Reviews For Lila's Thunder
Title: Chapter 5

Wow!!!

I so want Lila and Jack to hok up already!

I hope Grandma lays down the law with Jack and Chase and makes them both go to counseling.

There is so much hurt and pain they both have. 

The girl Chase is getting along with at work needs to be his new love interest. 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2011 02:09 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow Grandma!  LOL.  This chapter was something else.  Loving the sensitve side of Jack.  The pain of Chase and Jack is so evident.  How are those two ever going to get back in good standing with each other?

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 11 2011 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 5

Thank you! This was great, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2011 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 5

This is a disaster waiting to happen, one of them needs to think of Chase.  Lilia knew that Chase had a crush on her and should have addressed it.  Now that little boy or should I say young man will get hurt.  Because two adults buried their heads in the sand.  Chase because he really couldn't face his new responsibilty and Lily because she refused see what was in front of her face.  This maybe the first time that I don't want there to be a HEA!!  Chase you need to date a girl your own age.  Lily is in love with James and no other man nor little stands a chance.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2011 12:14 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh my god does Tracy is  insinuated that Lila should date Chase o_O?

What a naughty woman ^_^ if it so.

Love the interactions between the characters.

Waiting for an update.

Good job

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2011 04:32 am

Title: Chapter 3

Love this story and can't wait to see how things work out.

Reviewer: indycoolchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2011 02:15 pm

Title: Chapter 4

This story is so good; I think Lila and Jack are made for each other. Lila's character may appear soft and gentle but underneath she is strong. I guess she has to be after the death of her sister and doing the job that she is doing as a counsellor which at can be emotionally giving and at times draining. I think in her eyes her relationship with Chase, was that as a big sister/mother type but I didn't think that Lila thought that after five years she would still have such a big involvement in his life.

That I think is due to a number of different reasons. Jack's not being around- no fault of his, he was dealing with his own grieve over his parents. I want to know why there weren’t other female figures around; I know that Chase and Jack's grandmother is still around, I wonder what her involved is like in grandsons’ lives. It must of being hard for her as well, grieving a lost of a child.

I think that Lila needs a man, that is assertive and strong who will be able to deal with her. I think at times she can shut people and not let them get too close out of her own fears. I think that Jack is ideal man to help her heal her and in the long term heal himself.

P.S Voices, who are the actors or models you chosen to be Lila and Jack? Both are very attractive.

Reviewer: Casmia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2011 04:48 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Awe poor Chase I feel for him... hope he finds someone... this was a treat thanks for the update I will be looking for more...:)

Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2011 08:09 am

Title: Chapter 4

Jack and Lila are fantastic together!  They just gel, even when they're bickering they're still soul-mates imo. Would Chase accept them as a couple? Could he? I believe wholeheartedly that he loves Jack...he just feels neglected and dejected by his brother.

I'm curious about Chase, actually i'm worried about him.  It appears that he's a loner and lonely and Lila is his only lifeline, or was until Jack took her away from him.  If he doesn't have Lila as his salvation, the what's left for him to hold on to? How does he cope with reality?

There's also the question of how he perceives his relationship with Lila to be...does he love her as a friend or a maternal substitute, or does he have romantic aspirations for her?  hmmm, interesting.

Fantastic update!

 

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2011 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh my God this story is outstanding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love the dynamic between Jack and Lila. (by the way did you take those names from 24? Jack bauer mixed with a little Tony Almeida? Cause I can totally see it!) Chase seems like he might do something crazy, I really hope not. I wonder if he was the one that really donated the money that way he could get her to hawaii and try something out of the view of his brother and the faculty. Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

I did get the name 'Almeida' from 24 but I never made the 'Jack' connection until now. lol  The name Almeida was always sooo sexy to me, it just rolls off the tongue.  Glad you're enjoying LT :)

Reviewer: Monique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2011 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Great update. Jack was quite generous.Hope Chase gets himself together.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2011 07:31 am

Title: Chapter 4

Love to see them "biting" at each other. It shows their determined and strong willed characters and adds a spark in each of your chapters. Simply marvelicious!

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2011 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 4

What a great update? What will Tracy do with Jack...in reality of the story they are very much alike.

I think if they get together-Jack and Chase will eventually get closer.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2011 12:38 am

Title: Chapter 4

Fantastic update - absolutely love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter....

Reviewer: ammalicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Those were such great scenes with Jack and Lila.  I understand Lila so much more now and I understand Jack-I've ALWAYS understood him. I think he IS a nice guy despite what Lila and his brother thinks...at least Lila is realizing that Jack is not so bad.  The scene in the truck with her spilling her guts  TO him and her seeing the kindness in his eyes changed that.   She has feelings for him too (yeah she was jealous of Jessica)...and he cares about her too.  However, I noticed that Lila is still hesitant to move forward considering the chat she had with her friend in the school's cafeteria.  I LOVE her friend by the way.

