Title: Chapter 5 "Of Flesh and Breath and Bone"

Arthur is a descendant of the Old Religion?  What about Gwen's maternal lineage?  This could mean they have more in common than they thought at first!  ARWEN ARE destined to be for each other and no one else!

Reviewer: clarencestew14 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2012 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 5 "Of Flesh and Breath and Bone"

Can't blame Arthur's disappointment in his father.  Did Uther really thought he could hide the truth from his own son?  Uther has been nothing more than a tyrannical and oppressive hypocrite who had gained enemies where he should have made friends with those who practiced magic!  He sought his own death when he slaughtered their kin!  

Arthur is quite romantic when he is open and frank with Guinevere!  Will ARWEN become more comfortable with their confidences to each other?  Will Arthur's love for Gwen withstand the temptation of the beautiful and charming Princess Mithian?  Is marriage the only solution to resolve land disputes?  Does Uther expects Arthur to marry every princess whenever the kingdom is in danger of going to war?  

Looking forward to ARWEN intimate moments and Melwas and Mithian better stay out of the way of their destined love!  Arthur better honor and cherish his love for Guinevere by NOT being overfriendly with Mithian!  

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2012 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 5 "Of Flesh and Breath and Bone"

Your updates make my day! Thank you!

Love the update. I loved Igraines background story and now Arthur's struggle with his "bloodline". I hope this comes back up in the story.

Melwas and now Mithian in the mix???? Ugh!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Melwas and Mithian (funny I just realized both their names start with M)...haha. I'm glad you liked the backstory I created for Arthur's bloodline, it's important for me that the OT4 are all connected to Avalon and the Old Religion in some way. I can't stand the magicphobic side of Arthur in the show. I mean, I understand it, but I really wish the show would allow his character to evolve more. Anyway, thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: sallysparrow3 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 04:53 pm

Title: Chapter 5 "Of Flesh and Breath and Bone"

We must be on the same schedule, haha. Great to see Guinevere and Merlin working together, I liked Merlin's hesitation about whether or not Uther should be saved,

Wonderful work pulling in Arthur's mother and establishing Ygraine's lineage as a link back to the founding of Avalon. And of course we are all waiting for those steamy scenes between Gwen and Arthur.

 



Author's Response:

Haha we must be :) Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you liked the Igraine connection: I really wish the show would delve into that some more **rolls eyes** Oh well. That's why we have fanfic ;)
As for steamy ARWEN scenes...hehehe **rubs hands together diabolically**

Reviewer: AGDoren Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 03:23 pm

Title: Chapter 5 "Of Flesh and Breath and Bone"

great story ,please get rid of melwas soon.

Reviewer: lailastar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 02:49 pm

Title: Chapter 5 "Of Flesh and Breath and Bone"

Wow! I really love your story. Please continue. Can't wait for the Steamy A/G scenes. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I look forward to writing those scenes XD

Reviewer: queengwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 01:15 pm

Title: Chapter 5 "Of Flesh and Breath and Bone"

I really like the way you presented Arthur being magic! Maybe it will finally change his outlook on the matter. I fear Morgana is no longer redeemable. More please!

Reviewer: Elle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 12:17 pm

Title: Chapter 5 "Of Flesh and Breath and Bone"

Like actually. this story is amazing. keep going. I just love it all and the slow development of arthrur and gwen is awesome but also the story is freaking amazing. The deteriotaion of Morgana and gwen. Gwen and Merlin BFFs. The foreshadowing of Melwas (can't wait for arthur to kick his ass). This is everything a story could hope for. You rock. Don't stop! 



Author's Response:

Awww thanks hun! That means a lot to me. I'm excited to get back on a more regular updating schedule too. Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: Poppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 07:11 am

Title: Chapter 5 "Of Flesh and Breath and Bone"

Short and sweet, Uther is still a cold bastard. Need a update soon. Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2012 06:40 am



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