Reviews For Lila's Thunder
Title: Chapter 7

Wowzer! You haven't updated in so long I'd almost forgetten how good this saga is in all its meandering ways.

Lila Lila Lila, tsk tsk tsk...You...like...Dramah!!! Yes you do cuz why else do you still NOT know that You are the Eye of the Storm! You ARE the problem, maybe not at its root orby design but nonetheless you have fed the Beast even after your moment of clarity.

Jack, Are you a masochist? That's all I wanna know really. It would explain some of you choises and upside down reactions in my opinion.

Chase.Sigh. I mean at least Jack has had her now multiple times. But all you've had are hugs and you are even more obssessed with Lila than your brother! Makes one wonder if Lila is the Primary goal or if she's just the best way of getting to Jack.

I can't wait for an update I'm such a fiend.

*Waiting to re-read chapter 127 times for further clinical disection*

Loves It!

Reviewer: BabyPasha Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 03:45 pm

Title: Chapter 7

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I just can't....

 

I wish Lila would set it straight with Chase! That's what annoying me with her, but I can imagine that she's worried of their relationship in the years to come if she "shoots him down" since he is in love with her as more than just an older influential person in his life. He's hooked on to her because she's always been there--he probably doesn't know how to still love her outside of the love he wants from her.

Reviewer: Inthenykoftime Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 03:30 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I really don't like Lila at all. In fact i highly dislike her with a passion! Now no matter what feelings she feels for either brothers she needs to realise they're brothers and her selfishness is breaking them up. Ugh sometimes you just wanna be like "She aint nuttin special!" - Witten beautifully though good job!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 10:50 am

Title: Chapter 7

Ugh, both Lila and Chase are annoying. Lila needs to make up his mind. She makes me sick. Does she like Jack or Chase? And Chase is annoying!!!!!!!!!!! He needs to stop begging and has some dignity and self respect.  If Lila is not interested in him he needs to move on.

Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 07:58 am

Title: Chapter 7

Honestly I'm not liking Lila at all. What does this woman wants. She is sleeping with Jack, but gets jealous of Chase with other girls. Jack and Chase needs to leave her alone and try to build their relationship. They are brothers and honestly Lila doesn't deserve it. I don't like Chase he is annoying. And Lily is acting like a slut. She needs to make up her mind or leave both brothers alone.

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 07:49 am

Title: Chapter 7

Lila is disgusting, this is just disgusting. I mean the chapter was HOT, no doubt about that. But Lila just pissed me off. don't want to sound harsh or mean, but Lila is acting like a total slut. She is playing with both brothers. She should have let Jack leave. She was avoiding Chase like a plague because she knew that their relationship wasn't normal and also because of their age. Now all of a sudden she sees Chase with someone else, she gets jealous? And has some feelings for him? This woman is sick. Jack needs to leave her and fast. She is not worth it. She is making Jack the villain here, while in reality its her. She is such a selfish bitch. She wants to sleep with Jack, but at the same time it seems as if she has feelings for Chase.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 07:43 am

Title: Chapter 7

Chase is annoying. Like he needs to grow up. I can understand where he's coming from but he's annoying me. I love Jack though! Him and Lila have great passion :)

Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 07:14 am

Title: Chapter 7

Wow. Just... wow. Great job. Glad to hear school is going well. Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 06:47 am

Title: Chapter 7

I missed this story sooooo much! Not even kidding. I love this story as much as Jack loves Lila's ass....well mabye not that much lol. You've tured the epicness up full notch! I feel so bad for Lila she is screwd...in more ways than one ;) lol. Your writing is fantastic and i cant wait to see how this turns out!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 06:43 am

Title: Chapter 7

This is such a nasty mess with these brothers! I almost wish Lila would tell them both to screw off and leave for good. Them alternating between telling her they want her and calling her a slut is getting to be a bit much.

So complicated and so good!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 7

Dang, I don't know who to choose. If only Lila were younger, it would be Chase all the way. Hopefully this kid doesn't do anything too stupid.

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 06:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

This story is worth the wait! Such hotness and torment and lust and torture!! More pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.

Reviewer: mocha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 05:45 am

Title: Chapter 7

Oh Damn . This was just all to much and not enough . Just OUTSTANDING . Where do we go from here with Lila and Jack and Lila and Chase . There are no words except please update soon .         :D

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 05:41 am

Title: Chapter 7

OMG!! I honestly do not know. I really don't. I like Chase and I like Jack. Chase is young though, but he has this passion that just burns were Lila is concerned. But then, again so does Jack which is the obvious choice for Lila. I don't want Chase to be hurt, but it seems there is no way around it. I don't want Jack hurt, either. Both Chase and Jack are sweethearts, maybe if Lily had a twin, lol.

I don't know what's going to happen, but what I do know is that this story is super good. I do not want Chase to do something reckless, him moreso than Jack. What is Lila going to do?

