IS THIS THE END?! THIS CANT BE THE END! PLEASE SAY THIS IS NOT THE END!?
Reviewer: kiyosabi Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/26/13 04:06 pm
Anxiously awaiting for more!!!!!!!! Major, major cliffhanger.
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: 03/21/13 08:38 pm
Great Story.....Please continue
Reviewer: RCR80 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/08/13 11:52 am
10 Stars..I hurt for them too. :(
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: 02/01/13 10:02 pm
OMG! I am need of an update ASAP!!!!!!!!! I can't believe it was jack! I loved jack! Now I hate jack! But yet I still love him! He has to have an explanation right? Please tell me a good explanation! OMG! I need an UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/30/13 06:40 pm
look for your story ever day love your work more soon
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/22/12 08:57 am
am team chase all the way...please let em end up together....jack is an idiot...
And chase ain that childish!
Please dont let jack be lilas thunder...
Yoh i cants dzeal really...
#team chase
Reviewer: africanblossom Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/21/12 08:37 am
Please update...mthisnis truly a wonderful written story.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: 12/16/12 03:38 pm
WHAAAAAAT THEEEEEE EVERLOVING FUUUUUUUUUCKKKKKKKKKKKK?????!!!!!!!! OMG!... *pauses, holds hand up*... Your newest fan here. Hi. Just introducing myself. But, uh... back to the story... WHAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTT???!!!! What the fuck are my eyes reading?! What are they seeing???!!!! What are these realistic images in my mind's eye???!!! ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS RIGHT NOW???!!!! JACK??!!! JACK???!!! JACK, WHO I HAVE LOVED FOR ALL THESE CHAPTERS???!!! JACK TOOK THE FUCKING PICTURES???!!! HE PLAYED HER???!!! HE PRETENDED TO BE MAD AT CHASE???!!! HE TRIED TO BEAT CHASE UP IN FRONT OF HER AND ASHLEY???!!! HE "PROTECTED" HER, STAYING AT HER APARTMENT FOR 3 DAYS????!!! JACK???!!! THE ONE AND THE SAME???!!! I am just............ *breathes*.............. I am just OUTDONE. I have NEVER, EVER, EVER, EVER, EVAAAAAAHHHHH been this riled up by a story in ALL of my days! Not in ALL my days!
YOU.......... you are brilliant. Honestly. I have no-
I have no words.
Please, update soon.
My, God.
I have no words.
SMH.
BRA-VO.
*faints*
Reviewer: Camille Signed [Report This]Date: 09/10/12 10:21 pm
I miss this story so much, so please hurry back!!!
Reviewer: Leoslove Signed [Report This]Date: 09/08/12 08:04 pm
I am definetly TEAM CHASE! Lila really deserves Chase, but I have to admit he needs to grow up a little. But I cannot believe that Jack took those pictures!!! What a jerk! But for some reason I had a feeling that he took those pictures.
Reviewer: Faith Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/03/12 05:46 pm
Please you've got to hurry up and post soon. Don't leave us on th cliff.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/22/12 11:46 am
Now, I am torn between Jack and Chase...In the beginning, I was for Jack all the way but Chase's love is so pure and real. I dont want either of them to get hurt...Hell, send Chase over to me...I dont think my husband willl mind :)
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: 08/17/12 04:57 pm
*happy dance* You're back and OMG! OMG! What a cliffhanger! Amazing chapter. Love the brothers, their characters and Lila with both of them. I can't imgaine Jack behind those photos, it must be someone else..can't wait for the next upate!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/12/12 06:21 pm
ok seriously, what the hell??? All three of these people need some serious counseling. Can't wait to hear the explanation for this one, from Jack. Also what kind of love does Lilia fell for Chase? Can this serious dysfunctional group be fixed? Only you can answer that :) Glad to have you back.
Reviewer: VAL1 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/12 12:45 pm
Great chapter as usual. Totally stunned at the end. Insomnia S., that short clip in your review is straight hilarious! I think that was both of our reactions, LOL
Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/09/12 10:48 pm
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't get Lila. Why does she put herself in situations with Chase?
