I wonder if Chase is responsible for the job offer at Harvard.  In addition, who gave the money that she needed for the class trip.  I think that Lila is in love with both brothers.  Thanks

Thanks for a great update.  I like Chase but he can't have Lila because she is to old for him.  Thanks

OMG!!!!!! That was a hell of a rllercoaster ride. Who does she really want? Does she even know? Please update again soon... I'm dying to see what happens with this threesome....

BTW, you got some awesome writing skills....

"No, I get it. That's fine. Chase will be there to whisper sweet nothings in your ear and I'll be there to fuck them all away when they turn you on. Everybody knows their place now.".........

Yep. That line is on point. WTF Lila? Do you want Chase because you are confused. Obviously. You're a talented writer, but I hate female characters who like both brothers, and end up playing with emotions. Make up your mind. 

This story has been elliciting some pretty strong responses between either love or hate for the characters. But girl I gotta say, you have me hooked either way. These characters are all flawed, yes ALL of them, even Lila. We can't always expect for the heroine to be the one to make all the right choices and never be confused or conflicted. Just reading the story so far, I'm already conflicted between Jack and Chase and its only been 7 chapters. The chemistry between Jack and Lila is so intense and I want them to be together, yet there is something about Chase that I can't forget even though I know it's wrong because of his age. It's like there's this itty bitty part of me that wants to see what would happen between them. I just hope that no matter what the brothers will reconcile eventually. Can't wait for another update! Just keep writing the way you want it to happen and I'll be happy.

"No, I get it. That's fine. Chase will be there to whisper sweet nothings in your ear and I'll be there to fuck them all away when they turn you on. Everybody knows their place now.".........

That one line sums up the entire concept of twitsed emotions in this story. I LOVE IT!!!! I know Chase is young and all, but his boyish charm mixed with his filthy mouth is extremeeeeely sexy. Jack's manly, dominant character is sexy as well, but I feel like since Chase is young, he may just be more passionate and sensual in his acts, while Jack is more forceful and hard. The caveman thing was a turn on though, haha. My heart goes out to Chase, his feelings must be shreaded to scraps now.  I hope Lia finds a way to still have a deep connection with him, and in the event they dont end up together, be able to help Chase get closure with his feelings so he can move forward in his life, and still be close.

Lila is in a tough spot, people may not realize that. Having a deep realtionship with someone for an exteded amout of time doesnt just evaporate in the blink of an eye. She is not trying to lead Jack and Chase on. She is not purposefuly playing with emotions, but she does love them both (if supposedly not the same way. Personally, I think she does have feelings for Chase, even if they are slight). So how is she suppose to apease them both, without hurting either's feelings, andddd guide them into brotherly love? Like I said, a TOUGH spot

Now, Voices, I would just like to comend you on your exsquisite writing. You are truly gifted, please continue this story. Kodoes to the smexy scenes and the strong, electric diologue. Smoothe transitions and proper grammar really can make or break a story, and you have done an excelant job. Thank you for sharing your talent with all us readers out there. Im a HUGE fan :D

i may have spelled some stuff wrong...so...my bad...but, Happy Writing!!

Thanks for a great update.  I can't believe that Lila is going to go with Jack.  

Great start to the story.

Okay...I'm truly disgusted with Lila. From the get go I did not like this character at all. I feel like she's the block that prevents these brothers from really sitting down and confronting their feelings surrounding their parent’s death and really mending their fractured relationship. Family matters and Lila is heartless and selfish if she continues to pit these brothers against each other. 

Oh she may not have done it intentionally but make no mistake she pitted them against each other, especially Chase against Jack. The constant tension and arguments between her and Jack concerning how Chase should be taken care off would have made the brothers disagree even more (and I'm pretty sure kids can pick up signs when adults are in conflicts with each other). In the beginning sure she may have felt she needed to comfort Chase and she did, inappropriately too, but completely opening her home (giving him a key...I'm pretty sure there's something wrong with that ethically since she's his teacher) so that Chase could have ran to her alone and away from his brother. She became is solace, a refuge to Chase and so he started developing inappropriate feelings for her which she knew was occurring. By allowing Chase a "place" to shut out his brother he could have avoided any means for Jack to have an input in his life, when Jack really wanted to have a relationship with his brother. Jack is made out to be the villain, trying to take away/destroy Chase's solace by preventing him from staying by (spending time with) Lila when he just wanted his brother home for dinner...get where I'm coming from? 

She should have sit Chase down and explained to him that what he was feeling for her was not okay, especially if she knew "she was always belonged to Jack" (really? He treated her like a dog!). But noo she ignored it like an astringe sticking its head in the sand. How could she not see disaster written all over this situation! Was she somehow compensating her unresolved issues concerning her sister's death by having Chase dependent on her? If so, she is being unfair to him.

I feel like she used Chase as her trump card against Jack because he treated her so horrible. By having his brother in her corner she had one up against him. In the beginning Chase was young and she felt like he needed someone to be there for him constantly, he was hurting and struggling to cope with his parents death. To her Jack was not filling that comforting, supportive system to Chase. But Lila needs to excuse the hell out of Jack if he wasn't what she wanted him to be for Chase at that exact moment. He had just lost his parents just like Chase and was hurting too. He needed to heal too, so obviously his coping with Chase and himself at the same time would not have been the best. Oh and Jack buddy you did not help matters by being so damn aggressive and mean to Lila, grow a pair buddy. The only one is see faultless in this is Chase, Lila and Jack were adults...they should have handled it better.

How did Lila help the situation really? How did she open the lines of communication between these brothers? How could she think it would be okay to screw one brother who loves her and ignore the other brother who loves her too? Really Lila?

She completely replaced Jack in Chase's affection and became everything to him, and then completely ignores him instead or of sorting it out like an adult. And then she goes and acts like a jealous woman when she sees Chase with another woman because he's a 'man' now. Well if that isn’t mixed signals I don’t know what is...smh. What she needs to do is figure out what she wants instead of trifling with these men emotions! Stay away from them and let them resolve their issues and heal their family before you damage it further Lila.

You are by far one of the more talented writer's I've read on this forum, you can tell by how much you have me invested in these characters. Continue the good work.

This was another amazing chapter. Jack and Lila have this thing about them that makes them like a blazing fire. Chase thinks he love Lila because she has been there for him after the death of his mother. I dont know if he loves her or is obsessed with her but the lines have been blurred and hopefully this moment helps Chase move forward instead of staying in his comfort zone. I feel bad for Lila because she true loves both Jack and Chase but differently. With Jack I think she needed him to treat her crappy because she didn't have to deal with her feelings. She was able to hide behind the fact that Jack was an ass and he treated her like crap. So she was able to focus on Chase and his needs. But even though Chase thinks he knows her he doesn't truly know her because Lila has onlt allowed both Jack & Chase to see the parts of her that she needed them to see. Jack is the same way he doesn't know how to let himself let people in so he keeps them at arms length. He was final honest with Lila, now I hope he and Chase open up to each other. Looking forward to the next chapter.

yes but maybe chase just needs to get away and realize that though she is his first love, it cannot be, because he's too young. there's no way he can compete with his brother.

Wow!  I guess Chase has finally seen Jack and Lila together and he has run off.  I don't think the blond is for him.  I hope Chase finds a woman and accepts the fact that Lila and Jack belong together. Why does he think his brother will hurt her?  Is he blinded by the love he feels for her?  This story is so intense and I can't wait for more.