Chase, poor Chase. I wish he would live his life and not seem so heartbroken over a grown woman...if anything he should see Lila as the big sister he's never had but he's acting like he is so lovesick. He even said he doesn't want to go Harvard and I think one of the reasons is because Lila is not there (hence him asking the most absurd question...wanting her to go with him).  Why can't he find friends his own age? I think he needed and still needs therapy.  What about Jack?  Sure.  Lila. Definitely yes...she's a grief counselor but she needs her own therapist to discuss of her feelings of loss with...

This was a REALLY GOOD chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

 

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 11:10 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Jack is fine. go head and break of him off a piece!!  Lila treat yourself to some good loving and put the both of you out of your mutual misery.  Although Jack needs to piss or get off the pot.  Jack if you want Lila quit insulting her and woo her.  I love this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I really liked how Lila and Jack got along in this chapter. I can't wait for them to finally get together!

Chase, Chasse, Chase, he is too young for Lila and needs to find a girl his own age. He knows how Jack feels about Lilla but he doesn't care. He's too busy making Jack out to be the bad guy.

I hope the three of them can come to some kind of civil understanding and get on with their lives. 

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 10:27 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I get why Chase is so standoffish to his brother. He feels completely abandoned by him. As a teenager, it's going to take some real effort from Jack to win his trust back.  I would love for Lila to find a way to help Chase socialize more, maybe find some other students headed to the same college or so young woman with similar interest.

I like Jack and Lila banter, they have great chemistry. However, I understand Lila's hesistation. She doesn't want to add to the wall between sibling, so until Chase gets that she has no physical interest in him, she will probably wait.

Excellent update as always.

 

Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 10:05 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I have to defend Jack for a minute when it comes to Chase. I feel like he gets the bad end of the deal because he wasn't there for Chase the way he needed to be. But I feel like Jack didn't know how to deal with his parents death anymore then Chase did, Chase reverted into himself and Jack did the same thing. Chase became obsessed with Lila, Jack became obsessed with work. yes Jack was the adult but he was a 23 year old not really an adult even though his age said he was given the responsibility of a teenager. He didn't know how to deal with that and he still doesn't. Jack doesn't know how to relate to Chase but he has done things in his power to make sure Chase had someone. And in the beginning of the story he also made sure he didn't do anything to hurt Chase. But maybe he needs to, maybe that is the only way for Chase to open up to Jack is for Jack to do something to piss him off. Either way both were given a raw deal but they are so much a like that they don't know how to deal with each other.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 08:37 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I enjoyed this chapter very much. I so wish Jack and Lila would stop dancing around each other like they are some teenage crush. I think if Lila also was straight with Chase then maybe the kid would have a chance to be happy but then again Chase has closed himself off to everyone but her so his obsession with her is so not healthy and instead of doing something about it Lila let it grow. She wants her kids to be open about things but Lila can't even tell herself the truth much less anyone else. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 08:29 pm

Title: Chapter 4

This chapter was full of drama. Chase needs to find someone his own age. I'm sure there are plenty of pretty sistas that would love to date him. As for Lila she know she wants that man. Go for it. She only gets to live once. Why not be happy and in love. Terreffic chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 4

That was great. It was nice to see Jack and Lila be civil to one another. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 05:36 pm

Title: Chapter 2

AMAZING!!!! The intensity, the passion, between Lila and Jack is explosive and had me sitting on the edge of my seat wiping the drool away lol. Excellent job!

Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 05:23 pm

Title: Chapter 4

The last part of the chapter was a little confusing? Where they talking about Jack or Chase? If its Jack why does Lila says he is 10 years too old for Jack?? Because if I'm not mistaking Jack is about the same age as her.

And as for Chase, I just don't know what to think of him. He is kind of annoying with his bad attitude and pity party. Jack should have been there for him more. But every time when Jack try's to talk to him he shuts him down. And I think that it has a lot to do with Lila.

Lila made a huge mistake in letting Chase get to attached to him. This is all her fault. And even though Chase will turn 18 and legal. It will be just weird for them to be involved with each other. What does a 28 year old woman has to do with a 18 year old boy. What do they have to talk about? Besides, she knew this boy since he was 13. She practically saw him grow up. It would be just weird and gross.

Reviewer: a reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 05:03 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I'm with Tracy!  REPORT BACK, STAT!

Enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 03 2011 02:33 pm



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