I am so confused...........How could Jack have taken the photos if he's in them? Unless, they are still images of a video. I don't think Jack would be that DUMB; at least I hope not.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: 08/09/12 08:41 pm
WHATTTTTTTTTT!!!!! I spin my head round.....You are sadistic and I love it!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: 08/09/12 05:30 am
I don't think Jack did it, nor Chase for that matter. I think it's someone who is very clever and manipulative, someone who is well-connected or has an intimate knowledge -and access - of the Jack/Lila/Chase conundrum. And why? Why would a person or persons go to such extremes -be it revenge, envy, cruel intentions, etc., to obliterate the lives of three people whose mere existence is defined by survival?
A few scenarios seem plausible in my mind's eye, however, I'm just elated to journey this ride with you.
As for Lila and Chase...I'm glad Lila didn't 'go there' with him. He's hurting and now he's trying to exact himself into a bed that's already occupied by his brother. Chase put Lila into an impossible situation by asking her to deny her love for him. He knows she has love for him, but that's the extent of her affection...she's in love with Jack. Lila must come to terms with the reality that Chase is no longer the little boy whom she 'saved' and cared for all those years ago; he is now a man desperately hoping for the love that could never be. I think Chase now realizes that his attempt at seduction may have damaged his relationship with his friend.
Jack, man, get home quick! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thank you sharing this story with us. It is written superbly! The narrative isn't redundant from chapter-to-chapter; there's continuity within the plot points but executed from a different perspective with each segment and the updates are amazing and very generous.
Brava!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/12 11:04 pm
I'm SO glad that you updated! Fell in love with this story from the first chapter that I read. I really do hope that Jack isn't the one behind the photos. That would be so depressing and a major set back in his and Lila's relationship. After he worked tirelessly just to get her to open up and talk to him instead of trading jabs like baseball cards, it would suck if everything just deteriorated, and they fell back to square zero.
Chase's infatuation/love with Lila is a bit frightening and inappropriate considering she's an educator. I get it. I've had crushes on my teachers in the past, but he should be mindful of the position he's putting Lila in, and she's certainly not doing herself any favors, by constantly being around him. It seems all three of them feed off one another's energy, but I love the dynamic between Lila and Jack. I'm almost scared to know what's going to happen in the next chapter for the simple fact things have a tendency to get blown out of proportion. I know accusations will fly...hopefully the truth will be revealed, but all in due time.
Thank you so much for updating!!!!
Reviewer: Lapis Love Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/12 10:05 pm
That was my reaction after reading the last sentence.
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I'm no teacher so I cannot say much about the writing I can only share my emotions after reading you story.
So have a good day/night hope to see an update soon ^_^
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/12 09:52 pm
OMG...why did he do that?
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/12 07:37 pm
Did Jack REALLY take them? I didn't think he was behind the photos.
Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/12 12:20 pm
Whatttttttt!??!?!?!? Nooooo it CAN'T be him! Uh uh, please tell me its actually Bitsy or Ashley or someone framing him. Also when it comes to Lila's true love I'm team Jack and Lila allllll the way, Chase is sweet and all but he's a BABY and Jack is her thunder.
I understand that Chase is head over heels but he's a boy I hope that Lila is simply temporarily getting her platonic feelings of love for Chase mixed up. I love the Lila/Jack dynamic, I feel its two equals coming together, and I love to watch them overcome all the massive obstacles in their path to eachother. I love the way they fight and I love the way they make up. I hope that eventually Jack and Chase can mend their relationship, I hope it can still be done even if Lila chooses Jack and I can't wait till we finally find out who's been stalking Lila! I hope things are not as they appear at the end of this chapter! lol Thanks again for updating!
Reviewer: Mlisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/12 12:23 am
OMG dont leave us hanging like that!!! PLEASE update soon. This is almost sinful!! LOL
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: 08/07/12 11:30 pm