Reviews For Lila's Thunder
Title: Chapter 1

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This might be my favorite story on The Chamber.

 

Chapter 3 was so intense – Lila finally coming to the realisation that the attachment Chase has for her isn't the type that brothers and sisters have for each other. Losing both parents at such a young age will damage anyone, and losing his big brother in the process – well most of us wouldn’t be able to deal with such massive losses. Chase has clung onto Lila not realising that maybe his big brother was using work to deal with his loss. Chase thinks he knows Jack, but he only knows what Jack shows him. But that’s not to let Jack off of the hook. He hasn’t behaved very responsibly towards his brother and as they say actions speak louder than words. He says he loves Chase, but he hasn’t really shown Chase that much love.

 

I’m really looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Yasmin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 05:44 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I LOVE this story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: mocha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 05:39 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Voices,

TY for the update.  I will say that I was shocked about Lila's sister's name because that is my name so to have it on head stone was a bit creepy. LOL.  Lila going to Jack's OMG!!!! Bring it on,

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 04:38 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Really loving the interplay between the characters!  I really feel for Chase and all he's been through, but he is definitely too attached to Lila.

Jack is so hot and even though it'll hurt Chase quite a bit, I'd love to see he and Lila together.

Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 04:23 pm

Title: Chapter 3

That was an intense chapter because Jack and Lila are dancing around each other and I feel like Lila finally understands that Chase is way too attached to her. He loves her but there is something between her and Jack and its not just on Jack's side of things. Maybe Lila and Jack both used Chase to stay connected but hopefully the both of them begin to open up to each other because I think at the end of the day they can help each other, and it will help Chase possibly even understand Jack a little better. Because Chase thinks he knows Jack, but he only knows what Jack shows him and Jack will understand Chase better. Looking foraward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 04:20 pm

Title: Chapter 3

This is getting good. Lila and Jack need to admit their attraction. I like how Lila cares for her students. I really hate she did not just talk to Chase before. I love this story please another update. I want to see when they are just going to let go

Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 04:10 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Lila has gone way past any professional boundaries. Chase has romantic feelings for her. She is in denial or is she? Chase and his brother needs to communicate more while LiLa needs to withdraw from Chase. Lila has in many ways surplanted James in his relationship with Chase. She is selfish in her own attachment to Chase, could he be a replacement for the sister who is dead? He should be out dating girls and having friends while not hanging around her all the time. She should take charge before Chase begins to think he has a right to her in a romantic sense and begin to act upon those feelings. He needs to get a life also. Lila is the common denominator in both brother's relationship whether it be good or bad. Lila needs to let go and allow Chase to grow up because he is too dependent on her. I believe she may have been lonely and grieving for her loss also.

Reviewer: Love Drama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 03:44 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I feel bad for Chase but at the same time, I think he is kind of pathetic. He is acting as if he was a 13 year old boy. I know how hard it can be when you loose your parents at such a young age. But he needs to grow the hell up. His special treatment from Lila has to stop. He has to learn to be independent and think about his feature. Everything for him resolves around Lila and that is just wrong.

I'm glad that Lila had this talk to him because this thing they have going on here has to stop. Especially for Chase sake. Lila is a grown woman and already has her future. She went to collage and lived her life. Chase didn't. I know that she really care for him, but she has to start pushing him away so that he can man up. As painful as it may be She needs to make things clear with him. This is all Lila's fault. She baby him to much with her "speacial treatment". Her job was to tutor him and not take care of him as if he was her responsibility. She crossed the line.

I also think Chase is being hard on Jack.  He is acting as if he is the only one who lost his parents. Yes they may have millions on their back account, but that doesn't mean that because of that Jack needs to stop working to be at Chase disposal when ever he wants. Everyone deals with their grieve at their own way. Chase is being very ungrateful towards Jack. Jack didn't have to take chase in and be his guardian. Especially at a young age. But he did. He could have left him to go to foster care. But he didn't. Maybe he did need to give Chase attention. But he got in to this situation so suddenly. Maybe he didn't know how to be a parent and how to take care of Chase. And on top of that he had do deal with his grieving too. SO to me Chase is being very ungrateful and hard on his brother.

