to their happy ending first?Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/14 11:28 am
What is this!?! 'Cause it surely isn't any way to end a story...hope there's an epilogue or a sequel in the works because if there isn't...let's just say that the ending is very important in a story. It doesn't have to be "happily ever after" or even "happy for now"...it's just that every story deserves an ending that will make the readers feel like they haven't just wasted a bunch of hours of their precious life! Give us a real ending please!
There are two sequels in the works, this is the first story of a series. Thank you for reviewing!Reviewer: Vv Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/14 11:19 am