Yay!!! PLease!!
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 10:55 pm
hell yeah more more much more pleasessss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 10:54 pm
More, Yay!!!! Loving this duo so far. Really interested in seeing them set off.
Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 09:59 pm
Love these two, they are hilarious! More please!!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 09:43 pm
Definitely more, I love Mari and Bear. The have me rolling, Bear is not the ass that I first thought that he was. They are both hot for each other, I can't wait for them to heat up the sheets.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 08:56 pm
OH God Scribe, I'm so hooked and I should be working...I know you said it was going to be short, but damn! I need more! more! More!!!!!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 08:55 pm
You make me feel like a greedy fat kid. Give me more lol
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 07:51 pm
mmhm.
more, please.
NOW!!!
::cracks whip::
watcha!
hop to it!
okay, sorry, got carried away.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 07:46 pm
oH, oH, oH! He's waiting for marriage. After that interaction, how is she going to change his mind? He hee! Can't wait for more. I'm loving this one. Tsk Tsk! Deflowering a devout Sunday School student. *Palms cheek* I see a lot of praying from Bear for strength coming up in his future... (Forgive me LORD, cuz I wanna sin!)
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 06:34 pm
Damn it... more Please ? This story is so good . :D
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 06:31 pm
you know whats needed? the next chapter!!! lmao! thanks for the quick post!!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 05:47 pm
okay.
humour? check.
shit-ton of conflict without unnecessary or labourous detail? check.
nuanced characters that you care about within a fraction of a sentence? check.
do i want more? CHECK CHECK CHECK!!!!
get to it, woman.
thanks, mgmt.
(yeah, i did it)
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 05:46 pm
tooo damn funny so bear is untouched whoo i love it even more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 05:29 pm
You know you are three layers deep in foul for leaving this here lol!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 02:07 pm
OMG Scribe! I am absolutely loving this one! LOL
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 12:49 pm
I'm a daughter of the Deep South, so whatever language you use, I've heard. Ahh, the fond memories *smirk*
I can tell I'm going to like this one. Waiting.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 09:42 am
I love it. Please continue
Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 06:45 am
alright my intrest is peeked more please!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 06:30 am
loving the rugged looking moutain man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 06:26 am
This is so good . You totally had me Tickled with Mari . She is a mess and I already like her. Can't wait to read more about her and Bear . :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 07 2012 06:08 am