I'm glad that Jack wants to fight for Lila. If Chase is determent to have Lila without caring about Jack's feelings, then why should Jack hold back? Chase is selfish and cares only about him, what want, what he feels and what he needs. When Jack try to get close or have a talk with him, he pushes him away. Jack is trying but Chase for some reason just don't wants to.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 03:25 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Jack,Jack, Jack.... (SMH)

Everyone deals with grief in their own way.  A part of me feels sorry for Jack, yet I feel sorrier for Chase who felt abandoned by his brother.  Now that it appears that Jack and Lila will get together, Chase will feel betrayed by the both of them.  So sad.

Yet I'm on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 12:06 pm

Title: Chapter 2

What a sexy pair!! I just hope that Chase doesnt get hurt in the process :(...maybe you should create a girl for him...I love his innocence and love for Lila...

The fact that Lila and Jake have "somewhat" of a past is very interestiing... I cant wait to find out more about that. I def love these two and cant wait for some loving between the two

Reviewer: Leogina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 2

wow! HAD MY HEART POUNDING! not so patiently waiting for more.

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 10:18 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Wow, how intense! Wonder what'll happen next?

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 07:52 am

Title: Chapter 2

I fear for Jack's life in the presence of Chase.

It sucks that he decides to fire Lila, what an idiot.

Well, i love it hope to see more of these trio.

 

P.S.What? Lila and Jack had some history together O_O''

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 05:35 am

Title: Chapter 2

Love the tension between Jack and Lila. It's tight and taut waiting to be snapped anytime soon!

BTW, just couldn't comprehend why Lila is crying in front of Jack's hotel room and the fact that her answer to Jack defies with her action. Hope you can elaborate further as I know readers will be interested to know more on their history, thanks. 

 

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 04:38 am

Title: Chapter 2

Damn....just damn!

Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 07:59 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Ah, a complex story. I like.

Symph

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 2

There's so much to say about this chapter.  I will start with Lila first...I don't understand her at all and what was that scene in the hotel about?  Her crying and saying she wants "Nothing" for Jack but almost humping him silly?  Her relationship with his brother IS weird.  Chase is such a poor lost soul....Jack *tried* with him in chapter one and Chase seemed to be cold in return. I don't get WHY he is the bad guy in this story at all.  Jack DIDN'T HAVE TO  take Chase in and be his legal guardian at a young age...he could have just left him to go to foster care which in many instances is much WORSE than the so call bad treatment Jack supposedly gives him.  *Rolls eyes.*   Chase does seem like he can lose it though...especially over Lila. I don't get his obsession with her. How OLD is Lila again?  Like I said their relationship is MAD WEIRD.  I see that you have a pic with all three of them now...I hope you aren't going to turn this into a some kind of sick triangle.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!!! I'm digging the tension and everything about this. Please don't make us wait too long for the next segment.

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 03:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

wow, that all ihave to say which is a good wow. i feel she may go to a dark place, since chase is like a kid brother taken away from a  family member. i do see both point of veiw. keep going with your story.

Reviewer: pocket Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 2

Good stuff...good stuff

Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

Lovely update, looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you!

Reviewer: ammalicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 2

awesome doesnt begin to describe it, the chamber has the best writers ever

Reviewer: nikol Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 2

Great start!! More please!

Reviewer: ginawilhelmina Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 2

It is getting good now. Keep the chapters coming. I love this story.

Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 11:13 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Another intense chapter. I have to say if Jack would open his mouth and talk instead of saying nothing and letting peeps be pissed at him he might be able to have a relationship with both Lila and Chase. He is trying to protect himself as well and since he doesn't know how to handle the situation he would rather them hate him then understand him. Chase needs to step back and grow up a little too. I don't know if I believe him to be in love with Lila but I think he is very much attached to her for the wrong reasons. He needs her for some reason and instead of telling his brother how he feels or even Lila he focuses on something he has control over. Chase needs to be separated from Lila because he depends way too much on her for something that not even she can give him. IS it inappropriate, maybe but I think Jack, Lila, and Chase are very much three lost souls that would rather dance around the issue rather than face it. Lila uses Chase to ignore what truly is going on with her and Jack and she fears Chase learning the truth even though she wont admit the truth, which is she really wants Jack and I might be wrong but she uses Chase a little to stay close to Jack.

All three of them need to have an explosive talk because basically this is going to explode and when it does it won't be pretty. Another great chapter and I am looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 09:52 pm



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