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 05:38 am

Title: Chapter 7

You know that was fucked up what Chase did....leaving her door wide open and taping a pic of a nude Lila and Jack to her front door for the whole world to see? Nah, son...dude would at least get cursed out.  Everyone handles Chase with kid's gloves....it's like damn...

You're a good writer...I have to give you that. I don't know where this story is going but with that job interview at Harvard of all places which Lila was supposedly "blindsided" by and all the other little ish that happens when her and Chase are around each other...it's like I can see the writing on the wall. I'm going to be real honest...I might not continue with the story.  However, I would love it if Jack has his own story....just want to throw that out there (because there are just some subtle clues that make me think that it's not going to be Jack and Lila.) I could be wrong though...

I kind of wished she would have let Jack leave.  What is it about Lila that has Chase and Jack so fucking obsessed with her?  I still think they all need therapy or....something especially Lila and Chase.  That grandmother is a mess.



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Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 7

That was hot!!!!  I really hate that Chase got hurt, Lila din't handle that well at all.  Jack doesn't seem to care that their relationship  would hurt Chase.  Lila knew how Chase felt about her and she didn't say talk to him about his feelings and let him down easliy!!  I love this story!!



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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 6

Please Please Please update!!!! I'm dying to know what happens next!

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 04:14 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Sweet baby Jesus in the making

I would like to make a constructive, well articulated comment or something more elaborate but I can't...good God i'm writeless(don't care let's create a strange new word that does not exist).

I was scrolling(arrows) slowly and then I read Lila's eyes flew open I thought that Chase was there...8-O Oh boy I would have gone bananas over that. %*@:-)

Gosh these 2 don't waste time don't they !?

Okay can't wait for an update in a near future.  *^_^*

 

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2012 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 6

OH! My god! Voices! That shi$ was hot as hell damn that was good! Girrrl Jack tore that a$$ up! Well I cant wait to see what she thinks of that statement he made at the end. I will be hungrily awaiting the next chapter my dear and thank you so much for the update, my applause go out to you!

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2012 07:05 am

Title: Chapter 6

Brilliance. Continue on.

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2012 11:50 pm

Title: Chapter 6

*Sigh.* That was the HOTTEST thing I've read in awhile.  Man...*Sighs again.*

Reluctantly, I have to address "the elephant in the room, "  Chase.  What is the grandmother up to?  This Chase "thing" is all so frustrating.  So Chase donated the money for the kids' trip?  Hmm....I see Lila was a little happy about that and then thought that what she did in the truck was a mistake but her flesh is so weak...though I loved reading the sex scene on the kitchen floor, I have a feeling that it was just GREAT sex for Lila and nothing more. Jack is gone but I KNEW he was even before I read the "I love you."  Lila's response...well I will just say this...IF Chase is the one she's going to end up with...I'm going to need a little chapter that focuses more on Chase and his thoughts. I feel like I don't know much about him besides the facts that he's a BOY (who took his parents' death hard)....and is obsessed with Lila. He's not my favorite character in this story right now.  Just saying. 

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2012 05:46 am

Title: Chapter 6

Wonderful! Granny is something else huh? she's got some tricks up her sleeves. I wonder how Chase is going to react to Lila and Jack being together at dinner.

ooo you have to update SOON

Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2012 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 6

Wow!  What will they do now.  Lila is surprised by his love.  Does Jack mean it.

Where were his grandparents when all of this was going on.

Chase will have to accept this... I think He loves Lila as a mother...since he was sooo close to her.

Thanks for the update.

 

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2012 01:02 am

Title: Chapter 6

Oh *hit! It's about time those two hit it. That was hot. Jack loves Lila and he admitted it. I hope Lila doesn't run and admits her feelings for him too. They need to talk to Chase together! Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2012 06:09 pm

Title: Chapter 6

This story is too good! I love Jack and Lila. I just feel completely miserable for Chase. He is such a sweet kid, well young man. He absolutely adores Lila and for good reason, she the most constant and beautiful thing in his life. But sadly, not for him. I swear if he could just be 5 years older or more, I don't think Jack would have a chance, because while I believe that Jack has fell for Lila completely; Chase seems as though Lila is an addiction, as he said, 'in his bones'. He loves her ridiculously and I thought that maybe he is just confused a little since Lila came into his life at such a young age and filled that role that a parent should have been filling, but it is deeper than that because I think Chase has always been attracted to Lila, even at twelve.

But it was most likely a crush and Lila did not pay it any mind to know to let go a little and she did not listen when people told her Chase was crushing hard. I think she just though that it was just his admiration he had for her helping him so much, but is was much more. But I can tell he is trying to let her go because he knows she would not go there with him, but he is hurting bad and I don't like that at all.

I hope he finds someone he loves and who loves him back equally, but he is still so young, he has time to fall in love. Right now he has to finish growing up. Anyway, great update!! I cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2012 06:05 pm



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