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Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

I've just started reading this fic and it's off to a great start. Loving the tension between Gwen and Arthur.

 Reviewer: Soul93 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 04:13 pm
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

Have been anticiating their meeting with bated breath. Hope things will come right between them. Poor Arthur doesn't she is being blackmailed into the marriage. But if Morgana had been gone for more than two years, it means they haven't seen each other for that long at least. Their love is strong

 Reviewer: gorgeousangel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2012 10:41 am
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

I left shades of muse looking for a update to this story. Please update soon, waiting patiently. Thank you.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2012 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

DIE MELWAS!  Why Gwen won't tell Arthur the truth?  They are in love so why allow secrets to tear them asunder?

One complaint:  not enough ARWEN! BAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

 

 Reviewer: darkbeauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2012 12:31 pm
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

OH my heart just hurts for all of them..

 Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 11:47 pm
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

They still have feelings for each other of course! Neither is that forgettable, lol. Great chapter, when is the next update???



Author's Response:

I'm hoping to update within two weeks. I usually update on the weekend but I'm getting my wisdom teeth taken out so I don't know how I'll feel :/ On the other hand, I'ma be lying on the couch a lot so it might be the perfect time to update xD

 

So glad you like the story! I agree, neither of them are easily forgotten ;)

 Reviewer: Elle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 11:24 am
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

I really love Arthur & Gwen...they are so hot together!  Please Gwen, tell Arthur (or at least Merlin) why you are really marrying the snake...

There's gotta be some way for my fave couple to be together for good...AG you've gotta make it happen:)  No pressure, of course:)

Can't wait to read more...you're an amazing writer...thank-you so much for sharing your gift...I, for one definitely appreciate it, and I know that sentiment is shared by many.

 



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much for your lovely, lovely review! Arwenites like yourself are the reason I keep writing <3

I'm glad you like the A/G chemistry too ;)

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 03:37 am
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

Oh no oh no oh no, Please don't let Melwas anywhere near Gwen or let him marry her !!! I will be a very unhappy bunny LOL :)

 

Brilliant story, so well written. I always look forward to your updates and can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! :)  I'm so glad you like the story. Isn't Melwas a sleazebag? I keep imagining the Duke from 'Moulin Rouge'   

 Reviewer: HabibiCat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 08:52 pm
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

Amazing chapter. Cant wait for more Arwen !



Author's Response:

Thank you! More ARWEN there shall be!

 Reviewer: rallitsa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 09:52 am
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

If Melwas thinks Arthur is going to allow him to steal his Guinevere he has another thing coming!

ARWEN scenes so depressing!  Tell Arthur your troubles, Gwen!  Don't throw away your chance at happiness all because of Melwas' threat!  Don't fear Melwas!



Author's Response:

"If Melwas thinks Arthur is going to allow him to steal his Guinevere he has another thing coming!"

Ha this line made me laugh. Yup Melwas has really underestimated team ARWEN  XD

 Reviewer: clarencestew14 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 07:14 am
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Gwen can't possibly think about marrying that filthy Melwas!  Melwas is probably responsible for all the innocent blood spilled in Eirinn!  It's the only way he could think of to possess Gwen and conquer Eirinn!

ARWEN shared their secrets and thoughts in Eirinn and held open communication!  Why not in Camelot?  Will Gwen inform Arthur why she agreed to the marriage?  What will Arthur do to impose obstacles to it from occurring and saving the woman he loves?  

The passion between ARWEN has never been extinguished and will triumph at the end! It's time Arthur showed Melwas who's the real man for Guinevere by driving a sword through that PERVERTED ANIMAL'S heart!

Has Gwen lost Morgana for good?  If so, she should be wary of her!  Where does Morgause has Mordred hidden?  

 



Author's Response:

As always Lara I LOVE your review! It warms my heart to see readers who are so engaged with the story :)

'It's time Arthur showed Melwas who's the real man for Guinevere by driving a sword through that PERVERTED ANIMAL'S heart!'

LOL! All in good time....

 Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 07:05 am
Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

How could Arthur think of her like that... What a pity full..hopefully, Arthur would see reasons. Anyways it's a great chapters.. Love it..



Author's Response:

Arthur is hurt so he's taking refuge in his ego, which is what his character's like I think. Thank you for your review!

 Reviewer: Tazmin Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 12 2012 04:04 am


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